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[russiandog38]

Warning, this is my first ever RP character.

Name: Jacob Hail

Age: unknown

Race: Fox

Height: 5'9

Weight: 155

Home Planet: Cerinia

Sex: male

Appearance: Gray fur color with a black strip going down his forehead and black on the tips of his tail and ears. Dark blue eyes with a purple glow and Cerinian accent. Medium build with more muscle upper body then lower. Multiple scars across his chest.

Personality: He keeps to himself and would rather sit back and watch instead of getting involved. He is cautious, observant, untrusting and will avoid conversation if he can help it. He doesn't get scared easily and also doesn't show that much emotion, but on a rare occasion a slight grin or smile may appear on his lips.

Background: Jacob grew up in a strict household. His father was enlisted in the Cerinian Defence Force and his mother was a doctor. When he was old enough, he followed in his fathers foot steps and joined the military where he quickly advanced through the ranks until he was in charge of a regament of soldiers. Do to Cerinias lack of technology, he had minimal firearms training and few flying lessons. In Cerinia's last days, him and his men fought the unknown invader, which ended more and more of his soldiers lives. He even lost his own life when a missile landed a few feet away from him. With shrapnel lodged inside his chest, he eventually bled out, but his body was recovered from reckage from the planet by a research team that was under orders and funding by Andross. His corpse was brought back to a research station and, after years of tests, he was brought back to life in a deep coma. But shortly after Andross died the laboratory was abandoned, leaving him behind in his medical state. He awoke from his coma, confused, dehydrated, and weak, with no sence of where he was at. As he searched the space station, he stumbled apon a Krazoa spirit that was used in his rebirth and freed it. He welcomed it into his body and the spirit gave him energy to finish his escape, which he did so by a ship in the hanger. He was eventually picked up by the merc team StarWolf, who gave him a temporary home in return for a favor. Unknown to Jacob though, the spirit he recovered was corrupt and refused to leave him. It can take over his body at random times and can mess with his thoughts.

Equipment: Blaster pistol, trench spike, Cerinian staff.

Clothing: (Combat) black, steel reinforced battle armor with titanium chest plate, a hooded black cloak covering it and combat boots. (Non Combat) plain black t-shirt, BDU pants, and combat boots.

Strengths: He is a good shot, very accurate with a firearm. He knows many hand to hand techniques and can keep his head in a battle, while also being quick to think and quick to act. Extreme physical fitness is also a bonus.

Weaknesses: Since the blast, his chest has become his most vulnerable area. Extreme chest cramps can render him usless for a period of time. He is not that good of a pilot, while he can maneuver a ship, he would not last long in a dog fight without help. Jacob also doesn't trust that many people, leaving him with few allies.
 

Edited May 24, 2013 by russiandog38

[russiandog38]

Also, sorry it's jumbled together. I'm doing this from my IPod.

[CrypticQuery]

The first thing I would recommend is to separate the categories; place them on their own line rather than putting everything together in a paragraph. For example;

Name: [insert name here]

[sPACE]

Species: [insert Species here]

[sPACE]

Bio : [insert background info here]

and so on. Take a look into some of the other character threads if you feel you need any more guidance, and don't hesitate to ask questions. The information is all there concerning your character, just tidying it up would make things easier to read.

Also, I've moved this thread to the "RP Characters" board; the main roleplaying board is for actual roleplay threads, not requests and not character sheets.

Also, sorry it's jumbled together. I'm doing this from my IPod.

Just as soon as I typed my message out, . When you do manage to get to a computer, it would be much appreciated to space things out. ^_^

[Gestalt]

I'm doing this from my IPod.

You sir, deserve a medal!

[russiandog38]

Name: Eli Holender

Age: 34

Sex: Male

Race: Horse

Height: 6'0

Weight: 220

Home Planet: Fichina

Apperance: Tan fur color with white mane and tail, white spot around right eye. Muscular build. Wears basic Cornerian Special Weapons and Tactics Team uniform ( looks like a SWAT uniform). Uses basic Cornerian blaster rifle and blaster pistol.

Background: Eli was born and grew up on Fichina. His mother died when he was at a young age and his father was always working or out drinking. With no parenting figure around, Eli learned to take care of a provide for himself. When he was old enough, he moved to Corneria to pursue a career in law enforcement. After years of training and hard work, he found himself as the squad leader of a well trained SWAT team. His team does missions that range from hostage situations to terrorist threats.

Skillset: Eli is strong but extremely slow. He is good at hand to hand combat and close range situations.

[russiandog38]

Name: Isabella Vasquez

Age: 32

Sex: female

Species: German Shepard

Home planet: Corneria

Hight: 5'7

Weight: 150

Appearance: Normal color and fur patterns of a German Shepard. Green eyes, Hispanic accent. On duty she wares a Conerian SWAT uniform.

Personality: Isabella is a kind person. She likes to help out when she can and talk people through problems. She has a good sence of humor and enjoys a good laugh, but is also serious when need be. She enjoys her job and considers her team family.

