Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 Blitzkrieg By Mithos Kionisu Prolog: "During the months proceding the Aparoid invasion, there was a sudden influx in pirate activity, most noteably by the space pirates of Starwolf and the nearly forgotten Schwarzer Tod. The two pirate groups caused havok on the galaxy's trade lanes. Starwolf, after suffering heavy damage after engaging the Cornerian fleet on a few unlucky occasions, fled and went into hiding only to resurface later during the Aparod invasion. The Swartzer Tod on the other hand, proved much more difficult to put down. Four of the Cornerian Navy's top Piolets; Mithos Kionisu, Sarenta Kionisu, Azrael Kionisu, and Chis Spadafuoco, having decided the Cornerian goverment too corrupt for their liking, stole a prototype Arwing MK II and disappeared during the closing days of the Lylat Wars. The four of them resurfaced with what appeared to be 4 heaviily modified Arwing MK II prototype's. These craft were far supperiour to any in the Cornerian fleet and proved more then a match for the Arwing MK I's of the Star Fox team. At one point, Azrael tried to spy on his friends for Corneria to try and get off the hook for his crimes, when the others discovered his treachery he was shot in his sleep. It wasnt untill the Arwing MK II was completed, and in the hands of Star Fox, that the Schwarzer Tod and their flag ship, the Death's Hand, were defeated, however they escaped capture and fled to the outer rim of the galaxy, roughly two years ago. They are now Corneria's Number One Most Wanted, after Star Wolf disapeared, presumed dead, during the assualt on the Aparoid home world. The current wearabouts of the Swartzer Tod are unkno-." The general shut off the recording and sighed, he had heard it before, nearly everyone had, but he was one of the few that knew the true ending to the story. He looked out the window of his personal cruser at the large asteroid where they were to dock. "Political Prison Deadly Silence...Heh....wonder how they came up with that name." The general was a Huskey, in his late fiftys with sunken in eyes. The silence was disrupted by a knock at his door. "General Versaylis? Their ready for you to come aboard." the officer squeaked, he hoped the general wasn't busy, General Versalis was known for his fowl temper, much unlike General Pepper. "Alright Lutenent, I'm on my way." The general stepped out of his quarters and made his way off the ship, deep into the bowels of the station. He stopped infront of cell# 1-3-3-7 and peered inside. Through the darkness, three sets of eyes stood out, unblinking, watching him. "Hello boys" the general said, "getting sick of this place?" "What do you think you peice of scum?" One of the sets of eyes replyed. The general shrugged off the coment and continued, "I've got a deal for you, get you out of here in no time." There was a pause, and another of the inmates replyed, "We're listening..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 Chapter 1: The Calm Before... Fox sighed. He was bored, there was no getting around it. There hadn;t been much action latley, save for when Oikonny, who had miracurously survived the attack of the Aparoids, tried to reform the Star Wolf team with new members and himself al the leader. Sure the four minutes it took to put a stop to that were amusing, but it didn't change the fact that he was bored as hell now. Normaly during situations like this he would hang out with Krystal or Flaco, but Falco was busy tweaking his Arwing Interceptor, and Krystal...he wasn't exactly the first person she wanted to be alone with, not after they uncovered Corneria's full report on the first campang that Star Fox was involved in on Fichina... "Atleast Krystal decided to rejoin the team...." Fox mused. "May as well go waist time arguing with Falco." he thought aloud as he hopped off his bed and moved into the crammped hallway. Due to cash flow problems, the new Great Fox was smaller and more cramped then it's predacesser, Fox had to walk sideways to get passed Slippy on his way to the hanger. Upon entering he found Falco right where he expected him to be, beneath the distinctive forward swept wings of his Arwing Interceptor. Fox sighed, "Why did you even buy that peice of junk Falco?" "How many times are you ganna ask me that question? It's getting old." Falco replyed from beneath his craft. "Old? That Interceptor's going on 12 years." Fox said as he made his way over to the Arwing. "I don't care how old it is, its faster and more manuverable then your Arwings." Falco then stood up from beneath his Arwing and stretched his back "Besides, I didn't see you complaining last mission when I saved your hide." Fox was about to reply when Peppy came on over the P.A. System "Fox General Pepper is on the line, looks pretty important." "All right Peppy, I'm on my way." Fox replyed "Come on Falco." Fox turned and headed towards the meating room with Falco not far behind. When they arrived everone else was waiting for them. "Whats the problem General?" Fox asked as he sat down, on the complete oposit side of the room as Krystal, naturaly. The old general shook his head "Krystal how many times do we need to apologise?" Krystal was opening her mouth to speak but the general mearly continued, "We've detected the detonation of a thermonuclear device some where in the Asteroid Belt, we've sent a fleet to investigate, but since your in the area we would like you to check it out." Falco