SAW 6.5 (Warning, Graphic Violence, Swearing)

[rainfyre66]

Another awesome chapter, and it made a good point about the state of the rest of the world. I can't wait to see what's next, like FoXXX said, i think these are better than the Saw movies!

[Asper Sarnoff]

I've actually yet to watch any of the movies. Are they any good?

Great chapter btw Julius!

[Guest Julius Quasar]

Another awesome chapter, and it made a good point about the state of the rest of the world. I can't wait to see what's next, like FoXXX said, i think these are better than the Saw movies!

Thank you!

I've actually yet to watch any of the movies. Are they any good?

Great chapter btw Julius!

They are!  See 'em all in chronological order!

thanks, btw!

[Sableye]

Im  writing a sequel of the first story i just wrote(don't worry ill post of them up here)

no it's not a scary story, but i as made from my Insanity

[rainfyre66]

Im  writing a sequel of the first story i just wrote(don't worry ill post of them up here)

no it's not a scary story, but i as made from my Insanity

Just a friendly word of wise that normally, it's proper etiquette to at least comment on the poster's work before plugging your own works, or if you have something that you are working on and want to let people know, you should make your own specific post for it.

[Guest Julius Quasar]

Just a friendly word of wise that normally, it's proper etiquette to at least comment on the poster's work before plugging your own works, or if you have something that you are working on and want to let people know, you should make your own specific post for it.

thank you rainfyre66!

[Guest Julius Quasar]

CHAPTER 8

....in that envelope was the key with the #28 tag, and a flier for a magic show in the theater of the amusement park.  I headed there immediately.

I ran past more rows of dog cages, the snarling, angry, barking beasts trying to escape their cages.  I saw the timer counting down.  15 minutes to go!  I had to hurry! 

I entered the theater.  The doors slammed shut and locked behind me, and in the "ticket booth", in the vestibule of the theater, a jigsaw dummy started to speak to me.

"HELLO, JULIUS!  THIS IS THE LAST PART OF YOUR TEST.  I HOPE YOU SAVED ALL THE NUMBERED KEY TAGS, FOR THEY ARE IMPORTANT!  THE SAFE ON STAGE HOLDS THE KEY TO YOUR FREEDOM, AND YOUR SAFETY!  BUT YOU HAVE JUST 3 MINUTES, BEFORE THE SHRAPNEL AND NAIL BOMBS IN THE ROOM MAKE YOU GO OUT WITH A BANG!"

I saw the theater alcove light up, and the doors ahead of me open, and I saw several nail and shrapnel bombs hanging on wires throughout the theater vestibule and the auditorium in the next room.  The red stage curtains parted, and I saw more nail bombs sitting on stage, and a huge clock, the analogue dial resembling a stop watch, and it was counting down from 3 minutes! there was a big safe, resembling a magician's safe, in the center of the stage, with two mannequins dressed in "showgirl" outfits, wearing the leotards, bustles, and feathered headdresses, along with heeled dance shoes, and glittery makeup clad faces, their glassy eyes staring blankly at the audience.

There were nail bombs in every other seat of the auditorium.  I ran up to the stage, and took all the numbered key tags from my pockets.  29. 66. 30. 77. 15. 28. 5. 0.

I opened the safe, and saw a large metal key, with an "A" on its round top.  I climbed into the safe, and shut the door gently behind me, making sure the door didn't catch shut and trap me in the safe.

I heard a ringing noise, and then:

BOOM!

The nail and shrapnel bombs detonated, raining broken glass from the jars they were made from, rusty nails, shrapnel, BB's, and more. They rained all over the theater and the theater entry vestibule.  After it all stopped, I exited the safe, and saw the mess left behind. The showgirl mannequins were destroyed, the safe was horribly scratched and scraped up.  Man, I'd hate to think what would happen if I had failed this part of the test!  I realized I still held the key in my hand, and the theater's front doors opened, and I ran outside past the barking dogs.  5 minutes to go!

I ran to the front gate, with...1 minute left!  There was barbed and razor wire all over the front gate exit and entry ways, so I couldn't climb out, or climb at all, since they wanted the dogs to maul me when they were released.  Speaking of which, the dogs barked and snarled, their cages were all around me at the front entrance.  Someone had painted the words "NO" in big red paint next to the word "EXIT".

