Star Fox: Shadows

[That Guy]

Hey Guys! This is my first fan contribution! any ways, I have this star fox game and mind, and  I am working on the script for it. the game consists of playing as three different teams. There's Star Fox (Fox, Falco, Krystal, and Slippy), Star Wolf (Wolf, Panther, Leon and female bird called Olivia), and my fan made Rover Wings (Ryan [Dog] the team leader, Fay the new pilot, Miyu the veteran pilot, and Dexter [badger] the weapon specialist.

Currently, I only have Star Wolf's and Star Fox's intro video's (the video's that play when you select your team) done. I'll post rover wings tommorow.

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Team Star Fox:

[Text after intro movie]

The Star Fox Team has a long history of saving the Lylat System from dangers. Originally founded by legendary pilot, James McCloud, the team is now ran by his son, Fox McCloud: a bold and brave pilot, who will make sure that no harm is done to the precious Lylat system.

The team consists of their leader Fox McCloud, brash pilot Falco Lombardi, engineer Slippy Toad, and the team medic Krystal. Assisting the team, are the sarcastic, but well natured R.O.B 64, and retired pilot, Peppy Hare, who both pilot the teams mothership: the great fox.

Currently, the team is hot on the trail, of a new enemy, who’s identity is unknown…

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In Game:

[on board the Great Fox. Falco is reading a headline in a newspaper, and ROB is looking up items on a computer. Krystal enters the room, everyone is in]

Krystal: Well boys, any luck?

Falco: Nope. There isn’t a damned thing in here except for what these creatures have done. There’s no leads, no info, no nothing!

Krystal: Hmm…ROB, what about you?

ROB: NEGATIVE. SEARCHES HAVE SO FAR RESULTED IN NON-HELPFUL INFORMATION.

Fox: Damn! There’s no clues to where these things are hiding, no leads on where they are heading…there’s not even any information on what exactly these creatures are!

Slippy: Is as if these guys don’t exist!

Krystal: Hmm…this is indeed quite disturbing…I’m sensing that our foe is going to be a lot harder that anything we’ve ever faced.

[a beeping noise is heard]

ROB: INCOMING MESSAGE FROM GENERAL PEPPER ON THE EMERGENCY BROADBAND.

[the view screen brings up an image of general pepper]

Pepper: Star Fox! Your assistance is needed desperately!

Fox: What’s wrong?

Pepper: Our outpost was raided, only a few hours ago, by a dreaded army of black monsters!

Slippy: They must be the same ones that were mentioned on the news!

Pepper: They annihilated the whole outpost, and now are on their way to Corneria! Please Fox! You must get here as soon as possible!

Fox: Roger General! Star Fox team, to the arwings!

[end of Star Fox opening]

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Team Star Wolf:

[Text after Intro movie]

Star Wolf are a shady bunch of characters who often get involved with dirty business. Always and forever the rival team of Star Fox, Star Wolf will do anything to get a few extra cash here and there.

The team is made up of leader Wolf O’Donnell, Panther Caruso, and Leon Powalski. Although the team’s personalities clash from time to time, they always stick together no matter what.

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In Game

[They are all in their Wlofens, flying towards a derelict space craft in an asteroid field, that might serve as the teams mothership]

Panther: Do you see it yet?

Wolf: No

Panther: Are you sure it’s here, Leon?

Leon: Yes, I’m quite certain it’s here! You doubt the mind of a sharp edged killer?

Panther: Leon, I can hardly think that there isn’t a person out there that doesn’t question what goes inside your freakish mind.

Wolf: Will you two shut up and help look for this damned spaceship?

Panther: Yes, Wolf

[A moment later, a large carrier ship approaches. It appears to be abandoned]

Leon: Nya! See? What did I tell ya? There’s are home base right there!

Wolf: My sensors indicate that It still has life support operating. Let’s go check it out!

[they enter the carrier’s command center]

Panther: It looks ad if this place has been abandoned for nearly twenty years

Wolf: Hmm…now how do you operate this thing?

???: You boys need a hand?

[the three of them turn around, and see a teal colored avian female standing in the archway of command center entrance]

Wolf: Who the hell are you? How did you get here?

???: The names Olivia Valentine, and I thought I’d take a peek in here, till I saw you three men appear.

Panther: Well, well! A beautiful lady. Perhaps I could take your hand, me lady?

Olivia: [snickers] What, take me on a date? Not a chance, fuzz boy. [she looks at Leon] Erm…I don’t even know I should talk to you. [she looks at wolf and smiles] Ah! But you look rather handsome. How about it darling? Would you like to take me on a trip in your little star fighter?

Wolf: Hmph! The Star Wolf team is one that is dedicated to only the best, and most daring pilots. It’s not open to amateur pilots like you

Olivia: Amateur? Honey, I bet you I could fly circles around your frizzle-topped hide. Besides your boys are gonna need all the help you can get, if you want to receive any money from the Cornerian army.

Leon: Ssss! How’d you-

Olivia: Let’s just say a little birdie told me [she winks]

[the three males huddle together]

Wolf: Well what do you guys think?

Leon: Grrr…she seems suspicious, but we could use a fourth member.

Panther: And we do have Andrew’s wolfen back at Sargasso

Wolf: Hmm…

[the three turn to Olivia]

Wolf: Alright then, you can join us.

[Olivia smiles]

Wolf: Now then, how do you get this damn ship to work?

[He fiddles with the control panel, and a sound buzzes]

Computer Voice: SUSPENDED ANIMATION DEACTIVATED. NOW POWERING UP THE CYBERNETIC ASSISTANCE DRONE

Wolf: The what?

[a glass chamber opens up, revealing a half machine, half feline android]

Robot: Ah, it feels so good to be powered up again.

[he looks at Wolf and his teammates]

Robot: Oh, guests! I haven’t had any for twenty years! Greetings, I am the Cybernetic Assistance Drone, but you may refer to me as C.A.D.

Wolf: Um, hi. We are Star Wolf. I am Wolf O’Donnell, and these are my colleges, Panther Caruso, Leon Powalski, and Olivia Valentine.

C.A.D: …interesting…um…you people wouldn’t happen to be my new masters, would you?

Wolf: Em…well I suppose we are.

C.A.D: Oh, excellent! I-I now have you all registered as my masters. Now with all that business took care of, how may I serve you?

Leon: ehh…you can start, by showing us how to power up this ship.

C.A.D: Oh, of course, master Powalski!

[C.A.D pushes a couple of buttons and the lights come on]

C.A.D: There! All systems are fully functional, and operational. Now is there a destination you would like me to input?

Wolf: Uh, yes. Set a course for Sargasso, coordinates, 6A-12, Lylat system, and then take us to Titania.

C.A.D: Rodger master O’Donnell, setting coordinates now

[Wolf gives an uneasy look at Leon and Panther, who also look at him uneasily]

[end of star wolf opening]

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Tell me If you like it so far, so I can either not continue this or Continue this.

[That Guy]

...I can deduce from the number of people that have replied that either my script sucks, or that the fan fic board isn't the most popular board here...[sarcasm]

Regardless if my scripts suck, I'll continue posting. I've finally finished the Rover Wings Intro.

Team Rover Wings

[Text After Intro movie]

The Rover Wings are a more secluded band of ace pilots. The squad used to be a science research team, doing geological research on planets, studying subspace anomalies, and such. However, their work caught the attention of many criminals, seeking ways to steal priceless information, and finding out new hideout spots.

