Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 This is a story I started writing. Action/horror you could say. Probably wont like it. But its only one of the two series I write. Well here it is... Oh and yes it has some swearing just not anything heavy. Tell me what ya think. Yes it is a very long story. Enjoy The silenced knife... Chapter 1 "Kyle wake up!" said a young man. "what the hell! Oh its just you." said Kyle Kyle stood up andfixed his hair like always. Kyle was a 19 year old male, with a mullet, dark brown hair and glasses. "you think you could leave so I can change?" said Kyle. "well ya im not stupid" said the other man. Anthony: really big compaired to most people, 18 years old, buzzed hair that was blonde. "Hey got anything good to eat?" said Anthony. "Hell no. This place is shit I got nadda here." said Kyle. "pfft" figures, not like you eat." said Anthony. "True" Kyle replied. Kyle comes out wearing the one out of the five shirts he has. "You know you like Metallica Anth." Said Kyle. "whatever." Anthony replied. "So we meeting the others at the corner again?" Asked Kyle. "yeah, if you didn't sleep till 7 PM we would be there already." Said Anthony. As theye walked down the street they noticed it to be oddly quite. They got to the corner and noticed no one around. "What the hell. Theyshould have been here by now. Said Kyle. "Hey thares there car." Said Anthony. The noticed it wasn't slowing at all. "wow hold up guys!" Said anthony. They jumped out of the way. "Dude what the hell is wrong with you guys!" Yelled Kyle. There was no reply. The car turned. It was coming striaght at them. Anthony pulls out his pistol and starts firing. "Why you shooting!" Yelled Kyle. There not stopping there gonna freakin' kill us!" Anthony yelled back. Kyle pulls out his knife. This won't hurt to much. and waits for the car to get closer. He jumps on the hood and kicks the glass out. "Hey assholes this is your last chance!" He yelled at them. "Freakin' idiots." He said quitely. He climbed on the side and grabbed the passenger out, jumps into the car and grabs and breaks the drivers rist. Not a single yell of pain or anything. Kyle pushes him out of the car and grabs wheel. He stops the car and gets out. "What the hell is wrong with them?" Kyle asked. "look there getting back up." Anthony said. "Take em down Anth." Kyle said. "I can't we might not know if these are even them or enemies." Anthony said. "fag" Kyle smurked. Ran toward the one and stabbed him direct hit in the stomache. Anthony shot the other one. "not to hard to kill a man these days." Kyle said. "Lets get going." Kyle said. As they were walking back they heard alot of noises. Unhuman noises. They saw people coming from all sides. "shit." Kyle said lowly. "They don't seem human. There skin color is greenish brown. They don't speak and they don't even yell in pain. I don't think its healthy if they get us. So lets kill 'em all!" Kyle said. "No prob." Anthony said. END CHAPTER ONE... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 Sorry about all those enters but when I wrote this it was on the notepad thing and stuff so I did that : SORRY! I'll fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvolutionSFox Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 Certainly is different, but, I guess it's okay. (blasted part where I didn't know who the bad guy was though ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XG Fox Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 Moved topic here because it doesn't really belong in Off Topic. After all, it is a story and its not Starfox related, so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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