Velocity Posted February 21, 2010 Share Posted February 21, 2010 E-PIKE!good story line, very understandable.Over all very nice performance. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted February 21, 2010 Share Posted February 21, 2010 :YEAH HOW DO YOU LIKE SOME LIGHTNING PAW POWER YOU WEAKLING TANKS!!! *kicks over toy tank pretending she's her battloid.*Ha ha, good one, Akasha!ha ha ha this is just EPIC!!!!, James helping fox, and and and oh I'm speechless,just amazing Bravo!! my friend.thanks, dude!Man... I CAN NOT BELIEVE I MISSED THIS FOR SO LONG!!! Then I... ...Must have 'dummy' writen in the back of my head. ...Play CS and I am killed by the hostages for saving terrorists. ...Play Freespace and my wingmen get all the medals and I stink. ...FAIL TO DO A BARREL ROLL!!---That aside, You really =_°ROCK_°= man !The best fanfic I have ever seen, er, read!aw thanks! it's okay, I've missed some fanfics too.E-PIKE!good story line, very understandable.Over all very nice performance. :D cool, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 Chapter 25Things were quiet on the Galatae, on the way back. We fixed up the fighter vessels, making all necessary repairs and such. We had talked about James, Akasha, Kylie, and Krystal, were especially excited about seeing him. Wolf contacted us, leaving a message saying "Hey pup! Glad to see you're alive! We've paid back our debt to Julius for saving us from jail, or being killed by police fire. But don't think this changes anything between us! I'm glad we could help you take out 'The Sons Of Bitches' motorcycle gang, but remember: 'If anyone's gonna tan your hide, it's gonna be me!', got it? See ya' around! As for that 'James' business, I dunno what to say about that, except for the fact you shouldn't spend your life in the past, chasing its ghosts...you need to live for now and the future, especially for now. Just a bit of free advice."We agreed he made sense on that last part of his message. Fox was in charge of the team now, not James. And that's that. Whether we see him again or not, we'll always be glad to see him, and to receive his help, but we can't constantly obsess over him, and his..."appearances" and disappearances.Whether he's truly alive or not, it doesn't matter now. It is what it is. James is what he is. "I'll always remember him, and how great he is." said Todd. "Me too." said Todd. "As will I, even though we only met in person twice." I said. "I've met him before..." said Misty. We all turned to her. "WHAT!?" we said.Misty explained. She had met James back at McCloud Ranch, she had thought it was just a dream. It was the day after I was sent away to exile on Venom, for stealing those warheads. Misty had been secretly planning to sneak over to Venom, and spring me. She had a bio suit, her ship, and some special equipment to remove the tracking device from my ankle, without alerting the authorities. She had hidden the equipment, and gone to bed, planning to wake up VERY early and sneak out. When she shut off her alarm clock that morning, James was standing there in her room. He told her not put her life in danger, or to get herself in trouble with the law, trying to free me. He also said that I did what I did to protect her. Somehow he knew what I had been up to that had gotten me arrested, and that he would check up on me. James made Misty swear that she wouldn't do something as reckless as trying to free me from my Venom prison. He then left the Ranch without making any noise.Lola had met James before the Lylat wars. But she had also encountered him before, when after she and Todd and broken up, but much later on, Lola wanted to get back together with Todd, she slept in her dressing room at Madame Vulpine's theater on Zoness, when James had visited her there, warning her that Todd was accepting a dangerous mission on Sauria.James had told Lola if she wanted to redeem herself with Todd, she should go there to protect him. And she did. Fox had told us about the tunnels of Andross' palace on Venom, the underground maze well's message on Sauria, and admitting to seeing James more times than that as well.Todd admitted to seeing James many, many times. "He said I needed the most help, though as I've improved over time, I see him less and less....but it's cool, I'm grateful for all his help, past, present, and future." We all chatted a while about James. Krystal, Kylie, Tigress, even Madame Vulpine couldn't understand why they didn't see James.Conrad then realized it, and told us. "James comes to those who need his help, someone who needs redemption, or something like that. It doesn't take psychic powers to see him. Krystal, Madame Vulpine, Tigress, Kylie, they never needed to earn redemption, like Lola, Todd, and Julius. They didn't need help like Misty, and Fox. Fox was in serious peril, and Misty was going to either put her life, health, and safety at risk, since Venom is such a dangerous place to visit, or throw her good name away by getting in trouble with the law, all from trying to free Julius."We all agreed."Sounds like dad..." said Fox, quietly. Later, I asked Misty "You really tried to free me!? Thanks!" I said. "I would've, but James talked out of it. He threatened to lock me up, if I didn't swear to him I wouldn't go after you. He also said he would look after you, so I wouldn't have to." she said to me. I carried Misty princess style to our room on the Galatae. "I love you, Misty!" I said to her. "And I love you, Julius!" she said. We went into our room, and made love the rest of the trip home...***Back at McCloud Ranch, we all got cleaned up, and put our gear and vessels away. Fox called us for an announcement."Everyone! Listen up! I got a surprise for you all! We're going on a vacation, to Cape Claw, planet Sauria! A beach trip is just what we need!"We all cheered."So get ready, get packed, and meet back here in an hour!" said Fox, and we all did just that.We were now on Cape Claw's beautiful beaches, relaxing. We were staying either at Krystal's cabin, or Todd and Lola's cottage, or in the Galatae, which was dry docked near the beach. It had felt good to be back, but it felt just as good to be on break, if only for a while. Once our vacation was over, we'd definitely hope to see more action, more missions, more adventures.*THE END**This music score plays at the end of the story:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xLAEtcf7yXAAce Combat 5, "Razgriz"* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DRL Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 That is James. Nobody knows if he is really dead or alive, but he is certainly helpfull when he appears... Really Good story, by the way. And hope you enjoy your vacation, you all earned it . