Domino Posted January 14, 2007 Share Posted January 14, 2007 --REAL WORLD-- (Meaning when your at you computer with your real identity) Nate is sitting at his computer doing stuff until he notices... Nate: What the? He has just logged in to his favorite site and finds out that he can get in to it... Nate: Alright! Now to just.......THE HECK?! He's computer moniter starts to twinkle and start to suck Nate into the screen Nate: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGG!!!!! --TRANSIT-- ????: AAAAHHHHH!!!!! -Don't be afraid- ????: Wha?!.........WHOA!......Why not? -I'll protect you- ????: ......Who are you....and who am I? -You know who I am......I'll give you a hint....starts with "M"- ????: M?.........then that means......*CRASH* --YOU HAVE ARIVED-- Domino: Damn those frilling scorge everyone get to the escape pods I'm getting to.....*CRASH* --INSIDE DOMINO's MIND-- ????: Shit what happend Domino: What?!....IDENTIFY YOURSELF NOW!! Nate: My name is Nate and you are? As soon as Domino heard the name he went on one knee and said: Domino: You are my creator!......But how? Nate: I must have been really into this story that I was once in......but now.....I think I in for real... Domino: .....Well somehow I feel like you and I are one.........hold on.... Domino activates his alchemy rings and says: Domino: Here hold my hands I think I know a way to merge our souls together....QUICKLY! Nate ruches over and grabs Domino's hands and they both disappear... --Outside Domino's mind-- SIR! Domino regains consciousness and shouts Domino: What?! Sir we have to go Domino: ......Alright Ranamon lets go! Domino and Ranamon head back to the hanger bay while it is still falling apart.. Domino: Get to your Prowler...Quick! Domino and Ranamon get to they're ships.... Domino: Ready! Ranamon: LUNCH! Domino: you mean Launch! Both ships blast out of the bay as they watch in horror the huge ship go down......and watch all the escape pods pop out of the ship Domino: I'll meet you back at the battleship Moya....I just have to go check on something Ranamon: Let me guess...Captain Mewfii? Domino: Ya there is something I want to ask her Ranamon: Or do to her...Right big boy? .........( ) Domino: Ah no... As the two ship leave each other --Domino's mind-- Now why do you want to see her? Nate: Well......Ranamon (I CAN'T BELEVE THEY ARE REAL!) was half right.......nothing nasty though Ok... Domino: This is commander John Cri... ..I mean Commander Domino requesting clearence to dock with B.S.M.O.Y.A.....Yo Pilot!...You there? Pilot: I read you commander...The docking on tier 3 is ready for your arival.. Domino: Thanks...(Nate: And?) Oh right can you tell me where Captain Mewfii is? Pilot: A moment......she is on the hologrid tier...shall I signal her? Domino: (Nate: No...surprize her) No thanks pilot but thanks anyway.. Pilot: You are welcome....docking net active...Welcome back. --After landing-- Domino heads for the H Tier and on the way --Domino's mind-- Nate: So whats she like? Domino: Mewfii? Oh well shes a tough cookie... Nate: She is huh...Powerful? Domino: Yep...she could beat me if she wanted to...but since me and her have a thing going well...just wait and see whats shes like when shes just training... Nate: Really? Domino: You better belive it! --Outside Holodeck Doors-- Domino: Computer is this deck active? Computer: [YES] Domino: Can I go in? Computer: [....YES] Domino: Thanks. Computer: [HAVE A NICE DAY] Domino: -Right - -Holodeck- Domino: Hmm (Nate: You see her....wait this place....... SUPER SMASH BROS!!!) What? (Nate: Is it 64, Melee, or..... BRAWL?!) ah...I'm not ??????: Shadow Ball! Domino: FRILL! *Dodge!*....WHEW..... (Nate: ) Both Domino and Nate: MEWFII! MewFii: *Charges Shadow Ball* THATS CAPTAIN MEWFII! *Throws Ball* SHADOW BALL! Domino: *Instent Transportation Dodge* Oh so thats how you want to play huh HHHHHHAAAAA *Super Saiyen Lev 1* Ok lets play! --Time passes-- (Watching Domino and Mewfii go at it on a screen) Ranamon: Man how long have they been playing? --Back in the holodeck-- Domino SSJ3: Hoh hoh hoh man I'm almost done..ha...ha....ha...hoo.... Mewfii + Digital armor (Looks like Mewtwo armor but a little bit more skimpyer and has guns on the arm and smaller helmet): Ha....ha....ha....ha...Well I'm just getting started (OOC: "ha....ha...ha..ha..." = not LOLing, breathing hard) A little more time fighing then Mewfii: *Twish* Power Rush! Domino SSJ3: Uh oh! Mewfii speeds towards Domino and tackles him into a roll! Mewfii on top: Ha! Give up? Domino on bottom: NEVER! Mewfii: Then..... ....wait! Mewfii backflips into the air and lands on the ground in front of Domino Mewfii: Somethings amise... Domino: Amise? Where? (Nate: Ah Domino...) Mewfii: THERE! Mewfii lifts Domino into the air and focuses... Mewfii:........... NATE?! Nate inside Domino: What up Mewfii?...heh heh.. hehhh Mewfii: What are you doing on this side of the demesions? Nate inside Domino: Not sure myself....I thought you whold know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domino Posted January 15, 2007 Author Share Posted January 15, 2007 Do you guys want to do this differently....like a comic or somthing, and lilics can work with the sprite animations? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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In my post, that is not my real age, I just did it for the RPG Back to top » Fox235 Captain Joined: 21 Feb 2006 Posts: 1044 Jobs: Unemployed Location: Northern Wastes of the Digital World. 