Ice Fox 111 Posted July 8, 2007 Share Posted July 8, 2007 This poem I wrote a while ago is in fact based off of another's fanfiction story. However, I think it can still be enjoyed without reading the source story (at least that's what the FF.Net reviews tell me). Cerulean by Ice Fox 111 --- Alone in the dungeon A figure stood tall True pain and suffering he brought to them all He’s free from the shackles, His mind’s a red blur, The blood of the guilty now soaks his fur He’s no longer hero, Yet evil he’s not His blackened corpse lies in the desert to rot. They took her away, The vixen in blue The savior who was there to steer his heart true The love of his life, But now she lies dead The horrors inflicted too much to be said. What used to be love Now fuels hatred blind, She’s constantly haunting his torture-torn mind She used to be omens of caring and kind But now just the thread from with which he unwinds. For now he’s the killer The darkness so deep Now he’s cursing all to eternal sleep The allies he screamed for They seemed not to care, For, sadly and cruelly, They were never there. His memories haunt him And erode his skin For now he does nothing but suffer and sin An enemy ruthless crawled back from within And when Fox laid his eyes on the Wolf that he saw He slowly realized that he would not win. The flames they devoured him And mercilessly killed, But with this mercy they finished his will He’ll finally see her She’ll finally return… But why must he always continue to burn? With eyes wide in horror he looked all around When he saw it he couldn’t believe what he’d found From above the flames and misery deep He saw the blue eyes that haunted his sleep He looked up at Krystal, toward whom he reached And slowly her blue eyes started to weep. --- What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PuffNStuff Posted July 8, 2007 Share Posted July 8, 2007 I got a tear in my eye, what is he source story for this? I must read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice Fox 111 Posted July 8, 2007 Author Share Posted July 8, 2007 "The Greatest Fear" by Fox the Cave II Good luck getting your hands on it, though...I'm one of about five people in the entire world with a copy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeWalker Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 The poem's nice. Too bad the fic isn't available. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARWINGCOMMANDER 3987 Posted November 4, 2007 Share Posted November 4, 2007 So sad. This is one of the sadist things I've ever read. Great job on this poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice Fox 111 Posted November 4, 2007 Author Share Posted November 4, 2007 Thank you, I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Fox Runner Posted November 5, 2007 Share Posted November 5, 2007 I really liked this. Really well written. If you got a copy of the story its based off of, why not put it up on a place like File-Den or something, post a link to it here, and be able to let us read it. Just a thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PuffNStuff Posted November 5, 2007 Share Posted November 5, 2007 Maybe I should.... >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice Fox 111 Posted November 5, 2007 Author Share Posted November 5, 2007 Simply because it's not my story to post, and same goes for Puff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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