Since then, The Rover Wings have been an unofficial police force, hunting down Lylat’s worse criminals. The team is made up of Ryan James Bailey, his father Ex-Admiral Benjamin McArthur Bailey, and pilots Miyu Lynx and Dexter Emerson.

As of yet, the team awaits the arrival of a fourth pilot.

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In Game

[in the control room of their base on Corneria everyone‘s there except Ryan]

Ryan: [he enters] Hey, sorry I’m late: I was downloading some things for my P.A.C.

Benjamin: Thanks quite fine son: there wasn’t any rush. Well, since we’re all here now, I have some good news. We’re are having a new pilot join our team today!

Dexter: ah, lovely! Does that mean we’ll get a pilot that could teach this lass o’er there a thing or two about flying?

Miyu: Uh, excuse me? Who was the idiot that forgot how to steer his Staraven, and missed the docking bay?

Dexter: Bah! I was just a wee bit tired!

Miyu: [she sighs, shakes here head but smiles]

Benjamin: Anyway, our new pilot will be arriving here in a couple of hours, so let’s prepare for our new member, and greet him at the hangers.

[Miyu and Dexter leave]

Benjamin: Oh and Ryan? When our pilot arrives, I want you to treat our new member with the highest respect. Understood?

Ryan: Uh, yes sir. I will.

[they’re at the base’s hanger]

Benjamin: Well Ryan, are you excited?

Ryan: Meh…I guess. I mean it’s nice that we’re getting a new pilot, but more than likely, he’s going to be some bigheaded jerk from the Cornerian army.

[benjamin and Miyu smile at each other]

Ryan: …and trust me, those people are complete jerks! They always look down upon you, and always try to show off, and--

[he’s cut off as the pilot arrives in a car, and is revealed to be a beautiful white spaniel girl]

New Pilot: [she sticks her head out the window] Sorry I’m late! I got lost on my way here.

Ryan: [stares] Wow…

Benjamin: That’s quite fine…um, Ryan aren’t you going to help her out?

Ryan: Huh, what? Oh! Oh, of course.

[He runs over, opens the door for her, and helps her out]

New Pilot: Oh, why thank you!

Benjamin: Welcome to the Rover Wings, cadet. I am the maintainer, Ex-Admiral Benjamin McArthur Bailey, and these are our pilots, Miyu Lynx and Dexter Emerson.

[They give a nod]

New Pilot: Pleasure! My name is Fay Weldon.

[she shakes Ben’s hand. Ben then notices Ryan]

Benjamin: Oh, and this is my son, Ryan James Bailey. He’s training to be our teams leader.

Fay: Oh yes, I’ve heard of you before!

Ryan: [blushes] Oh really? Um, er, I’m not sure that’s a good thing.

Fay: Mm, I’ve heard that you’re extremely dedicated. I love someone that is dedicated.

Ryan: [his face blushes even more]

Benjamin; Well then Ryan, if you’ll show Miss Weldon here the Staravens, we’ll begin a practice flight.

Ryan: Uh, yes of course! Erm…follow me.

[Fay and Ryan exit. Miyu walks over to Benjamin]

Benjamin: How long do you think till she kisses him?

Miyu: Mm…give it a week.

Benjamin: I’ll give it a day or two…

[end of Rover Wings Opening]

[X-Gamer]

Keep going. It's not boring. It's just I never bothered to post a reply. 

For critism, ummm... there isn't much I can think of. It's descriptive, and I can imagine it all in my head like it was there. So I just have to say, good job!  :cool:

[That Guy]

Aw, thanks! (the last time I post a Fan Fic anywhere, all I got was "hey! learn english, you dope!" or "Yeah, you should stop writing!"  )

...anyways, back on topic, I have level one of star fox's game ready.

NOTE: For every team you choose, you will be presented with the option of either going straight into the action, or do a practice flight after the teams intro movie. Since each course is identical, I will just post the levels.

Basic Response Dialog

[All of the dialog here are continually spoken through out the game, so I’m posting them here for your convenience]

--Falco--

[enemy behind him]: Gah! I can’t escape him!

[if you wait]: I really could use a hand here!

[if you fail to save him]: It’s no good! I gotta get out of here

[if you do save him]: Thanks, but I think I would’ve been fine on my own

[Encouragement]: Go nuts Fox!

[if you shoot him]: Hey! You wanna fight?

[Advice]: If you want to boost, press the C button

[if he’s in pursuit]: I’ve got you know!

[in pursuit 2]: Hah! You can’t hide from me!

[if shoots down an enemy]: Yeah! Got ya!

[if you steal his kill]: Damn it, Fox! That was mine!

--Slippy--

[enemy behind him]: Someone’s on my tail! Help!

[if you wait]: Fox! Where are you!?

[if you fail to save him]: Aah, I need to go guys; she can’t take any more!

[if you do save him]: Whew, thanks!

[Encouragement]: Go get ‘em Fox!

[if you shoot him]: Fox! This isn’t a good time to be joking around!

[Advice]: Hold the A button down to charge your laser.

[if he’s in pursuit]: I’m in pursuit of an enemy!

[in pursuit]: Eat this, creep!

[if he shoots down an enemy]: Yeah!

[if you steal his kill]: Hey! Go find another target, Fox!

--Krystal--

[enemy behind her]: Hey! Get away, you creep!

[if you wait]: Urgh! Damn it! He won’t go away!

[if you fail to save her]: This ship won’t hold much longer if I stay here!

[if you do save her]: Oh, what a relief! Thanks Fox!

[Encouragement]: Don’t give up Fox!

[if you shoot her]: Hey cut that out!

[Advice]: Press down, and C to do a Somersault!

[if she’s in pursuit]: Enemy in my sights!

[in pursuit 2]: You can’t shake me!

[if she shoots down an enemy]: Ha, ha! Yes!

[if you steal her kill]: Hey, I could’ve handle him myself!

--Peppy--

[Advice 1]: Pressing Z or B twice will make you do a barrel roll (sorry, I couldn’t resist this one!)

[Advice 2]: Press down on the D-pad to launch a bomb!

[Encouragement]: Keep up the good work, Fox!

--ROB--

[Advice]: Fly through rings to regain some of your shield

[Help 1]: Location conformed…sending equipment

[Help 2]: Great Fox will take care of this

[Warning]: Warning! Enemies closing in on you

*NOTE: The above controls are for a Wiimote and nun chuck. Classic controller and Game Cube Controller are also compatible

1.Corneria

Play Style: Arwing

Level Play: Rail/ARM* ARM=All Range Mode

Boss: Shade Carrier

Pre-Level

[in the skies]

Fox: All ships report.

Krystal: All systems check out fine

Slippy: No problems

Falco: All locked and ready to go!

Fox: All right team, scatter!

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Level-Play

[beginning part]

Falco: Here they come!

Fox: Let’s split up and take each section down!

Slippy: They’re EVERY where!

[unfortunately, I don’t have M@D ANIMAYSHUN SKILLZ, so most of the action, is left to your imagination]

[Mid part]

Krystal: Where did these things come from?

Falco: Who cares! Let’s just obliterate them!

[A large vessel flies over and off screen]

Slippy: Hey! What just flew passed us?

Fox: That must be the enemy transport! Let’s follow it!

[later part]

Falco: Geez! They just keep coming!

Peppy: Don’t get overwhelmed!

[boss intro]

Boss: You dare defy us, lowly fools!

Falco: Get down fox! He’s coming from behind!

