This girl's characters :3

[LadyMajora1024]

Okay, so I am SFC308, but for some reason, I cant access my account, so I made an alternate one. Aka this one. I am redoing my character profiles and will be showing exclusive art that I commissioned people over FA to draw for me. Enjoy .

 

Name:

• Star Marie Alexander

 

Species: 

• 3/4 Cerinian Vixen, 1/4 Arctic VIxen

 

Age:

• 21

 

Height:

• 5'2

 

Weight:

• 126 lbs.

 

Body Type:

• Slender

 

Fur Color:

• White
• Black Tips to the ears and tail.

 

Eye Color:

• Electric Purple.
• They turn colors according to her mood.
• When put under enough physical stress, she will go into a sort of Demonic Rage, making her eyes turn a deep Maroon. Her pupils also become reptilian-like slits until she is calmed, which makes her eye hue and her pupils go back to their original state.

 

Hair Color/Length:

• Jet Black with red tips to the bangs.
• Her hair is long enough to touch her mid back.

 

Personality:

• Kind and gentle towards her family and close friends. If she or her loved ones are threatened, she will become aggressive and will not hesitate to attack. When put under physical stress, she will become demon like. Her eyes and pupils will change and her claws and teeth will sharpen. Speed, strength, and agility will go up until she is calmed by someone close to her, which will allow her to return back to her normal state.

 

Family:

• Marital Status: Divorced
• Child: Kora Eliza Young
• Mother (Biological): Neuge Saria Alexander.
• Father (Biological): Otto James Alexander.
• Mother (Adoptive): Kara LeeAnn Oxender.
• Father (Adoptive): Arthur Michael Oxender.

 

Special Abilities/Markings:

• She has the Triforce of Wisdom on the back of her left hand.
• Goes into a Demon like state when put under physical stress.
• On her arms, lower back (right above her butt), and on her thighs, she has Cerinian markings, which are black like her mother's. Instead of the sun shape on her thigh like Krystal though, its a star made out of 5 triangles with a tiny dot in the middle.

 

Negativities: 

• -She tends to go after anything and anyone when going through one of her "Episodes" as people call them. Also, she goes in head first and doesn't think about anything before doing so.
• -She tends to have a hard time socializing with people. Usually gets somewhat annoyed with certain types of them. Males usually.
• -Although a huge techie, she has a hard time doing things when under stress. She will even sometimes quit when it becomes too much to handle.
• -She has quite a potty mouth on her at times.
• -At times, she can be very agressive when she feels threatened by others.
• -Since her eyes change color according to her mood, it's not really hard to tell if she's royally pissed off or not. 
• -Avid liar sometimes
• -Depression
• -Nightmares almost every night, which costs her sleep and she becomes very aggravated very easily

 

Skills:

• Marksman
• Archer
• Avionics technician
• Mechanic
• Singer
• Pianist
• Violinist.
• Hacker
• Can use a staff

 

Job status: Mechanic and Avionics Technician for Corneria's Navy

 

Military Rank: Petty Officer First Class

 

Bio:

 

Hyrule. The Second Twilight War;

• Age: Unborn.

 

     In the land of Hyrule, during the Second Twilight War, Ganon took the castle under seige, cornering the princess after slaughtering many of her guards on his way. He smirked evily as he ordered her to give up her piece of the Triforce. Under pressure, the princess used magic to transfer her piece to another dimension to avoid letting it fall into his grasp. Angry, Ganon took Zelda's life, unknown to where she sent it.

 

Corneria;

• Age: Newborn

 

    On June 18th, a 25 year old 3 quarters Cerinian and 1/4th Arctic vixen was rushed into the hospital, since she was in labor. After being rushed into her room for hours, she had finally given birth to her little girl, who was born with a strange mark upon the back of her left hand. The mother weakly smiled, a gleam in her ice blue eyes as she looked at her little girl, not knowing that it would be the last thing that she saw. An hour had passed and they had decided they needed a name for the young pup, and went through many names that were very common amongst the Cornerian Race, but had soon decided that they would name her "Star Marie Alexander". 

 

    Several hours had passed since Star was born, and everything had gone well.....at least until night fell. The young mother, Neuge later that night slipped into a coma, which Otto had many things to do with. You see, Otto hated the thought of having to spend his hard earned money on some, as he put it, "Bitch and her brat". He didn't even want to get Neuge pregnant in the first place, and claims it as a huge mistake. He decided to wait it out until he could "end their marriage" and finally get what he really wanted out of their bond; Money. So, about 10 minutes prior, he slipped a lethal ammount of Oxycontin into her drink to kill her and take the baby to sell it to a friend of a co-worker of his. The man he was looking to talk to was someone who took children in as test subjects for his company's new program and in return, paid handsomely for the individuals contribution to science.

