Rogue Fox Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 Author's Note: Yep. It's time for one of my Krystal-related stories again. This time it features my character, Rogue Fox. Here it goes... ************************************************************* ROGUE FOX in KRYSTAL CLEAR Rogue sat in the cockpit of the Dauntless flying past Katina. It was a long day for him and he couldn't wait to return home to Corneria and crash until he gets another mission. As he flew by, he saw little explosions going off in the atmosphere above Katina. "Uh oh. Looks like trouble," Rogue said as he pondered whether he should go and help or keep on flying to Corneria. Rogue turned on his communicator and searched for any signals he recognized. Suddenly a voice crackled on the speaker saying, "Team. We can't let them get through the atmosphere. Everyone keep alert and don't let anyone through. Falco and Slippy will guard the left. Krystal and I will guard the right. Everyone let's move out." Rogue then said, "Hmm... Slippy? Falco? Those names sound familiar." Then he realized that they were a part of team Star Fox and the person on the communicator was none other than Fox McCloud. "Now I have to go help them, " Rogue said as he turned for Katina. As he approached the atmosphere he was thinking, "I recognize all of those names. But who is Krystal?" His thoughts were interrupted by a plane that flew by him. He looked and saw that the plane was not an Arwing, so he hammered on the "fire" button and instantly blew up the ship. He then continued heading towards Katina, blasting any enemy ship along his way. Finally when there were no more ships in his area he heard Fox say, "Look out everyone. There is a second wave heading towards the right. Krystal and I will hold them off while the rest of you fly over here for support. Got it?" "Got it. Slippy and I will be over there as soon as we can. Falco out." "Looks like we'll be here together for a while, eh Fox," a femal voice said. "Uh, yeah," Responded Fox who sounded a little shy towards his partner. "So Krystal is a girl," thought Rogue as he headed right where already explosions were going off. He came just in time to see a giant warship come into view. It was red and had four massive cannons on it. "That must be the thing leading the assault," Fox said. "Alright. Let's take it out." Krystal's ship immediately flew past a cluster of ships leading them away from the war ship. Slippy and Falco Arrived and began blasting the cannons with Fox. They already had two destroyed when Krystal voiced in saying, "Ah! There's too many ships. I need backup." Rogue immediately locked on to Krystal's ship and followed it blasting all the enemy ships as it passed by. After several passes, Krystal's engines caught fire. "Oh no," she said, "I can't contol my ship! I'm going to crash on Katina. Fox, help!" Her plane then began to spin out of control as it plummeted towards Katina. Rogue followed after her, blasting the remaining ships. He heard Fox say, "Krystal? Krystal! No!" "What should we do Fox," Slippy asked. "We have to destroy this war ship first and any other little ships. Then we can go look for her." "I hope she's all right," said Slippy. "I hope so too," said Fox, "I hope so too." Rogue continued to follow the signal as Krystal's ship disappeared through the clouds. "Whoever this Krystal is," Rogue said, "I have to help her. Team Star Fox depends on me. Fox McCloud depends on me. Hang on Krystal! Rogue Fox ois coming to save you!" Rogue disappeared through the clouds, on yet another mission. ************************************************************* To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inuyasha Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 Cool. You've got good writing skills, I can see, and this thing sounds REALLY good so far. Great intro. Just a little pointer--don't refer to spaceships like arwings as planes. Ships make more sense-perhaps even mentioning the same object as a spaceship and then a ship later on would get rid of any miscommunication of people thinking that you're flying ships around or something.... Planes just doesn't make as much sense, I don't think.... But aside from that, I really see nothing wrong with this, and I can't wait for the next chapter. -Inuyasha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galactic Jaguar Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 Cool. You've got good writing skills, I can see, and this thing sounds REALLY good so far. Great intro. Just a little pointer--don't refer to spaceships like arwings as planes. Ships make more sense-perhaps even mentioning the same object as a spaceship and then a ship later on would get rid of any miscommunication of people thinking that you're flying ships around or something.... Planes just doesn't make as much sense, I don't think.... But aside from that, I really see nothing wrong with this, and I can't wait for the next chapter. -Inuyasha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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