Fox: So! You’re the monsters that destroyed that outpost! Who are you?

Boss: We are the Shade! And those who disturbs us will die, very painfully!

Falco: Too bad will kill you first, you freak!

Boss: Readying all fighters! ATTACK!

[in boss fight]

Peppy: Aim for the cargo pods, when the hatches open!

--Boss--[says the following repeatedly]

You will suffer gravely for this!

We the shade do not cower from inferior beings!

[if you win]

Boss: GAAAAAAHHHHH!

Krystal: Hmph! You weren’t so tough!

Boss: What’s this? A mystic still lives!? I must report to the emperor!

[Post Level cut scene]

[All of them are in the great fox’s control room]

Peppy: So, these things are called the shades, are they?

Fox: Yes, it appears so

Peppy: Hmm…that name feels very familiar some how…

Krystal: ROB? Do you have any knowledge in your database about any creatures called the Shade?

ROB: NEGATIVE. THE NAME DOES NOT EXIST WITHIN MY MEMORY FILES

Fox: Well, the only thing we can do now, is search around lylat for any more information. ROB, set a course for sector X, where the shades destroyed that outpost.

ROB: OH HOW EXHILARATING…A DULL SCAVENGER HUNT

Falco: Hey, what are complaining about? We’re out doin’ all the hard work, while you sit here and pilot the Great Fox!

ROB: TRUST ME…IT GETS RATHER BORING HERE FROM TIME TO TIME

[Cut to a room of a shade space craft. The emperor is staring out into space, but you cannot see his face. The boss from corneria enters]

Boss: My lord! I bring unfortunate news!

[He walks up to the emperor (you still can’t see his face), and whispers]

Emperor: …what? How can this be?…are you sure there was a mystic with them?

Boss: Yes

Emperor: hmm…and after we destroyed their home world?…impossible…

Boss: orders sir?

Emperor: [He chuckles] send the elite shades to sector x…no doubt those fools will be there to look for clues.

Boss: Yes my lord.

[end of level one]

NOTE: The shades are left with out any description because 1. I cannot draw them, 2. I want the readers to use their imagination, so they might think of something better.

[X-Gamer]

Nice dialogs, but peppy's barrel roll suggestion is "Press Z or R Twice"

[That Guy]

Nice dialogs, but peppy's barrel roll suggestion is "Press Z or R Twice"

I'm Aware of that, but the wiimote doesn't have an R button on it, sadly....

I'm Almost done with sector x. I'll post here shortly

[That Guy]

Okay! Level 2 is DONE!!! *whoo hoo!*

2. Sector X

Play Style: Arwing

Level Play: ARM

Boss: The Elite Shades

Pre Level

[On the Great Fox]

ROB: WE HAVE ARRIVED.

Slippy: Look at all the carnage! It’s terrible!

Peppy: Aye…a lot of good lives were wasted here…

[a beeping noise is heard]

ROB: SENSORS INDICATE THAT MORE AIRCRAFT ARE ON THEIR WAY HERE!

Fox: Argh! More shades?

ROB: READINGS SUGGEST SHADE DESIGN

Fox: Ah, great! Everyone, to--

[suddenly he hears a ghostly Krazoa-like voice]

Voice: Fox, McCloud…*incompressible*

Falco: Fox? What wrong?

Krystal: Are you okay??

Fox: Uh…um…I’m fine! It’s nothing! Everyone to the arwings!

[Everyone leaves, but Krystal stays behind for a couple of seconds]

Krystal: [Thinking] You shouldn’t hide things from me, Fox. I know you heard something, because I felt its presence

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Level-Play

[beginning Part]

Fox: All right, guys: Take them down!

[After a while]

ROB: A LARGE VESSEL IS APPROACHING!

[A large carrier warps in, and from it come four fighters]

NOTE: I’m giving the names of the elite shad pilot immediately, instead of listing that as Pilot 1 or Pilot 2, because there aren’t any game cut scenes that reveal their names

Thoren: Well, well! What do you have here?

Kayos: It looks to be an annoying squabble of hornets!

Starla: They don’t look very strong do they?

Porthos: We’ll make short work of these weaklings!

[All of them cackle, and break away]

The following lines are said repeatedly by the Elite Shades

--Thoren (He chases Fox)--

[if he’s on Fox’s tail]: None can escape my grasp!

[if you somersault him]: Ah! Clever!

[if you shoot him]: Hah! Those inferior weapons are no match for me!

[if you shoot him down]: Impossible! Forced to retreat from a lesser being!?

--Kayos (He chases Slippy)--

[if he’s on Slippy’s tail]: I’ve got you my sights, you little whelp!

[if you shoot him]: Har har! I’m unstoppable!

[if you shoot him down]: GYA!! My beautiful starship! I must get out of here!

--Starla (She chases Krystal)--

[if she’s on Krystal’s tail]: Give up hun! You can’t shake me!

[if you shoot her]: [giggles] How adorable! Think you can shoot me down, darling?

[if you shoot her down]: Urgh! I can’t take anymore of this! I’m heading back!

--Porthos (He chases Falco)--

[if he’s on Falco’s tail]: I’ve got you now, you inexperienced parrot!

[if you shoot him]: What was that? A mosquito?

[if you shoot him down]: GGGAAAHH!!! I’d need to head back!

[if you win]

Thoren: Don’t think you’ve won today!

Kayos: Heh, heh…we we’re just sizing you up!

Starla: We’ll be back real soon!

Porthos: And next time, WE will be the victors!

[All of them cackle as they enter their carrier, and then they warp out]

[Post level cut scene]

[They are in the Great Fox]

Falco: Damn, that was close! Those pilots were crazy!

Slippy: Hah! But we were still better though!

Peppy: I don’t think we should get too cocky yet guys! This surprise attack must mean they’re hunting us.

Fox: Peppy’s right! They must of known that we were coming here for clues

Falco: Well, if that’s the case, what do we do now?

Fox: Well, there isn’t a whole lot we can do, apart form searching somewhere

Krystal: But the question is: where do we look?

Slippy: hrm…that’s a good question…well with our luck, they might come to us instead!

Falco: …Um, I would call that luck Slippy…

[Cut to the Elite Shades in the control room of their carrier. They are looking at the view screen, talking to the emperor (and you STILL can’t see his face)]

Emperor: …so it’s official, that a mystic is indeed alive, and with their team.

Thoren: Yes, my lord.

Emperor: [chuckles] how amusing…set a course for Titania: I have a special plan for all of you…

[End of level two]

[X-Gamer]

good job. That fight reminded me of SF64 with SF against SW.

[That Guy]

Thanks X-Gamer!

Well, Level three is done! Happy Easter Guys!

3. Titania

Play Style: Landmaster

Level Play: Rail

Boss: Assault Tank

Pre Level

[in fox’s quarters on the Great Fox. He’s having a bad dream, and he can hear the same voice from earlier]

Voice: …Fox McCloud…

[Fox opens his eyes]

Voice: …Fox McCloud…

[Fox gets up]

Fox: Wh-…Where…

Voice: …Fox McCloud….

Fox: Wha…What? W-Who are-

Voice: You like her, don’t you?

Fox: What? Who?? Who are you talking about?

Voice: …the mystic…she lives…

Fox: What? You’re not making sense! Who this mystic?

Voice: …the mystic…you like her…she lives because of your protection….

Fox: What’s going on!? WHO ARE YOU!?