 

    During the middle of the night, Otto snuck into the hospital and crept into the nursery, where he kidnapped his own child and drove off into the night.

 

Childhood Test Subject;

• Age: 4

    As a test subject, Star was put through mostly the same routine each day; woken up to get her vitals, put into a testing lab to test her mental ability, put into another room to test her physical strength and find her limitations, then brought into another room to eat and then go back to work. Although it seems normal and un-harmful, there was much more to it than just the simple daily routine. Their were many children in the facility who do the same things that Star does, but who are in much worse condition. The mental tests are done by strapping the child to a chair and if they answer the question wrong, they are shocked violently. The physical tests are for the children to violently maul one another and on some occasions, kill them. The food that they eat has random chemicals put into it and if the children have an allergic reaction, they are sent god knows where and never seen again.

 

    Their ways of life were barbaric and unhuman, forced to slaughter one another so they could return to their cells unharmed by their observers. These kids were also Genetically Mutated at young ages if they met the requirements. The scientists there were aiming to develop living, breathing, man slaughtering machines. Ones who have no remorse and can kill on command, but be unalarming and seem harmless to their enemies. What better way of doing that than making children into savages? One by one, children were taken there and some came back with heart wrenching mutations that were considered "accidents", and others had ones that were considered "successes", one of which, was done on 4 year old Star. The scientists conducted a surgery that would make the subjects eyesight 4x's as sharp as an Eagles, which was a great success, but had a minor side effect that would make the subject's eye color change as their moods did. They saw it as a phenomenon and continued to try it on other children, which some of them were successes, and others were blinded for life.

 

The Slaughter;

• Age: 7

    Several years after their new success, the faculty at the facility had discussed a new theory that could make or break their operation. They called it; Project D3M0N, or "The Rage Operation" as they called it. Basically, they found a sort of Bacteria that acted like "Mad Cow Disease" or as we know it "The Rage Virus", but it was different. When tested on small animals, they were put into a sort of blinding rage and killed several other animals that were housed in the same cage. No remorse, no hesitation, nothing. Just what they were looking for. Bringing in several of the children and giving them 2 shots of the virus and then putting them in the physical testing room showed them that it worked. They observed from the safety of their observation room that these kids had the same result; they mauled one another without a second thought, which made them grin with anticipation. Their years of research has finally paid off and they were going to build their own child army.

 

    Star was hauled in after a couple rounds of children beating the shit out of eachother to the point of near death and was given the injection as well. Unknown to the observers though, that was a mistake they shouldn't have made. Being placed into a room with another Subject, a young lupine, Star was seemingly not affected to the virus which made the scientists wonder what was going on. The young Lupine attacked young Star, who then was turned into something horrible. Her eyes turned Demon like, her pupils turning into reptilian slits. Her once violet eyes were now a deadly shade of blood red. Her claws and teeth became deadly and as sharp as razors, and she wanted only two things; Death and Revenge. Those two things were the only things running through her mind as she murderously ripped apart her attacker, then looking up to the window where her observers sat. She used the metal conduit on the wall as a ladder and climbed up to the window, breaking into it and killing each and every one of them.

 

    The alarm was sounded, which made Star look to a glass window and ran full speed into it, shattering the glass and plummeting into the forest below. Star used her new found ability to run from her abusers and killing any who caught up to her if necessary.

 

Life after the run;

• Age: 16

    9 long, rough years after her escape, Star has made it to the city of Corneria, but still isn't exactly safe. Since her escape, she has been hunted by bounty hunters hired by , including the famous Star Wolf. They weren't exactly happy about having to track down a mere 16 year old, but the job paid very handsomely and whatever job gets them a good sum of money, well, they would do. Though, their job was tough, seeing as Star never would stay in one place for to long for there was to big a risk of being identified and found. She used an alias wherever she went and always wore a disguise, which consisted of a pair of sunglasses over her eyes which she found at a local park on one of the benches, a sweatshirt she stole from a pedestrian, and a pair of jeans she found at a local thrift shop and stole.