Background: Isabella grew up in Corneria City in a middle class family. In her childhood, she enjoyed meeting and talking to people and eventually learned to read body language and figure out how the mind works. In collage she earned a major in Psycology and a bachelors degree in law enforcement communications and technology. After collage, she began to look for a job and eventually found one with the Cornerian police department. After years of police training, she was put in SWAT team 6 lead by Eli Holender and became the teams communications officer and negotiator.

Equipment: Basic SWAT blaster pistol, combat knife.

Strengths: Isabella is a smooth talker. She can persuade or, at times, intimidat people into getting her way while countering any persuasion or intimidation by other people. She is a fast learner when it comes to technology and can figure out a machine in minutes. With being in a SWAT team, she is physically fit.

Weaknesses: Although she is physically fit she is not that strong. Since she is mainly involved in the communications part of the job, she doesn't see much action and is only a little help in combat.

[russiandog38]

Name: Ryan Moore

Age: 33

Sex: Male

Species: Panther

Home Planet: Corneria

Hight: 5'9

Weight: 173

Appearance: All black fur color, with white scar going down left cheek. When on duty he wears a black Cornarian SWAT uniform which bares a cross on the upper left sleeve.

Personality: Very religous. He prays before and after every mission and before every kill. He is also very quite. He wont talk unless it is important or it pertains to the mission. But if talked to he will give short simple answers.

Backround: Ryan started off as a regular sniper for the Cornerian Police Department. He was good at what he did and eventualy was able to upgrade to SWAT. He was put on SWAT team 6 led by Eli Holender where he acts as the teams sniper and infiltrator.

Equipment: SWAT sniper rifle, combat knife. Ryan also has a tactics headset and visor. This headset was made to help target enemys, show weak points in armor, and highlight special objectives and structures. It can also pick up movments and sound that normal scenses could not.

Skill Sets: With the headset and visor, he has good perception and knows what goes on around him. Being a feline, he naturaly has good reflexes and is sneaky. He can usually get past peole without them ever knowing he was there.

[russiandog38]

Name: Tera Collins

Age: 29

Sex: Female

Species: Raccoon

Homeplanet: Corneria

Heighth: 5'8

Weight: 154

Appearance: All the normal fur color and markings of a raccoon along with short black hair hair. On duty she wears a black SWAT uniform, with a SWAT helmet and combat boots. Off duty she wears black cargo pants and a black tshirt representing one of Corneria's screamo bands. She has a belly button piercing and two piercings on her left ear. 

Personality: Being a bit on the gothic side, Tera constantly wears black and listens to screamo and heavy metal bands. She likes to attend concerts and favors a shot of whiskey, getting a bit drunk every once in a while. Due to having abandonment issues, she doesn't like to be alone. She always has a friend or one of her teammates around her, trying to keep them close. She is a very outspoken person. If she thinks something is wrong or if there is something on her mind, she will speak up about it. 

Background: Tera grew up on the south side of Corneria city in a poor neighborhood. Her father was apart of a Cornerian gang and her mother was a drug addict. Her family lived in poor living conditions and, between the bills and her mothers addiction, they didnt have much money. Her father did what he could to get them by, becoming an enforcer for the Black Saints and doing numerous jobs for the gang. She loved her father, becoming very attached to him and seeing him as a hero. All seemed to go well until a rival gang decided to retaliate. When Tera was 14, her dad was killed in a drive by as he was walking down the street. With no more source of income her family fell apart. Her mother left her and her sister at their aunts house, feeling that she could no longer take care of them, then simply vanished. After that Tera became angry and depressed. She rebelled against her aunts religious teachings and vowed to take the gangs off the streets for good. When she became old enough she joined the Cornerian police department and patrolled the same streets she grew up on. She built up her career by making criminal arrests, many of which were gang members she hated so much. She made herself known in the department and eventually got a job offer to join a SWAT team, which she took gladly. As a new member she got placed as a spotter for the teams sniper Ryan Moore. She hated the cat at first, his religious views and overall antisocialness bothered her. But eventually she grew fond of him and found that he wasn't so bad once she got to know him. She became attached to him and he eventually replaced her father as the male figure in her life.

Equipment: Basic Cornerian assault rifle, Cornerian SWAT pistol, binoculars, assortment of flash bangs and gernades.

[russiandog38]

Name: Ashlin "Ash" Thorne

Age: 24

Sex: female

Species: Desert Fox

Homeplanet: Titania

Height: 5'9

Weight: 148

Profession: Sniper

Appearance: Light tan fur color, medium length brown hair usually tied back into a pony tail and green eyes.

Clothing: Wears loose desert camouflage cargo pants, a dark gray tanktop, and black lensed goggles on top of her head. She also as a small PDA strapped to her left wrist. 

Bio: Ashlin prefers the term "gun for hire" over mercenary,  but thats exatly what she is. Going where the money takes her, she completes jobs by taking the heads off targets from a comfortable distance. She enjoys the harsh desert climate she grew up in and has the proper knowledge of how to survive in it.

Weapons: Venomise sniper rifle with an 8 round clip, a standard Venomise handgun, and combat knife.