Voice: ha ha ha….you like her…but it will end both you and the mystic

Fox: For the last time, WHO IS THIS MYSTIC!?

Voice: …See if you can protect her from me and my sons…

Fox: What is this? What’s going on?

Voice: she’s in danger….

Krystal’s Voice: AAAAHHH!!! FOOOOX!!

Fox: Krystal!

Krystal’s Voice: FOX!! HELP ME!!!

Fox: Krystal! Where are you!?

Krystal’s Voice: [sob] Fox…please…h-help…help me…it hurts….

Fox: Krystal! KRYSTAL!!

[Fox wakes up with a start. He’s panting heavily]

Fox: [Looks around]…It was…*pant*…it was all…*pant*…a dream??

[he walks into the control room, where the rest of the team are. As soon as he appears, a beep is heard]

ROB: WE ARE RECEIVING A HAIL. ID NOT KNOWN.

[he answers the hail, and an image of Thoren and Kayos comes on screen]

Thoren: Nya, ha ha ha! Surprise, surprise Star Fox!

[The team gets tense]

Falco: The Shades!

Kayos: Nya ha! We must say, you idiots proved to be quite the exceptional pilots, but we are still one step ahead of you morons!

Thoren: Yes indeed! Whilst you were waiting for us, we’ve took over a base in Titania!

Slippy: How did--

Fox: You won’t get away with this you creeps!

[Thoren and Kayos cackle]

Thoren: oh, but we have!

Kayos: And we still will, for we have plans to destroy this filthy place!

Krystal: No!

Thoren: Heh, heh, but I suppose, we can spare this place, IF you can get here, before we do!

Kayos: So, times a wastin’! Tick Tock!

[Thoren and Kayos laugh, as they close their transmission]

Fox: Grr! Damn those murderers! Let’s go! And prepare the Landmaster!

[They leave, but Krystal looks troubled]

Krystal: W-Wait! I’m sensing that something is very wrong here!

Falco: He haven’t got time Krystal! We need to save that base!

Level-Play

[beginning Part]

Fox: Coordinates set! I’m heading there right now

Falco: Hurry! You don’t have much time!

Slippy: Incoming enemies!

Krystal: Don’t worry about them! We can take care of them. Just head for the base!

[later part]

Slippy: Fox! Do you read me? A large vehicle is closing in on you!

Fox: Ah, great! Hopefully I can bypass it…

[boss Intro]

*A cut scene plays here*

[star Wolf suddenly flies in]

Fox: Huh? Star Wolf!?

Wolf: What? Fox! Of all the places I could meet you, I-

Fox: Wolf, I don’t have time for this! I must get to Titania’s base before-

[Fox is interrupted, as a large armored bike jumps out in front of him. The bike wheels around, and turrets roll out from the sides. Then, the top of it comes off, and flies towards Star Wolf]

Wolf: Ack! We’ll deal with you later Star Fox!

[star Wolf Flies Away]

[in Boss Fight]

Peppy: Aim for the turrets, Fox!

Falco: Damn! That thing can take some heavy damage!

--When all the turrets are gone--

Peppy: Fire away Fox! His shield is gone!

[if you win]

Faclo: Yeehaaw! You did it Fox! Now hurry to the base

[Post Level]

[Fox begins to ride up but he’s stop]

Thoren: Sorry Fox!

[Thoren shows a hand held switch]

Thoren: You’re too late!

[He pushes it, and the entire base is blown to smithereens. When the smoke clears, the elite shades fly away]

Kayos: Looks like we win today, Star Fox!

[All of them cackle]

[Cut to the command room of the great fox. Everyone is there]

Slippy: This is terrible!

Krystal: all those innocent lives…wasted…

Falco: Damn…these guys are low man…

Fox: Hmm…I won’t let them get away this! ROB, scan every part of the lylat system, and locate the elite shades carrier!

ROB: AFFIRMATIVE FOX!

[Fox walks away, before he notices Krystal fidgetting.]

Fox: Krystal? Are you okay?

Krystal: Hmm? Oh, I’m fine…I was just…thinking…

[Cut to the carrier of the Elite Shades. They are once again talking to their emperor (who’s identity is STILL not shown)]

Emperor: Good work, my proud warriors! The plan is now in motion.

Thoren: Eh, may we be so bold to ask a question?

Emperor: Hm? What is it?

Thoren: Well, the plan seems very strange. I mean, why did we destroy a base that was empty? It doesn’t make sense to us.

Emperor: [chuckles] You don’t see the brilliance of this plan, do you? When those pilots witnessed the destruction of that base, their minds entered a state of shock. And with that shock comes rage, and then revenge. And with that revenge, he’ll hunt us down. And when he finds us…[he laughs]

Kayos: Ah! He’ll bring the mystic with him!

[the whole team chuckles]

Emperor: Well then my warriors, it’s time to launch phase two of our plan!

[After this scene ends, a text bubble appears]

Congratulations! You can now select Star Wolf from the team select menu!

[end of level three]

[That Guy]

Wow, i'm on a roll! I've finished Level 4 for you guys! (WARNING! this one is a tad vilolent)

4. Storming The Shade Carrier

Play Style: On Foot

Level Play: Free Roam

Boss: None

Pre Level

[in the Great Fox’s control room]

ROB: SHADES MOTHERSHIP AHEAD.

Peppy: Great work ROB!

Fox: Open a hail.

[a depressed beep is hear]

ROB: ALL FORMS OF COMMUNICATION ARE BEING JAMMED

Fox: Damn…so they wanna a fight? Well, we’ll give them one!

[Krystal opens the exit, but to her and everyone’s surprise, Porthos and Kayos are waiting there! Porthos grabs Krystal (who tries to struggle), and all three of them are teleported to the Mothership]

Fox: KRYSTAL!!

[a beep is heard, and Thoren appears on screen. Behind him is Krystal, being restrained by Porthos and Kayos]

Thoren: Hah, ha! Who knew you pathetic creatures would be so easy to trick? That base we just destroyed on Titania was abandoned! No one was occupying it!

Fox: You mean, this was all a trap!?

Krystal: Ugg! Fox! Help me!

[Fox snarls]

Thoren: that is correct, my friend! And now that you have fallen for it, we finally got what we want: the last mystic!

Fox: [startled] What? The last mystic?

Thoren: Ha, ha! I’ll be seeing you later, Star Fox!

[the transmission ends]

[Cut to the shades mothership. Thoren, Porthos and Kayos are dragging Krystal to the emperor.]

Thoren: Here she is sir! The mystic!

Emperor: Ah yes…

[He turns around, FINALLY revealing his face]

Emperor: The last mystic!

Krystal: Urgh! What are you talking about, you creep?

Emperor: You’re the last of your kind. The sole survivor of the doomed planet, Cerinia: the planet we destroyed over twenty years ago! The last of a race of disgusting telepaths, that constantly got in our way…that is, till we murdered all but you!

Krystal: You!…You monster!!

Emperor: Hm, hm…your kind was always dangerous to us…

Thoren: What should we do, my lord? Torture her? Kill her?

Emperor: Now, now, gentlemen…[he strokes Krystal’s cheek] I’m sure we can find some use for her…[chuckles]

[suddenly, a white flash occurs, and the emperor is knocked back.]

Thoren: My Lord!

[The Emperor gets up]

Emperor: Gah…Insolent wench!

[He strikes Krystal]

Emperor: Throw her in the brig!