I ran to the only gate that wasn't locked shut with a combination padlock, and used my key. 

I got the gate unlocked!

I escaped with 30 seconds left on the clock.

I heard a loud buzzing noise, and I turned to see 2 large metal shutters slam shut over the gate I just exited.  I also heard the dog cages opening, and the dogs barking, growling, snarling, and escaping their cages.  I made it! 

But it wasn't over yet!

*that's it for this chapter*

[Guest Julius Quasar]

CHAPTER 9

A huge cloud of fog, from hidden fog machines all around the park entrance.  Out of that cloud stepped several people, forming a semi circle around me, blocking me from escaping.  Half of them wore pig soldier masks and robes, the other half wore Billy the Jigsaw Dummy tuxedos, wigs, and masks.  They all held gas powered chainsaws.

They started the saws up, and advanced on me.  I reached for my gun out of instinct, but then I realized and remembered, I had no ammo.  One of the pig soldiers reached into their pockets, and held up the baggie of my handgun ammo, waving it before me, mockingly before pocketing it again and as they all came closer to me, I stood, not moving, not showing any fear.

"Bring it on, bitches!" I yelled.  I heard laughter, and they turned off the chainsaws.  I then realized the saws had no chains on their blades.  Huh?  The pig soldiers and dummies all applauded, suddenly.  "He did it!" someone said.  "I told you he could do it!" someone else said.  They all took off their masks.

"Congratulations, Julius!".  It was Jerry, from the pizza parlor!  He was one of the dummies.  "You did it!" Detective Novelle said, as she removed her pig soldier mask.  She kissed my cheek and giggled.  "AAAh, damn, he's...he...did it, all right..." Sargent Nostra sighed, and smiled at me.  "Way to go, squirt!" said Officer Ericsson.   

"W-w-w-what's going on here?" I asked.  "Some detective you are, it's the 'Cult of Jigsaw!'  You're our newest member!" said Detective Noevelle, as she handed me my ammunition in the baggie she had, back to me...

***

I was now in our secret headquarters (for the Seattle chapter) of The Cult of Jigsaw.  I got to be a Dummy, Billy the dummy. I'd probably have preferred the Pig Soldier, but the Dummy outfit was okay.  Every member had to be either the Pig Soldier or Billy the Dummy, to be decided by the cult beforehand.

I stood before the altar, there was John "Jigsaw" Kramer's portrait behind it, and to the right was the shrine of Amanda Young, all the headquarters for all the chapters of the cult had both a big picture of John Kramer and a big picture over a shrine to Amanda Young, to the right of John's picture over the altar (as you face the alter with John's picture over it).

"....and finally, do you swear to uphold the true teachings of John Kramer?" I was asked by our chapter leader.

"YES.  Everyone deserves a chance." I replied.

"Good!  That was exactly what I wanted for your answer!  Welcome, Julius Quasar, to The Cult of Jigsaw!"

I decided to join the cult.  I didn't want to pass up this opportunity.  Besides, there would be no good to come from tattling to the authorities, and that's why they even bothered to test me in the first place.

After my being sworn in, we sat through the meeting. We talked abut new contraptions to try, John's sayings that had never heard before, and how we were going to find and punish a certain police lieutenant who abused his power, and insulted John's memory and teachings, and how we should NEVER stray down that path.  I heard that John's wife was definitely a member, in fact, she was one of the top ruling "Council of Elders", which made sense.

After the meeting, I got into the car with Detective Noevelle, who insisted on driving me to this meeting, and back home...As we headed through the dark, rainy night, we talked.  "I noticed the guys on the force are being nice to me now, as are you." I said.  "Well, you earned their respect, along with mine.  Jerry from the pizza parlor, he's been ecstatic over your passing that test.  We all went through tests like you did, not all of them at the amusement park, that's only one of many 'proving grounds', and even at that park, not everyone always goes through the same rides that you did...You were the first one to do that 'safe on stage' thing, with all those nail bombs in the theater, I thought of that for you.  I'm glad you were smart enough to hold on to those keys...".