 

Two months after her arrival to the city, she met a boy at a park. A young lion by the name of Leon Michael Young. She was sleeping in the Tube Slide when he spotted her and slowly walked over to her and gently shook her, causing her to awaken and knocked him to the ground, getting in a defensive stance. He quickly got to his feet and reassured her he was not going to harm her and was only wondering why she was here alone. He asked her if she had a family and she only looked at him with fear and sadness in her eyes, which made him frown. He questioned her about where her family was and about other things, all which were answered by expressions. No words escaped her lips. He then smiled and asked her if she wanted to maybe stay at his place. She opened her mouth to speak when 

 

Two month

 

Image references:

[sjrathbun812]

I've never really been into OCs/RPs, but I did read through your whole post.

 

First of all, a lot of this, to me, sounds cliché and unrealistic. Not to be harsh, but that's kind of how I saw it. Eyes changing color... lol, to be honest, I'VE written something like that before, so just to come clean. Not trying to be hypocritical. But do you know how many times you'll see that in a character? A LOT to be frank. Be careful that you don't add things to a character that makes him/her sound unoriginal/macho. I understand, though, that your character is this way because of an experiment and yada yada yada, so take this with a grain of salt.

 

Second of all, a triforce on the back of this chick's hand seems a little out of place. It makes her sound less original. I know she's a fanfiction character, but one thing that's really bad is when somebody makes an OC that's nearly identical to a cannon character, with just a few changes. You're character isn't quite like that, but keep an eye out for that sort of thing.

 

Also, regarding her having the triforce, it made more sense when I read through the bit about Zelda sending the triforce of wisdom to another dimension, but it wasn't elaborated on beyond that. I don't know if you'll explain it more further on in the story, though.

 

Side note: A plus for your organization and grammar. It's nice to see something that isn't messily written. That's to be expected, but there are a lot of people out there who don't follow basic writing rules.

 

As for the artwork, not bad for the artists who created them. I am more partial to the non-colored one, though. I think the anatomy in it looks better, and I just plain prefer the style of the two.

 

Keep in mind I'm giving honest feedback. I'm not saying any of it to be mean. I'm just trying to give constructive criticism, but know this: I encourage you to keep going! If it's something you like to do, then by all means, continue this!

 

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Brushing all that aside, Starfox Chick! Haven't seen you around here for a while. Nice to see a familiar face. Hope you're doing well and I wish you a good one, haha.

[LadyMajora1024]

Well hello to you too. Although you make some points, I'm still keeping her the way she is. I don't really care to take criticizm. I'm a huge zelda fan, and she's always had the color changing eyes since I first made her. Just so you and everyone knows; she is staying the way she is even with all your comments and such. I'm still trying to develop a good back story for her and such, but again, she isnt changing

[The Shaper]

I remember this character. If I recall, we actually almost killed her at one point. Good times.

[sjrathbun812]

Well hello to you too. Although you make some points, I'm still keeping her the way she is. I don't really care to take criticizm. I'm a huge zelda fan, and she's always had the color changing eyes since I first made her. Just so you and everyone knows; she is staying the way she is even with all your comments and such. I'm still trying to develop a good back story for her and such, but again, she isnt changing

 

Well, when most people post things, they do it for other people to see their work and comment on it. The fact that you don't take criticism is silly for two reasons. 1) Constructive criticism is a vital aspect of reaching improvement. If you don't heed it, then you're not taking what you do very seriously. 2) You can't post something expecting people not to judge your work. They're going to either tell you they like it or hate it for x y z reasons. If you don't want people to judge you're work, why did you show this? They will not give you feedback if you don't want it, so what's the point? You might as well keep your works to yourself because you don't have their attention.

 

I apologize if my previous post sounded forceful. I hope it didn't, but if it did, sorry about that. You don't have to do what I said, it's you're choice. Often times I tell people what I think about their stuff for their benefit. If, however, you don't my criticism, then I will not give you it, but rather respect your wish.

 

I remember this character. If I recall, we actually almost killed her at one point. Good times.

 

You... shouldn't make fun of someone else's work like that. It was a little funny, but at the same time blunt. Be mindful that it could hurt their feelings.

[Arashikage]

You... shouldn't make fun of someone else's work like that. It was a little funny, but at the same time blunt. Be mindful that it could hurt their feelings.

 

Unless he kind of knows her and how she would respond to a joke?

 

Besides, you're telling her how her character needs work and how silly it is that she's not going to listen to your criticism.  Everyone has the right not to change their stuff.  I make flaws known just to blow out hot air, if they take my criticism, then that's a bonus.