[Pothos, Thoren, and Kayos, walk away, dragging Krystal with them]

[cut to a door, that is promptly busted open]

Fox: This is Fox! I’m in, and looking for Krystal!

Peppy: Roger! Keep us posted.

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Level-Play

[beginning part]

Fox: I’ve got to find Krystal! Where could they have put her?

Peppy: Fox! Be sure to use your radar. The Yellow marker Represents you, and the Blue marker Represents Krystal.

The Following are said repeatedly

--Peppy--

Look out for enemies sneaking up on you!

Keep focused Fox!

Slide against a wall, to sneak by some gaurds

Use the Sniper rifle to take out long distance enemies

--Fox--

I got to find Krystal

This feels like that nightmare

Hang on Krystal, I’ll save you!

[Mid part]

*A cut scene plays*

[Krystal is curled up in a ball on the floor, with her head bent down. Suddenly, she hears groaning, and see a generic shade flyby. Fox then comes in and opens the brig door. He walks in and helps Krystal up off the floor]

Krystal: Oh, Fox!

[they’re about to hug, when an alarm is sounded]

Speaker Voice: WARNING! WARNING! PRISONER ESCAPING!

Fox: Come on! Let’s go!

[Post Level]

[Krystal and Fox fly away from the Carrier]

Thoren: Grr! Damn it!

Emperor: Relax, my friend…we haven’t lost yet.

Thoren: Eh? What do you mean?

Emperor: [chuckles]

[Cut to the Great Fox’s docking bay. Krystal and Fox have gotten out. Peppy, slippy, and Falco come to meet them]

Slippy: Fox! Krystal! You’re Both okay!

[All them begin to walk, when suddenly…]

Kayos: Stop, right there!

[the team turns around]

Kayos: Ha, ha, ha, ha! Once again, you are all one step behind us!

Fox: You!

Kayos: [holds a gun to fox] Now then, since you escaped our carrier, I have no choice, but to kill you here!

Fox: Well fine! Kill me!

[Everyone’s shocked]

Fox: You may put me out of commission, you twisted mutant, but you won’t put my team out! They will continue for me and the rest of Lylat!

Kayos: [lowers his gun] Hmm…so I can’t eliminate your teams morality…But I know I can destroy your heart if I did this!

[he shoots Krystal three times in the stomach. She falls to her knees]

Fox: [runs to her] Krystal!!

Kayos: Hah ha! [Teleoports]

[end of level four]

[That Guy]

Sorry, for the TR-TR-TRIPLE POSTAGE!!!!!, but I'm done with level Five. I probably won't work on the script for a bit, because school starts back tommorow, and I'm busy gettng projects done.

5. Meteor Hospital

Play Style: Arwing

Level Play: ARM

Boss: Missiles (3)

Pre-Level

[Fox, Falco, and Slippy are all waiting in the wait room. Slippy’s fidgeting, and Falco is relaxing. Fox is over at the window, staring out into space]

Fox: …I…I couldn’t protect her…

[Falco looks toward fox. He gets up and walks over to him]

Falco: Don’t be so hard on yourself Fox.

Fox: Falco…I didn’t protect her…

Falco: So? You can’t be there to protect her all the time, Fox.

Fox: But Falco, that’s my problem! That is why I didn’t want her on the team. I knew she’d always be in peril, because I’m always fighting some kind of threat…she’d be better off, if I never met her…

Falco: Fox man…[pats his back]

[Fox here’s that same voice from his nightmare]

Voice: You like her, don’t you?

Fox: …It’s that voice again.

Falco: Hmm? What voice? are you hearing things now?

Fox: Hmm? Oh! No, it’s nothing…

[a nurse comes out]

Nurse: McCloud?

[Fox walks over]

Nurse: Okay, she is doing fine. She had some minor internal bleeding, and was in shock, but she’s fine right now.

[Fox sighs out of relief]

Nurse: We’re going to run some tests later, but she can have guests right now, if you want to see her.

Fox: Okay, I’ll visit her.

[The two walk to her room. Only Fox enters. Krystal is lying down on the hospital bed. She looks over and sees Fox]

Krystal: [her voice is a tad raspy] Hey…Fox…

Fox: Krystal…are you…um…feeling okay?

Krystal: Yeah, I’m fine. As soon as, *cough* as soon as they are done, I’ll be good to return to flying.

[Fox keeps his head low]

Krystal: Fox, I can sense that something is troubling you…what’s wrong?

Fox: I…I just feel bad that I let you get hurt…

Krystal: Oh Fox, don’t be hard on yourself! I’m not a damsel in distress, I can hold my own. Besides, you’ve got too much on your hands to constantly watch me.

[Fox sighs. The nurse comes in]

Nurse: Mr. McCloud? We’re going to perform some test now.

Fox: Oh, okay. [he gets up] Take care Krystal.

Krystal: Hmm…you too Fox.

[as soon as Fox walks out, an alarm is heard]

Speaker System: WARNING! MISSILE ATTACK! BARRICADE THE PERIMITER!

Slippy: What!? A missile attack here??

Falco: It must be those Damn shades!

Fox: Ahh, they never give, do they?! Guys, let’s head to the arwings!

Level-Play

[beginning Part]

Fox: Okay then, let’s try to get these fighters out first then head for those missles

Falco: Roger that, Fox!

Slippy: we can’t let those missles through!

[after awhile]

ROB: MISSLE ONE, IS APROACHING THE HOSPITAL.

Fox: Okay, I’m on it

[if you fail to shoot down a missile, you get a short cut scene of the hosptial getting blown apart, and you star the level over (don’t ya feel bad for losing?)]

[if you shoot one down, however]: Fox: Yeah! That one missle down.

[The above lines starting from ROB are repeated for all three misslies. The only difference is that ROB will say, “SECOND MISSILE APROACHING” and “LAST MISSILE APROACHING”]

[if you shoot down all three missiles]

Fox: All missiles, obliterated!

Slippy: Yeah! Way to go, Fox!

Falco: Heh, that was a decent job, Fox!

Fox: Heh, let’s see you do better next time, Falco!

[Post Level]

[they are all waiting in the wait room. Finally, Krystal walks out, and she looks perfectly fine. Fox and the other two walk up to her.]

Fox: Krystal!…So, you’re all better now?

Krystal: [Her voice isn’t raspy anymore] Mmm hm! All fit, and ready to fight!

Fox: That’s great! Okay gang, let’s head back!

[end of level five]

[X-Gamer]

TR-TR-TRIPLE Posting = Triple the epicness!!! Good job!

[That Guy]

TR-TR-TRIPLE Posting = Triple the epicness!!! Good job!

Heh, heh. Thanks X-Gamer. I'm a little flattered that you think my work is epic. 

Anyways, I have Level six finished!

6. Fortuna’s Orbit

Level Play: Arwing

Play Style: Rail

Boss: Mirage Dragon

Pre-Level

[Everyone except Fox are in the Grea Fox’s Control room. Fox enters]

Peppy: Fox! We’ve just received some more information about the shades, from the Cornerian Army.

Fox: What is it?

Peppy: supposedly, they are working on some sort of bio-weapon on Fortuna. Unfortunately, they couldn’t get to Fortuna, because the planet is surrounded by a barricade of Shade troops

Falco: This must be some weapon they’re working on, if the whole planet is barricaded!

Slippy: So what do we do now, guys?

Falco: What do ya think, you idiot? We gotta break through that barricade, and find this bio weapon!

Fox: Everyone, to the arwings!