1330.0 [ Donate ] Items Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:25 pm Post subject: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Human....then you may not have a rank.... _________________ Back to top » JadedSuperdude Guest Jobs: Unemployed 1.0 [ Donate ] Items Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:58 am Post subject: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Fox235 wrote: Human....then you may not have a rank.... Oh, right (Sorry) P.S. I was the guest who asked wehter that was brian peppers or not in the post "Oh s" he's back" post.) 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Back to top » Fox235 Captain Joined: 21 Feb 2006 Posts: 1044 Jobs: Unemployed Location: Northern Wastes of the Digital World. 1330.0 [ Donate ] Items Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:10 am Post subject: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sits down and waits.... _________________ Back to top » Black_Cat Captain Joined: 17 Mar 2006 Posts: 353 Jobs: Unemployed Location: Elfin Forest of No Return 3008159.0 [ Donate ] Items Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 9:31 pm Post subject: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Maxine walked past him and then stopped, "YOu see wlaking can get you places!" she gasped sarcasticly. Back to top » Nateo From SFO Private Joined: 11 Jan 2007 Posts: 25 Jobs: Unemployed Location: http://home.myspace.com/index.cfm? 0.0 Items Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:55 am Post subject: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ranamon: This area is dead....time to resuect it! Name: Ranamon (Not Rena') Age: Unknown with this race... Race: Renamon, BITE ME! Gender: Male (For sure!, no genders are usually herms) Hight: Over 7" Equipment: Anything pearl like...I'll think of something... Abilities: Instead of Diamonds, he uses Pearls and Rainbows Friends: Nate, Mewfii, Vent and Aile/ZX, Ranamon, Sabre (DP64...unrealeased), Guilmon, Rukario, Mewtwo, Tidus/Shuyin, Sora/Roxas.....and a bunch more.... Back to top » Nateo From SFO Private Joined: 11 Jan 2007 Posts: 25 Jobs: Unemployed Location: http://home.myspace.com/index.cfm? 0.0 Items Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 3:34 am Post subject: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Quote: Maxine watched as he went, "Whoo." she said and walked after him, "Loser." Maxine walked past him and then stopped, "YOu see wlaking can get you places!" she gasped sarcasticly. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ranamon: Need some help? Back to top » If you find any acceptable use policy violations, Please report it! 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Guest Poke-Jerk Posted January 17, 2007 Share Posted January 17, 2007 OMG!! How old R U? Do your parents know you are using their computer little guy? Next time you write a story try using sentences! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilacs Posted January 17, 2007 Share Posted January 17, 2007 Please don't be a Troll, it is not accepted here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XG Fox Posted January 17, 2007 Share Posted January 17, 2007 Poke-Jerk, mind being a little nicer? From what I see in Nateo's last post, it may not have been an official addition to his story. From what I CAN tell it's a copy and paste of multiple posts from some other forum that he's a member on, that may have to do with the story. Other than that I'm not too sure how it fits in with the story, and your comment about him using sentences was certainly not needed. Also, your name calling of "little guy" to Nateo was completely uncalled for. Oh, and since you're new, I'll introduce myself to you... I'm one of the 4 admins here, and I'm the one that really hates people that flame or troll the most, as I've seen way too much of it here in the past. Long story short, stay on my good side. My name's XG. P: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domino Posted January 17, 2007 Author Share Posted January 17, 2007 Thanks for the filter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Poke-Jerk Posted January 18, 2007 Share Posted January 18, 2007 What, I can't criticize crappy writing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilacs Posted January 18, 2007 Share Posted January 18, 2007 Yes you can but, the way you approch and insult the writer is not forgiveable. Poke-jek shape up or you will be banned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domino Posted January 18, 2007 Author Share Posted January 18, 2007 What, I can't criticize crappy writing? Don't can how you do it, it's fine that your just doing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XG Fox Posted January 18, 2007 Share Posted January 18, 2007 What, I can't criticize crappy writing? Criticizing writing with thought is one thing, however openly calling it crap is slandering it, and is entirely uncalled for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Poke-Jerk Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 OK, can we at least admit the story is hard to follow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domino Posted February 8, 2007 Author Share Posted February 8, 2007 OK, can we at least admit the story is hard to follow? You could of just said that nicely...and to begin with......someone delete this for now....I'm working in other RPGS right now.....this thread and the other one.....just the two that have "Domino" in the name.....I'll start this again later... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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