Matt Macdowel Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 nice fred (matt) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest FoXXX Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 James' bad ass face :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fredryk Phox Posted May 5, 2010 Author Share Posted May 5, 2010 Nice touch! So...James was 14 when Fox was born, eh? Cool! The Cornerians are much more advanced than the [American] Earthlings....I believe it would have made him.... 18. :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 I believe it would have made him.... 18. Augh, you're right! Sorry, I suck at math! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fredryk Phox Posted May 5, 2010 Author Share Posted May 5, 2010 More pensketches from work last weekA 28 year-old Wolf O'Donnell, in the episodes after 101.Random sketches of Vixy and James McCloud.A part of a scene in the second episode where the 'ten years later' Star Fox team is rounded up once again to help Corneria. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Nice! I especially like your drawing of Fox's parents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest FoXXX Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Nice! I especially like your drawing of Fox's parents.Yeah! I guess James was as lucky as his son with girls :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Great sketches Fredryk! I also agree with FoXXX and Julius! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Flare Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Wow, those are very accurate pen sketches! Great work, Fred! I really like your style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fredryk Phox Posted May 5, 2010 Author Share Posted May 5, 2010 I got 8 seconds of animation done today. WOOOOOO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted May 6, 2010 Share Posted May 6, 2010 Supoib! I can't wait to see the finished work of the whole thing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarFoxfan-FUR_ever Posted May 7, 2010 Share Posted May 7, 2010 Hey Fred, I got an idea for you to make it easier for people to reach you for "auditions". Just put up the link somewhere on your SFAS site.And BTW, GREAT WORK!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caat01 Posted May 7, 2010 Share Posted May 7, 2010 everything looks great!! good job i like it. :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DRL Posted May 7, 2010 Share Posted May 7, 2010 I got 8 seconds of animation done today. WOOOOOO.That is[shadow=white,left]HYPER![/shadow]...That is all I have to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fredryk Phox Posted May 7, 2010 Author Share Posted May 7, 2010 Here's part of the script from the scene I'm animating right now. If you want to hear the audio from this scene you can download this mp3 and listen along with the script.Skip over Pepper's lines and the radio broadcast from Red Squad, or just assume that's what is being said during the long vocal pauses in the mp3 below. Still waiting on the voice actors to get back for those.Scene Audio with Music, SFX, and VoiceForgive the sloppy format.__________________________________StarFox - The Animated SeriesEpisode 101 (First James McCloud Flashback scene, taking place 10 years before the main setting of episode 101)Characters========James, 26Pigma, 20Peppy, 18Pepper (On radio)//////// = Unrecorded lines, skip over============================================================James: Okay, Pigma, Peppy, I want you two to look at the console your right hands are resting in front of. You'll notice the little red plastic box that's usually there, it's not there anymore.. I took the liberty of unscrewing it, so now you see a little button under there labeled 'NTD-FX1 BOOST' and---( Pigma's arwing blasts off ahead of the other two for about a hundred feet in space, then stops abruptly. )( Peppy makes a big "O" face. )Pigma: Jesus, what the F**K--James: Pigma, I was gonna tell you that button's for your engine boost, but I guess there's no real need to now. You get that, Peppy?Peppy: Yes, sir.James: Peppy, we're a team, but this is not the army. Call me James.Peppy: Yes, si..sir..( James smiles. )James: Now, I wouldn't recommend using your boost when your wings aren't open, or anything at all for that matter until you've checked the diagnostics on your G-Diffusers, so let me run a sys-check on you guys, and then we'll get started.( Computer beeps )James: Okay guys, open your wings, check your G-Diffs, get ready to roll... Today I'm gonna show you a few things that aren't really in the books... so if you wanna---===========================================================(incoming transmission)////////Pepper: McCloud? McCloud! Are you there? James: I'm here, go ahead, sir.////////Pepper: You know I hate to call in favors, but I need something done off the record, and you still owe me one, James.Pigma: Sergeant, If this is another bug hunt..////////Pepper: Dengar, this is no bug hunt! Actually, I have no clue what's going on. I received this transmission from an LP crew forty-five minutes ago, before completely losing contact. (transmission starts) Give a listen, and tell me what -you- think.//////////////////////// RADIO SEQUENCE NOT YET RECORDED.//////////////// ----============================================////////////////----==== Corneria this is Red Seven, comeback.////////////////----==== Corneria this is Red Seven, comeback, Corneria.////////////////----==== Corneria this is Red Seven, uh, not receiving your comeback, will go ahead on //////// Transmission Protocol Six.////////////////----==== It's, uh, we're seeing some pretty big explosions on the surface of Venom, //////// uh, looks like in the north hem just above the equator.////////////////----==== Corneria this is Red Seven, we're also seeing some sort of green--////////////////----==== Red Seven, this is Red Leader, I'm getting readings on, uh.. one moment.////////////////----==== RED SEVEN, CHECK YOUR NINER CHECK YOUR NINER---////////////////----==== CORNERIA THIS IS RED SEVEN I'VE GOT UNFRIENDLY FORMATIONS CLOSING FAST ON OUR--////////////////----============================================////////////////////////////////////////////////Pepper: Somewhere on the surface of that planet, I'm willing to bet there's something going on that really shouldn't be. I want you three to go investigate, and whatever happens, maintain radio contact with me on this frequency, and no one else.James: Sergeant, I'm only going to ask you one thing. Do you think Dr. Andross behind this?////////Pepper: We can only presume, James. ...I believe they made a grave mistake letting that man leave Corneria... Get going, and contact me when you're nearing Venom airspace.James: Yes sir.Peppy: James.. This isn't.. still part of the training exercise.. is it.James: (sighs) No Peppy... no it isn't. ( End of flashback part 1. ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted May 7, 2010 Share Posted May 7, 2010 That is the most AWESOME thing I've seen EVER!!!!! The voice acting is STELLAR!! It really makes you feel that you are there :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcory Posted May 7, 2010 Share Posted May 7, 2010 Sounds awesome dude! Just one odd little thing I noticed.....General Pepper said they should have never sent Andross off of corneria. But if memory serves me I think Andross WAS the one to ban Andross there. I'm not sure, but that's what I thought.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted May 7, 2010 Share Posted May 7, 2010 Really good, Fred! Also, I like your new sig, Falcory! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fredryk Phox Posted May 7, 2010 Author Share Posted May 7, 2010 Yeah, I've read up on my star fox history, but I am going to be changing a few things; I'm sure some people have noticed a lot of character-age-differences already. Don't worry though, even as some of the 'facts' are changed, I'm just trying to make the story followable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest FoXXX Posted May 8, 2010 Share Posted May 8, 2010 Good job, man :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sableye Posted May 8, 2010 Share Posted May 8, 2010 Nice work, Fred.One good thing after another.Keep on going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARWINGCOMMANDER 3987 Posted May 8, 2010 Share Posted May 8, 2010 Will we see more of Krystal after she mugs Fox? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DZComposer Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Will we see more of Krystal after she mugs Fox?I'd be surprised if we did. Fred's an old-school Star Fox kind of guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fredryk Phox Posted May 9, 2010 Author Share Posted May 9, 2010 Finally got around to putting in the lines for [General] Pepper in the cartoon, since I got them from our voice actor buddy earlier yesterday.Test flashback scene with Pepper's lines included Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinigami Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 this looks -very- promising. looking forward to it; already bookmarked the webpage. Oh, and that first animation with Fox and Fara all the way back on page one just made my evening; the corny posing he did just cracked me up. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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