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Level Play

[beginning Part]

Shade Commander: Report!

Shade Pilot: All spaces checked. No, intru--

[A battleship is blown up]

Shade Pilot: Emergency! We‘re under attack!

Falco: Hah! You morons are too slow!

Slippy: Let’s give these guys a piece of our mind!

Fox: Stay focused guys. And take it to them!

Krystal: Roger.

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Slippy: Woah! They’ve really got this planet blocked off, huh?

Krystal: This bio weapon must be very important to the shades

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Falco: Damn, these guys are everywhere!

[Middle Part]

Shade Pilot: They made it through our heavy crusiers!

Shade Commander: Sic the scouters after them!

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Peppy: Be careful! Those ships are very fast!

[Later Part]

Shade Pilot: Sir! They’ve broke through the scouters!

Shade Commander: Ggggrrrr! Send in the dreadnaughts!

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Falco: Wow! Look out!

Slippy: Those ships are MASSIVE!

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Shade Pilot: Sir! They’ve made through!

Shade Commander: GRRAAHHH!!! CAN ANYONE GET THEM?!

[boss intro]

Fox: Finally! We can get to Fortuna!

Slippy: Wait! What is that?

[A yellow light dances in front of them]

Voice: …You like her, don’t you?…

Fox: That voice!

Krystal: I’m sensing strong energy coming from that light!

Voice: …you like her…but how far will you go to protect her?…

[The light begins to circle rapidly]

Fox: What’s going on?

Voice: …beware my sons…

[the screen goes completely white]

Voice: The dragon awakens!

[the white goes away, and a huge dragon appears]

Fox: Whoooaaahh!! What is that!?

Falco: Look out Fox! Here it comes!

[in Boss fight]

Peppy: Aim, for his hands Fox!

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Falco: I don’t suppose that this thing is the bio weaponm do you?

Slippy: I doubt it. I don’t think they could construct this in such short time.

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[The skin evaporates, revealing a mechanical skeleton]

Falco: Hey! This thing was just a big machine!

Fox: Hang on guys, where not done yet!

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Peppy: Aim for that glowing thing, in the machine's ribcage!

[if you win]

Fox: There! Now let’s check out Fortuna!

Voice: Ha, ha, ha…this was only the beginning, Fox McCloud…

[end of level six]

(By the way guys, I have Star Fox's and Rover Wings' game plot done, but star wolf's is a bit...underdeveloped. If you have any ideas, you'd like to share, just send me a PM)

[That Guy]

Sorry for the double post. I just wanted to say that Level 7 will come eventually. Right now, I'm a senoir in High School, and everythings coming down to the wire. So fo the those that were reading my script will have to wait, till I get school under control

[Guest DRL]

Looks very cool so far.

Keep the good work!  :cool:

[That Guy]

People rejoice! I've finished Level 7!!! *WHOO!*

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7. Fortuna’s Jungle

Play Style: Hydro Angel (basicly, a jet ski)

Level Play: Rail/On Foot

Boss: Bio-Levaith

Pre Level

Fox: Okay, we’ve made it through.

Falco: Huh! Those guys weren’t so tough! It was like they didn’t even try!

Slippy: So what do we do now?

Fox: I’ll go down and check out the rivers with the Hydro Angel. I want you to scan the treetops for any shades.

Krystal: I’ll come with you.

Fox: No. It’s too dangerous for you to go.

Krystal: But Fox, the Hydro Angel doesn’t have any weapons on it! You don’t think that the shades won’t be down there, do you?

Fox: U-u-uh…um…

Krystal: You know how good I am with a pulse rife. I can shoot down enemies for you, while you pilot the Hydro Angel.

Fox: Um…alright, fine. You can come. But I still want you two to search the treetops.

Falco&Slippy: Got it!

[Fox and Krystal leave]

Level Play

[beginning Part]

Falco: Hey Fox! We just saw a squad of shades disappear into the trees!

Slippy: Be careful, you two!

Fox: Will do.

Krystal: Don’t worry about us, guys.

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Fox: Here they come!

Krystal: I’ll take them down!

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Fox: Enemies coming from the water!

[Middle Part]

Krystal: How’s the Hydro Angel, doing?

Fox: She’s riding just fine.

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Peppy: Fox, be on the look out. Scanners show a lot of shades in your area.

Fox: We’ll take care of them!

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[Later Part]

Krystal: I’m sensing the energy of a large creature up ahead.

Fox: That must be the bio-weapon! Let’s go!

[boss Intro]

*a cut-scene plays*

[Kayos flies by Fox and Krystal. He’s on a jet pack. He turns and is in front of them]

Kayos: Ee, ha, ha, ha! Well, hello Fox, and his mystic girlfriend!

Fox: It’s that creep again!

Kayos: I must admit, you’re quite determined Mr. McCloud, but this is where you’ll meet your match! We’ve got our selves a new pet, and he could use some exercise. Come, Bio-Levaith! It’s time for your workout~!

[A giant half machine half crocodile rises in front of Fox and Krystal]

Krystal: Oh my…!

Kayos: Eh, heh! Let’s see you wriggle your way out of this!

[in boss fight]

Peppy: Aim for that core on it’s chest.

The following are said repeatedly

--Kayos--

[Taunt 1]: Ha, ha! Yes! Go my pet!

[Taunt 2]: Give it up! It’s useless to resist!

[Panic 1]: Hmm, you’re more cunning than I first thought

[Panic 2]: Ack! This can’t be!

[if you win phase 1]

[the boss roars, then strikes the Hydro Angel. Fox and Krystal go flying toward opposite banks. Krystal gets up and see the creature direct his attention toward Fox, on the bank opposite of her. She shoot the monster with her gun and the thing turns around.]

[during phase 2]

Fox: Krystal! Try aiming at his mouth!

The following are said repeatedly

--Kayos--

[Taunt 1]: Are you terrified yet?

[Taunt 2]: Hmph! Think you can take our pet down? By yourself?

[Panic 1]: Arhg! This isn’t possible!

[Panic 2]: You wench! You’ll pay for this!

[if you win phase 2]

[The creature sparks up and explodes (but not in a gory way. More like a typical starship kind of way) and sends Kayos flying into the brush. Fox dives into the water to swim to Krystal. Suddenly he‘s pulled under by a shade]

Krystal: Fox!

[she’s about to dive for him, but then Fox pops up]

Fox: No, Krystal! Get away!

[He tussles with the shade, and get thrown down into the water. Krystal shoots the shade. Meanwhile, Fox hits his head on a rock underwater and tries to swim, but fails. He leans his head back and sees a black figure swimming towards him, but he then blacks out]

[Post Level]

[On the Great Fox. Krystal and Fox are in a bed. Krystal is cuddling Fox’s head in her arms. Someone unfamiliar is with them (not in bed, but just in the vicinity)]

???: Ah, ya know, me pet, ya don’t have tah coddle ‘is head like that.

Krystal: I know, but It makes me feel better.

[Fox groans]

???: Is he coming back? Ey! ‘ello?

[Fox awakens. He sees a badger standing over him]

???: Ah! Good morning wor kid!

Fox: Huh? Who are you?

Krystal: Oh, this is Dexter. He saved you from drowning.

Dexter: Eh, all in the line of duty.

Fox: I need to…need to get…

Krystal: No Fox, you need to rest.

Fox: Kry-Krystal…

Krystal: Fox, you almost drowned! You almost died on Fortuna! Your body is weak and needs to rest.