I smiled.  "What about those dogs?  Where did you get them all?" I asked.  "Oh!  The dogs? Hah! Those are the K-9 units, we didn't really abuse the dogs...also, we just moved the cages around the park, you didn't see the wheels on the bottoms of the cages, did you?  We wanted it to look like there were more dogs in the park than there really were.  We moved them around , secretly following you.  The dogs were trained to attack you, but not us..." Detective Noevelle put her hand on my thigh..."I'm glad you survived." she said.  We pulled up in front of my house, and she gave me a kiss on the lips.  "By the way, I really do like you, Julius...I, along with Jerry, wanted you to be part of something greater, Jerry, your local best friend, and me..."

"My girlfriend?" I asked.  "Well...in time, yes...for now, though, we'll hope for the best, but expect the worst, the worst being we're just very good friends..." she smiled at me.  "Cool...thanks Detective Noevelle." I said.  "Call me Tiffany..." she said.  "Right...thanks Tiffany." I said.  "Hey, Julius, wait!  Tomorrow, this will be your first Jigsaw assignment, Jerry, Officer Ericcson, Sergeant Nostra, and I want you to come with us..there's a couple of jerks who need to be taught a lesson.."  "I'll be there..." I said.

I went into my home...I felt sick that she shot me down....but...at least there might be a chance with her someday...

*that's it for this chapter*

[Guest Julius Quasar]

Chapter 10

Rod woke up in a dark room, a strange device strapped to his head, a flexible steel braided vinyl coated cable wrapped around the top of his head.  A TV monitor came on.  A ghoulish ventriloquist dummy appeared on screen.

"HELLO, ROD!  I WANNA PLAY A GAME.  YOU'VE SPENT YOUR LIFE, PUTTING THE SQUEEZE TO OTHERS.  NOW, THE TABLES HAVE TURNED!  AS A FORMER PUBLIC SERVANT, YOU HAVE GROSSLY ABUSED YOUR POSITION OF AUTHORITY, TO EXTORT FROM OTHERS.  YOU MAY HAVE BEEN UNSEATED, BUT YOU STILL MUST ANSWER FOR YOUR SINS!

THE DEVICE AROUND YOUR HEAD, WILL TIGHTEN, AND EVENTUALLY CRUSH YOUR SKULL.  THE KEY TO YOUR FREEDOM LIES AT THE BOTTOM OF THE AQUARIUM IN FRONT OF YOU.  THERE IS SALT, RAZOR WIRE, AND OTHER SHARP, PAINFUL THINGS YOU MUST DIG THROUGH TO GET TO THE BOTTOM, TO FIND THAT KEY.  DON'T BOTHER DUMPING THE TANK, IT'S BOLTED TO THE TABLE, THE TABLE IS BOLTED TO THE FLOOR!

YOU MUST MUTILATE AND DESTROY THE VERY HANDS WHICH HAVE ROBBED, WITH A FOUNTAIN PEN, MANY INNOCENT PEOPLE OF MONEY, BASIC HUMAN RIGHTS,  AND MORE.  HOW MUCH BLOOD ARE YOU WILLING TO SHED, ROD?  WILL YOU GIVE UP THE HANDS YOU SO OFTEN USED, AND STILL TRY TO USE?  YOU HAVE 60 SECONDS TO DECIDE, ROD, OR YOUR FATE IS SEALED.  THE CHOICE IS YOURS.  LIVE OR DIE.  MAKE YOUR CHOICE!"

The screen went to static, as the ghoulish laugh of Billy the Jigsaw Dummy was heard, and the screen went dark.  Rod stood up from the chair he sat in, and as he made his way across the room, the pin in the device on his head pulled out, as the wire it was attached to was stretched taut, and the other end then wound quickly up into a tiny spool in the upper corner of the room.  The mechanical timer ticked furiously.

"AAH!" Rod screamed when he realized this, and dug through the aquarium.  The razor wire, shrapnel, nails, and busted glass fragments gut his hands, and the salt stung his cuts as he screamed in pain.  His hands were mutilated.  By the time he found the key, he could barely work it into the keyhole in the release mechanism.  *DING*

Too late!