[The Shaper]

No need to worry, Wolf Fang. I was actually referring to an old RP that SFC took part in using this character awhile back, specifically a part where she sustained massive injuries due to my associates. No offense was intended nor was I making note of any sort of bad blood between us.

[sjrathbun812]

Unless he kind of knows her and how she would respond to a joke?

 

Besides, you're telling her how her character needs work and how silly it is that she's not going to listen to your criticism.  Everyone has the right not to change their stuff.  I make flaws known just to blow out hot air, if they take my criticism, then that's a bonus.

 

That's a possibility, but I highly doubt it. Things we say online aren't necessarily something we would say to somebody's face, and that's something to remember.

 

As for the rest of your post, that's not what I said. I didn't say it's silly that she won't take my criticism necessarily. I said it's silly that she won't take criticism in general for the reasons I already stated. (Note that she said, "I don't really care to take criticism," and "Just so you and everyone knows; she is staying the way she is even with all your comments and such." )

 

Also, I mentioned already that she didn't have to do what I said, and that it was her choice. In addition to that I said that if she doesn't want my criticism, I won't force it on her, but rather respect her wish.

[LadyMajora1024]

You can't post something expecting people not to judge your work. They're going to either tell you they like it or hate it for x y z reasons. If you don't want people to judge you're work, why did you show this? They will not give you feedback if you don't want it, so what's the point? You might as well keep your works to yourself because you don't have their attention.

Actually, I think I can, and this area is for RP characters, which doesn't mean that it automatically needs criticizm. Not every little thing does. I also DON'T take criticizm because I already KNOW I need to improve and dont need other people in my ear telling me things that I find aren't necissary to change. My character's physical aspects are none of anyone elses concern to want to change. That is for me to do alone.

I know you're respecting my wish, but critique in general isn't really affective. At least I dont find it affective. What one person finds wrong with something, another will find it right. It's mostly confusing and that's basically another reason why I ignore it.

[CrypticQuery]

Alright, let's end that discussion.  Constructive criticism was given, and the author of the character has expressed the fact that she is not open to criticism for whatever reason.  We could argue the basics of posting things on the internet all day and it won't get us anywhere; move along.

[LadyMajora1024]

Alright, another entry I guess. This one wont really have a backstory because I'm to lazy to write it. Anyway, here we go .

 

Name: Kora Eliza Young

 

Age: 5

 

Eye Color: Violet

 

Hair Color: Dark Brown.

 

Fur Color: Very light cream color. Can appear to be almost white.

 

Hair Style: She usually has her hair down since it is a pretty good length. Right down to her shoulders. It's very curly as well.

 

Personality: Kora is very shy around strangers and doesn't seem to talk very much at all. Overall she is a very sweet and innocent little girl. When it comes to her mother's blood rages, she can calm her down. Although people dont know why. Maybe its the connection between mother and daughter.Whatever it is though, it works.

 

Outfit: Kora is wearing a Navy Blue dress with shoulder straps that look like ones you would see on overalls. Underneath it, she is wearing a red turtle neck sweater. On her feet, she wears tan winter boots. She is also wearing glasses and a white knit winter hat on her head. No matter where she goes, she is always taking her stuffed Lion with her that she got from her father, which is wearing the Marine Corps. Dress Blues.

[LadyMajora1024]

New characters guys

 

Names: Solaa and Aalos

 

Nickname: "The Twins" or "Gemini"

 

Age: unknown, but they look about 17 or 18

 

Gender: Both Females

 

Species: One Winged Angeloid/Elvin

 

Eye Color:

 

Solaa- left blue, right red

 

Aalos-left red, right blue

 

Hair Color: Both Blonde

 

Skin Color: White

 

Birthday: unknown

 

Birthplace: unknown

 

Homeland: Corneria

 

Personalities: Solaa and Aalos are usually happy and positive. They are rarely ever seen upset, and when they are, it is because someone has harmed someone they consider close, or their master.

 

Back story: Solaa and Aalos have no memory what-so-ever of how they originally got to where they are now, but they were created with one purpose, which is to serve those who have adopted them into their care. As Angeloid's, they are created by someone from "the other world", as most people put it. They are then transported with the programming and the abilities to help those and need, and when finding the person suited to play the role as their "master", they are bonded with them by a chain and are not able to break that bond until told they can do so.

 

No orders can ever be denied or canceled.

 

Weapons: Both use swords that accord to their colors, which is red for Solaa and blue for Aalos

 

Images:

 

Solaa is on the left and Aalos is on the right

 

(made these two on a japanese character generator cuz I cant draw worth shit)