The Green Fox Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Fox and Slippy had been sent on a dangerous reconnaissance mission on the planet Titania, their goal was to figure out what Dash's troops were up to. Dash had surpassed Andross as emperor of Venom and was deploying troops to occupy virtually every planet in the Lylat System. to be continued....perhaps any ideas toss em my way 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCPeppyTc Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 A plausible start, but far too little to go on. Write a little ( several paragraphs) more and I can give you more of feedback/ constructive praise or criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snys93 Posted November 22, 2012 Share Posted November 22, 2012 I liked the synopsis. You should do it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted November 22, 2012 Share Posted November 22, 2012 You've seriously gotta watch post-dates, Snes1993. :lock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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