The cables tightened, and crushed Rod's ugly, stupid head.

***

Kristin woke up, sitting on an old lawn chair in an abandoned tool shed.  She had a hammer on the floor next to her, and her feet were nailed into the floor.  There were containers of nitro glycerin surrounding her in that shed.  A TV monitor came on as she awoke.  Billy the Dummy appeared on screen, first laughing, then he said:

"HELLO KRISTIN.  I WANNA PLAY A GAME.  JUST LIKE YOU ALWAYS PLAY GAMES WITH OTHERS.  YOU STEP ON OTHERS, CLIMBING ON THEM, TO GET WHAT YOU WANT. YOUR EGO IS BLOATED AND OUT OF CONTROL.  YOU ARE DEAD ON THE INSIDE, BUT I'M GIVING YOU  A CHANCE TO BECOME REBORN...YOU ARE A TERRIBLE CLUB PROMOTER, AN EVEN WORSE DJ, A NO TALENT HACK, AND AN EMBARRASSMENT TO THE SUB-CULTURE YOU ARE A PART OF.  YOU ARE ALSO A SNOB, AND AN EGOMANIAC."

AS YOU HAVE STEPPED ON OTHERS, KARMA NOW PLAYS A FACTOR...THE HUMAN SKELETON HAS APPROXIMATELY 206 SEPARATE BONES, ONE FORTH OF THOSE ARE IN THE FEET.  THAT'S RIGHT. NOW, THE NAILS IN YOUR FEET, ARE HOLDING YOU TO THE FLOOR.  DON'T WORRY, NONE OF THE NAILS WENT DIRECTLY THROUGH THE BONES.  THE BONES OF THE HUMAN FEET ARE AMAZING, WITH THE WAY THEY'RE SET UP.  ALL YOU HAVE TO DO, IS USE THE HAMMER PROVIDED TO PULL THEM OUT, AND YOU'LL BE FREE.  YOU MUST HURRY, THOUGH, FOR YOU ONLY HAVE 3 MINUTES.

THE CHOICE IS YOURS.  LIVE OR DIE.  MAKE YOUR CHOICE." 

Billy's laughter was heard again, then the screen went to static, then dark.

Kristen screamed in horror, for at least a minute, realizing what she had to do.  Not a wise use of time.  Kristen pulled on the carpenter's nail that held her foot to the floor. Each of her feet had only one large carpenter's nail holding it in place.  But the pain associated with pulling it out, when it was nailed so deep into the floor....Ouch!  Kristan struggled, and after a minute and a half, had on foot free, but the nail was still though her foot.  She then tried to remove the other nail.  But it was too painful!  She finally got the other nail free.  but she had 3 seconds left on the clock.

BOOM!

The tool shed exploded, with Kristen still in it.  She did not get out in time.

*THE END(?)*

[Guest FoXXX]

Lols, nice :)

[Guest Julius Quasar]

Thank you!

I would like to personally thank

Rainfyre66

Asper Sarnoff

FoXXX

for reading and commenting on my story.  I appreciate your time and feedback on this.

I also wanna thank Universal Studios, Lionsgate Films, Twisted Pictures, the creators of the SAW series, and my friend Johnathan and his mom for taking me with them to Universal Studios Hollywood during the Halloween Fright Night, which inspired me to write this story.

Thank you for reading, I hope you had fun.

This is also dedicated to the memory of my dear friend,

the late Belinda Bach. 

Rest in peace, I love you, and miss you.

[Asper Sarnoff]

Good work Julius. :yes:

[Guest Julius Quasar]

Good work Julius.

Thanks! (I love that audience image you put in, btw!) :yes:

[rainfyre66]

Woo-hoo, that was crazy fun! Love the ending! Your stories never fail to entertain, Julius!  :yes: :yes:

[Guest Julius Quasar]

Woo-hoo, that was crazy fun! Love the ending! Your stories never fail to entertain, Julius!  :yes:

Thanks!  I appreciate it. 

At least at our "Cult of Jigsaw" meetings, we don't just simply "Get drunk and play ping pong ball" all night.  (I should've put that in the last chapter)