Fox: [groans]

Krystal: Besides, It would make me feel better.

Fox: uh…oh al right.

Dexter: well, if ye don’t mind, I’ll be off.

Krystal: Thank you, so much

Dexter: Ah, no problem love!

[Dexter exits. Cut to Fox and Krystal sleeping together. Fox is fast asleep, but Krystal is awake.]

Krystal: …Fox? Are you awake?

Fox: [moans]

Krystal: [Thinking] you’re always trying so hard to protect me Fox. Though sometimes I think you try a little too hard. Is this your way of showing affection? …strange…

[she puts an arm over him]

Krystal: [Whispers] …I love you…

[after the scene ends, a text bubble appears]

Congratulations! You can now select Rover Wings from the Team select menu!

[End of level seven]

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Next up: Level 8: Krystal's Nightmare

[X-Gamer]

Nice! Like you creativity on bosses. Keep it up!  :D

[That Guy]

Heh heh, Thanks 

I'm almost done with Level 8. Expect a plot twist, and some nostalgia!

[That Guy]

Al righty then, I'm done with level eight!

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8. Krystal’s Nightmare

Play Level: On Foot

Level Style: Roam

Boss: Nightmare (creative, no?)

Pre-Level

[Krystal is asleep alone in bed. Suddenly a voice is heard]

Voice: …Krystal…

[she opens her eyes]

Voice: …Krystal…

[she gets up]

Voice: …Krystal…report to the control room…

Krystal: Who…who is that? Who are you?

Voice: …Krystal…you must go to the control room…

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Level Play

[beginning Part]

The following are said repeatedly

--Voices 1(these are used as ambience)---

Slippy: Scanners show nothing

Slippy: I don’t like this

Falco: Hey Fox! Where are you going?

Falco: Where is the master?

ROB: SHADES IN THE AREA

Peppy: Good work team.

Peppy: We’ve got to find him

--Voices 2 (These are spoken by that ghostly krazoa voice)--

…Krystal…

*Incomprehensible chatter*

…He likes you…just as you like him…

…Krystal…the last mystic…

--Krystal---

…Is this a dream?

Something doesn’t feel right…

I’ve got a bad feeling.

[Middle Part]

*a cut scene plays*

[Krystal enters the control room. Fox is standing in there, motionless]

Krystal: Fox? What are you doing up?

[He doesn’t respond]

Krystal: …Fox?

Voice: You like him, don’t you?

Krystal: [looks around] Who said that? Who are you?

Voice: Yes…he was always there for you, ever since he met you on Sauria…

[a door rises up from the floor. Krystal walks through it, and the screen goes white]

Fox’s voice: Wow…she’s beautiful!

Krystal‘s voice: You were…in my dream…

General Scales voice: You WILL tell me! Where can I find the Fox?

Krystal’s voice: Fox! Look out!

[the whit goes away, and Krystal is on Sauria. She has her staff in her hand. There are sharp claws around the area]

Krystal: Wha…what? How…

[she sees Fox in the distance walk away.]

Krystal: Fox! Wait up!

*back to game-play*

The following are said repeatedly

--Ambient Voices--

Fox: Well…that didn’t work out…

Fox: I guess we’d better help her

Fox: Let’s go! There’s no time to lose

Tricky: I can still hear you fox!

Tricky: Fox! Look!

Tricky: Krystal!

Scales: Get this out of here!

Scales: Surrender your fortress!

Scales: Finish him!

[Later part]

*a cut scene plays*

[Krystal reaches the entrance to a Krazoa temple. Another door rises in front of her]

Voice: He was there for you when the Aparoids invaded…

[Krystal enters the door, and the screen goes white again]

Krystal’s Voice: It must have a weak point…everything does!

Fox’s Voice: Team Star Fox…Ready for duty!

Oikonny: No quarter! Show these dogs we mean business!

[The white goes away, and she’s on Sauria, again, but this time she has a gun, and there are Aparoids all around.]

Krystal: …this…this must be a dream…

*back to game play*

--Ambient Voices--

Oikonny: Stealth squadron open fire!

Wolf: when the time comes, just act!

Falco: Slippy! You’ve already got bogeys on your tail!

Slippy: Thanks dad!

Peppy: Roll to deflect its attack!

[boss intro]

*a cut scene plays*

[A final door rises, and Krystal enters. Once inside, everything is black. The shuts behind her.]

Voice: yes…he was always there…

[Fox materializes beside her.]

Krystal: But what if he wasn’t there?

[Fox disappears]

Krystal: Fox!

[suddenly, a large wire framed head materializes out of nowhere, and wire framed arms (4) rise from the ground.]

[in boss fight] 

--Voice (said repeatedly)--

Can you defeat this monster?…

*Cackling*

I can feel your anxiety

Why not try to hit the hands first?

[After you destroy the hands]

--Voice--

I’ve underestimated you…

Try aiming for that red ball…in his head…

[if you win]

[The wire frame disappears, and Fox falls from the ceiling and lands on the ground]

Krystal: Fox!

[she runs over to him. His chest is bleeding]

Fox: …Krystal [puts his hand on her cheek]…I…

Krystal: [sobbing] Fox…don’t…please…[she lays her head on him]

Fox: Krystal…Krystal…

[Post Level Cut scene]

Slippy: Krystal! Krystal, wake up!

[Krystal shoots up]

Slippy: Krystal! We have an emergency!

Krystal: What!? What’s wrong?

Slippy: Fox’s gone! We can’t find him!

Krystal: WHAT?!

[They run into the control room. Peppy and ROB are there]

Krystal: Have you searched the enitire ship?

Peppy: Yes, but he was no where to be found!

[Falco runs in]

Falco: Guys! His arwing is gone!

Krystal: Oh no...where could he have gone?

ROB: UNKNOWN…PERHAPS HE WAS BORED?

[a beep is heard, and the shade emperor appears on the view screen]

Emperor: Good evening, star fox. Are you missing something? [chuckles]

Peppy: You twisted monster! What did you do with Fox!

Emperor: Oh, I’ve done nothing. Fox is right here. He just got here a couple of minutes ago

[The screen turns, and Fox is standing next to the emperor. His eyes are red, and his fur is completely white. He’s snarling. The team gasps.]

Krystal: Fox!

Emperor: Hah ha. You creatures are amazingly stupid. Do you really think I would let you get pass my barricade so easily? Do you think I would’ve given up information about a secret weapon just like that?

Slippy: this was…another trap?!

Emperor: [laughs] I knew as soon as I was introduced to this pilot that we wouldn’t be able to match his skill. That bio-weapon carried a potent, but non-lethal poison that…persuades people’s minds. It was injected when he struck your silly water toy!

[Falco grunts]

Emperor: now that I have lylat’s greatest pilot, none can stop my empire! I’ll see you all when I’ve conquered Lylat! Hah ha!

[Transmission ends]

[End of Level eight]

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[That Guy]

Since I'm on a roll today, I'm posting Level Nine! *WHOOHOO!!*

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9. Macbeth

Level Play: Arwing

Level Style: Rail/ARM

Boss: Shade Walker

Pre-Level

[On the Great Fox. Everyone’s in the control room]

Slippy: This is horrible! How are we supposed to fight these guys if we don’t have Fox around??

Falco: Calm down Slip!

Slippy: Calm down?? CALM DOWN?! How am I supposed to calm down when our best pilot is gone!? We’re doomed I tell you! DOOMED!!