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 THANK YOU ALL FOR READING THIS STORY!I hope you enjoyed reading it as I did writing it!I'd like to also thank:Kursed, for letting me use her fan characters, for the specs and photos of the Galatae and the Aritech fighters and for reading/commenting on this storyEvilwaffles for reading/commenting on the story, and letting me use the "Reece Kilza was here" graffiti on my wall (referring to his FC)FoXXX caat01 rainfyre66 Asper Sarnoff (especially for that birthday gift drawing!)Starfox mccloud15DRLThe Green FoxtylerVydrachArwingLanding . com for the pictures of the bossesThe Warsaw Philharmonic along with Ace Combat 5 for that "Razgriz" music scoreThe Hitman Series for inspiring much of the missions in this storyFX Network and its "Sons Of Anarchy" show, which inspired me to create the "Sons Of Bitches" Motorcycle Club The creators/owners of Star Fox and its series.Star Fox Online . net and its owners/creators for giving me the ability to post this fanfic here.Kylie Minogue, for wearing that showgirl costume, and performing in it on that tour.Wikipedia for that picture of Kylie MinogueJoe Mantegna for playing the part of Fat Tony the mobster from The Simpsons"An American Tail" for the "Don Tabbiloni" mafia cat characterBrad Garret for his deep voice, inspiring Joey Foxglove's existenceDavid L. Landir for his voice, which inspired Danny Foxglove's existenceThe designers/builders of the Eastern Columbia Lofts Building down in L.A., and an art deco style house in my neighborhood, both inspirations for the design of my new house in this story.If there's anyone else I forgot to mention, I'm sorry, I'll update this to acknowledge you as well, and I thank you in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DRL Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 No, I do mean it. It was [glow=blue,2,300][shadow=blue,left]AWEsome[/shadow][/glow]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velocity Posted February 23, 2010 Share Posted February 23, 2010 well played out if you were to actualy publish this you would of proabably had to of written it over again twice(as that is the minimum for all story writers)and it would of been purrrfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest FoXXX Posted February 23, 2010 Share Posted February 23, 2010 Just finished it, this is an awesome story, Julius, good job :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kursed Posted February 23, 2010 Share Posted February 23, 2010 Always happy to help Julius if you need a updated picture of the galtae tell me I moved those pics for easier acces to my photos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted February 24, 2010 Share Posted February 24, 2010 No, I do mean it. It was [glow=blue,2,300][shadow=blue,left]AWEsome[/shadow][/glow].Thanks, dude! well played out if you were to actualy publish this you would of proabably had to of written it over again twice(as that is the minimum for all story writers)and it would of been purrrfect!Very true, thanks!Just finished it, this is an awesome story, Julius, good job Thanks dude! Always happy to help Julius if you need a updated picture of the galtae tell me I moved those pics for easier acces to my photosThank you! I appreciate that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kursed Posted February 24, 2010 Share Posted February 24, 2010 http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeBottom.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/Galataeback.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeSide.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/Galataetop.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeFront.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted February 24, 2010 Share Posted February 24, 2010 http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeBottom.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/Galataeback.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeSide.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/Galataetop.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeFront.jpgExcellent, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainfyre66 Posted February 24, 2010 Share Posted February 24, 2010 Stellar entertainment as always, Mr. Quasar! Two thumbs up, your fanfics are truly unique. Sorry I didn't get to comment as consistently on this story, but I did enjoy it very much. :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted February 24, 2010 Share Posted February 24, 2010 Stellar entertainment as always, Mr. Quasar! Two thumbs up, your fanfics are truly unique. Sorry I didn't get to comment as consistently on this story, but I did enjoy it very much. :yes:Thank you very much! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kursed Posted February 24, 2010 Share Posted February 24, 2010 Thank you very much! hey Julius if you want I have more spacships than the galatae including the aurora a destroyer I now use :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted February 24, 2010 Share Posted February 24, 2010 hey Julius if you want I have more spacships than the galatae including the aurora a destroyer I now use That sounds awesome! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DRL Posted February 24, 2010 Share Posted February 24, 2010 http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeBottom.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/Galataeback.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeSide.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/Galataetop.jpghttp://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/Cerinian%20ships/GalataeFront.jpgImpressive! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caat01 Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 well thanks Julius it was impressive, awesome, epic, wonderfull.it was nice, it so sad that it come to an end, i hope to see more fanfics coming from you. and all i can say of this fanfic well i don't really know a human word to describe it, because is one of the greatest things i ever read. take care dude and thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 well thanks Julius it was impressive, awesome, epic, wonderfull.it was nice, it so sad that it come to an end, i hope to see more fanfics coming from you. and all i can say of this fanfic well i don't really know a human word to describe it, because is one of the greatest things i ever read. take care dude and thanks again.Thanks dude, I appreciate that! I enjoyed writing it for you and everyone else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velocity Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 i don't really know a human word to describe itThe word i Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious(not kidding this is for reals) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilwaffles Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 I really need to keep checking this place a bit more then I do seeing as I miss out on reading stuff as great as this. Reading this makes me want to find time to finish my Fan Fic. As always great job on your story and I look forward to reading your next one you have posted up now. Evilwaffles for reading/commenting on the story, and letting me use the "Reece Kilza was here" graffiti on my wall (referring to his FC)Anytime dude, it was a pleasure. (Feel free to use him in anything you want, as thanks for letting me use your FC's in my stories) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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