Peppy: [hits Slippy]: Get a grip Slippy!

Slippy: …Sorry…

Peppy: Right now, let’s all just calm down. We need to find Fox ASAP! ROB, locate Fox’s arwing.

ROB: AFFIRMATIVE

[Krystal is fidgeting with her hair, while looking out the window.]

Falco: [walks to her] Now, don’t tell me you’re going crazy too, Krystal.

Krystal: No…I’m…I’m just worried

Falco: About Fox? Ah, don’t worry! We’ll get him back.

Krystal: It’s not that I’m worried about. I had this nightmare last night, where I couldn’t reach him. But when I did...he died…[tears up] I’m worried that my dream was an omen.

Falco: Nah, don’t be silly! We’ll get him back.

Krystal: …

ROB: I’VE LOCATED FOX’S ARWING. IT’S ON MACBETH.

Peppy: Good work ROB! Alright, everyone listen up. I know that we usually have Fox here giving the orders, but not today. You three must go on, and work together to bring back our fellow member.

Falco: Will do, Peppy.

Slippy: We won’t let the shades prevail over us!

Krystal: …we’ll get him back…

Peppy: Alright then team! To the arwings!

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Level-Play

[beginning Part]

By the way, you play as Krystal.

Krystal: Okay you two, let‘s find Fox!

Falco: Let’s extract some revenge on these damn shades!

Slippy: Nevertheless, let’s be careful!

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Peppy: Okay guys, our readings show that Fox is somewhere close. Keep on the look out!

Krystal: Roger.

[Middle Part]

Falco: Whoa! Look out! They’re coming from the mountains!

Slippy: AIEEE!!!!!

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Krystal: Keep focused you two! Fox is around here somewhere.

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Slippy: Look out for ground enemies!

[Later Part]

Slippy: Uh, guys? What just flew by us?

Peppy: Guys! That vehicle is carrying Fox’s signal! Chase after it!

Krystal: Roger. Now in pursuit!

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[boss intro]

[The large ship that flew by now sprouts four legs]

Boss: Hah ha! You think you can stop me? Go get them!

[Fox flies out of the vessel]

Fox: Must…get them…must…

Krystal: Fox!

Fox: Must…Krystal…get the last mystic…

Krystal: Fox! Snap out of it!

Falco: It’s no good Krystal! We need to ignore him for now and go after that vehicle!

[in Boss Fight]

NOTE: you’ll lose the fight if you shoot down Fox.

Peppy: Aim for those blue orbs on both sides of the ship!

--Boss (Said Repeatedly)---

[Taunt 1]: You can’t win! We’ve got the best pilot in the system!

[Taunt 2]: This planet will be your grave!

[Panic 1]: NO!

[Panic 2]: This can’t be possible!

[if you win]

Boss: GAAAAAHHHHH!!!! HOW?! WE HAD THE BEST PILOT IN LYLAT ON OUR SIDE!!!!

Fox: I…Must…gah…wha-what? What I am doing?

Krystal: Fox, are you all right?

Fox: Yeah, I’m fine…I’m okay.

[Post Level Cut Scene]

[All of them dock in the docking bay. They get out of their arwings, and Krystal runs over to Fox. She puts one hand on his chest and on his forehead.]

Krystal: Oh, Fox! are you all right?

Fox: Uh, yes. [He pries off her hand and holds them] I’m fine now.

Slippy: Fox!! You’re back! I-I thought for a minute that…*sniff*…that…

Falco: Oh give it a rest Slippy! Glad you’re back Fox.

Fox: Heh, never thought I’d hear you say that, Falco.

Falco: Hey, do you know how nutty these people are with out you here?

[Cut to the shade carrier. The Emperor is scolding the boss]

Emperor: Incompetence! Do you realize that we have just lost our ticket to domination!?

Boss: I’m sorry my lord…

Emperor: Bah! It doesn’t matter now. Head for Venom.

Boss: Ve-Venom my lord?

Emperor: Yes…we need to build up some arms, or else we’ll lose…

Boss: Yes my lord. We’ll set a course.

[end of level nine]

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[Guest DRL]

Nice job!

However I think it would be more

productive to be in a "barrel roll"

instead of a "roll"  ...  :oops:

[That Guy]

Nice job!

However I think it would be more

productive to be in a "barrel roll"

instead of a "roll"  ... 

Hah ha! nice joke!

...anyways, the final level for team star fox is going to be next. After i'm done with Star Fox's storyline, I can move on to star wolf!??

[That Guy]

Sorry for Double posting, but I thought that I'd take a small moment to talk about the shades:

Looks: I know I have been stingy on the descriptions, but roughly, the shades resemble the Dragonborn from Dn'D. Shades are completely black skined, and have glaring red eyes with no pupils. They are about the same height as the rest of the Star Fox Cast (4ft to 6ft) but some are quite tall (Porthos is roughly 6' 11"). Their hair are black as well.

(LINKS: Male: http://www.enworld.org/Pozas/Portfolio/dragonborn_warlord.jpg

            Female: http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/1425/dragonbornfemalebs1.jpg)

Sounds: The Shades do have normal sounding voices (as in they are not whispy or electronic). Some of them have spanish sounding accents, but most speak with either american or english accents

Now with that said, I'll describe the more important Shades:

---The Elite---

Thoren

Sex: Male

Age: 25

Height: 6' 2"

Look: Fairly normal for a shade...He doesn't have very well developed muscles. his body is simular to Falco's (of course, he still has his Shade features). a scar is over his right eye, and his hair is wild like. He dresses in a dark grey jacket, a red shirt, long brown slacks, and heavy black combat boots.

Voice: A spanish sounding accent, sort of like Antonio Banderes's

--

Kayos

Sex: Male

Age: 36

height: 5' 11" (though he's more like 5' 5" becasue he's almost always hunchend over)

Look: Like stated above, he's almost always hunched. He has a scranwy body, and a skinny taill that's about the twice length of his legs. instead of hair on his head, he has three fins on the back of his head. He's dressed in a black jumpsuit, that is accented with a white outline.

Voice: He sounds exactly like this: ---> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=77uOmPiAHwk

(I gues this guy really is a creep, eh?)

---

---Starla---

Sex: Female

Age: 22

Height: 5' 8"

Look: Starla is the only female member of the elites. She has a rather curvy body, and looks quite attractive even to normal people (in the rover wings story, she was abe to seduce a Cornerian Soldier into getting information). She's dressed a rather revealing outfit. She wears a short indigo, spaghetti strapted shirt, with a matching loincloth (that is almost as long as her legs), and has fingerless indigo gloves, that match her thigh height indigo boots

Voice: she also has a spanish accent. Unfortunately, I don't know anyone famous I could compare her to.

--

---Porthos---

Sex: Male

Age: 29

Height: 6' 11"

Looks: Porthos is very muscular, and is quite intimidating. He is shirtless, and wears long, torn jeans. His hair is in dreadlocks.

Voice: A Deep, Micheal dorn like voice

---

The Emperor

The emperor looks like a reagular shad, except that he is white with blue eyes. He's dressed in a black robe, and has a hood over his head (not unlike lord sidious of star wars). His voice is much like tim curry.

Well, that's it. I better get back to work on the final level of Star Fox's Game!

[That Guy]

Just an Update, I have some of venom done, but It's going to be awhile before I post.

[X-Gamer]

Can't wait! Hurry man! 

jks. I'm sure this next chapter is going to be just as awesome as the last.