rolled his eyes "So we're basicly canon fodder right?" "No no" the general replyed " but I highly doupt theres anything to be worried about, also, we're are sending a new cadet, Tom, along with you so he can gain some experiance in an Arwing. Plus theres some money involved which I know your in need of." Latley, the missions Generla Pepper has been sending them on, seem to get worse and worse, but as he said, they were in desprate need of money, which was becoming a common theme for them, so They accepted and were soon off to the source of the explosion, deep inside the Asteroid belt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvolutionSFox Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 Very good... tight compact Greatfox 2, I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted January 1, 2006 Share Posted January 1, 2006 DATA FILE #1 The destruction of Cerinia Cerinia was once a grand citystate on the planet Fichina. Shortly after the Lylat wars Cerinia got involved in a war with a neiboring city over control of the climate control center. When Corneria was forced to intervien they allied against Cerinia and began several bombing runs on the citystate. Starfox was called in to assist on the bombing raids and was responsible for major damage to the city. It wasn't untill the months following the Aparoid invasion that them members of Star Fox found out about this, Krystal left the team but eventually rejoined as Starfox was the only family she had left. However, any love Krystal had for Fox was dead and gone. Part 3 will be up soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted January 1, 2006 Share Posted January 1, 2006 Chapter 2: ...The Growing Storm Deadly Silence housed some of Corneria's most wanted crimminals, however, the fact that those crimminals had actually been captured has remained secret, when ever the public began to loose faith in the Chancellor, they would reveal the capture of a dangerous individual, this was the fate the Schwarzer Tod awaited since their surrender on Stigma. The silver vulpine slowly stepped out of the shadows on the cell they had been forced to share for the last two years. "What was it you had in mind?" He had a gruff, raspy voice, probably due to the poor food that the inmates were served the general thought. "Heres the deal; I set you free, give you a full pardom for your past crimes, and supply you with new, top of the line ships, all you need to do is destroy Star Fox." Sarenta, the pale blue vulpine, was the first to break the stunned silence. "Let me get this straight...you want to set us loose with the sole intent to kill off some of your best allies? Why would you want that?" "Simple" he replyed, "The people of Corneria trust Star Fox more then their own military. I wish to show them that Star Fox is not infalable." "Your doing this on your own arnt you? Without the knowlage or support of the other generals." Chis asked, stepping forward to join his friends. The orange vulpine was easily a full head taller than General Versaylis. "Not as such....but I'm sure everyone will see that this is for the best." The general paused, "So do we have a deal or what?" "...Deal." They all said in unision. The general led them down to the hanger where their new ships were stored. "You will each recive a Junkers Heavy Fighter-S space superiority starfighter and one Destroyer class starship" The general explained, "The Junkers HF-S are each equipped with one Gauss Canon mounted on the bottom of the ship and four Plasma Assualt Canons, two on each side next to to wings..." "Then general sure likes to hear himself talk." Chis wispered to the others. "-material which disrupts radar, and a reflective black paint job makes the Junkers HF-S nearly invisable while in flight. The same goes for the Destroyer. You will also find that your personal belongs are onboard the destroyer...well, what you had on you at your time of capture that is, I understand most of your things were lost when team Star Fox destroyed the 'Death's Hand' over Katina..." The group came up to three black, angular fighters with red engines being loaded into the hanger bay of the Destroyer 'CP Razor' with the General's flagship, the 'CP Glorious Faith' docked along side it. Sarenta and Chis went over to check out the new fighters while Versaylis stayed behind with Mithos. "Is there anything else you need to destroy the Star Fox team?" He asked, hopping they wouldn't require much else, he was running low on funds... "All your current information on Star Fox, and about...six-teen Tactical Nukes." Mithos replyed. "Six-teen NUKES!?" The general yelped, " Don't you think that's a tad overkill? I doupt I could trust you with one, much less six-teen..." Mithos put his arm around the general's shoulder. "Oh come on, between us two traitors, whats not to trust?" Mithos grinned "Besides, they're....precautionary, I doupt we'll use them." The general sighed, mentaly reschedualing his planned vaction to Fortuna, and agreed. A few hours later, the Razor all loaded up and leaving the Radar feild of the Deadly Silence, the general sighed inwardly and wondered if this was truly the best thing to do. "General Versaylis?" And deck hand, running up to him asked. "What is it Privet?" The general replyed, turning to him. "The Schwarzer Tod forgot one of the bombs." The deck hand said, pointing across the hanger to where it lay. "Odd..." The general said to himself as he made his way over to the bomb. Then the general saw the active countdown timer reading: 00:00:04 "Oh fu-" 00:00:00. From the deck of the Razor, a sudden, blinding white light could be seen in the distance as the wrath of the Gods was unleashed, burning through the entire station in the blink of an eye. Mithos smiled as he put on his black trench coat, glad to see it still fit, and thought to him self; They were free. Junkers HF-S Feedback helps me write chapters faster Next Chapter: The Blitz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvolutionSFox Posted January 1, 2006 Share Posted January 1, 2006 ... Treachery? Yay violence! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orbital Fox Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Nice! It's a great fan fic.! The only things I noticed is a few spelling mistakes and grammer, but other than that, it's beautiful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jal Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Spadafuoco lol. Great fanfic keep up the good work!. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 The first big action chapter! This chapter contains lots of swearing, which has been edited for this post, if you want the unedited version, PM me and I will send it to you. Chapter 3: The Blitz Tom Nook was a Racoon in his early twenties, He had wanted to open up a store back on Eladard (The planet Eladard was to be featured in the cancelled Star Fox 2 game for the SNES. It is an Industrial Center covered with numerous factories.) but his parents had forced him into the Cornerian Navy. "It's no so bad" He thought, "Chicks did military types." He had just been promoted to an Arwing squadren and was acompaning team Star Fox on a simple investigation mission "Good for getting used to and Arwing." he mused. Being a non combat mission he wasnt to worried about the fact that he was flying out of the formation. As they flew closer to the center of the Asteroid Belt, his Arwing's H.U.D. buzzed in, "WARNING! HIGH RADIATION LEVELS DETECTED! ETA TO LEATAL EXPOSURE: 00:17:42 "Uhh...you guys getting this too?" He asked over the COMM. "Yes" Krystal replyed, "Don't Worry, we'll be out of here long before then." They flew in silence for a few minutes, then Fox chimed in "I don't see why they want us to investigate an explosion way out here, I mean it's the middle of no- wait...those don't look like asteroids...more like wreakage..." "That looks like part of the hull of a Cornerian Frigate....what happened here." Falco wondered. "I don't like this" Tom replyed, "It's too quiet..." Slippy groaned. "OFCORSE it's quiet! What would you expect after a nuclear explosion?" "Bah, your probably rig-" Tom would never finish his sentance, as the first guass round went clean through his cockpit, his head, and his engine, destroying his Arwing instantly. "CRAP! TOM!" Fox yelled. "Where the Heck did that come from?!" Krystal asked, searching the debris field for signs of movement. Their answer came quicky, as three large fighter craft rocketed from their hiding places, straight towards them, plasma canons blazing. On the bridge of the Great Fox, Peppy was trying to figure out what had happened through the garbled static transmitions he was reciving (due to the radiation). "Kssk...-vrywhere....kssk LOOK OU- kssk...On my tail...kssk...Falco! Do a Barrel Roll!...kssk...SHUT UP YOU DAMN TOAD! kssk...Whatch that guass fire!...kssk....Who are these guys?!? kssk..." "Fox? Falco? Anyone? Answer me! What the Heck is going on out there?! ...Dangit! ROB! Can you tell whats going on?" The old hare asked impationtly. "NEGATIV" Was the reply. "Dangit." Peppy swore for not the last time. "CRAP!" Fox thought, "Krystal and Falco are in trouble, these guys are too good for Slippy to handel on his own CRAP." Fox swerved as a deadly plasma bolt lanced by where his wing was a mear second before. "And I can't help cuz I've got one of them on MY tail and he's gaining on me." Fox swearved again, dodging another burst of plasma fire. "Kssk....Aww, whats the matter? The great Fox McCload afraid?" Came over his comm. "That voice...Mithos?! Gods Dangit what the Heck are you doing here? Why are you doing this?" Fox demanded angrily. "Kssk...We just got let out, felt like stretching our wings." Came Mithos' reply. "Let's see how good your ships can turn Mith." Fox taunted as he swearved and pulled into a tight turn, hoping the larger ship couldn't make as tight a turn, he pulled out of it, just in time for the guass round to destroy his wing, with Mithos still on his tail. "Dangit!" Fox yelled. "Kssk...He's on my tail! I can't shake him!" Krystal yelled over the comm. "My engines heavilly damaged, I can't hold out much longer..." Falco added. Sarenta grinned, she was about to make her first kill in what felt like eternity. "Falco, any last words?" Her finger brushed the trigger, eagerly waiting as she lined up the killing shot. A sudden explosion from the bottom of the ship threw of her aim. "The Heck?" She cried out. Then she saw Slippy's Arwing flying up from beneaith her, right in her crosshairs. "You'll pay for that." She smirked and pulled the trigger, then verred off to find Falco again. The guass round rocketed from Sarenta's ship at near lightspeed and hit it's mark. Detonating on the nose cone of Slippy's ship, sending him flying out of controll. "GAHH!" Slippy yelled as he tried to regain some controll of his ship. "WARNING!" His H.U.D. chimmed "ETA TO LEATAL RADIATION EXPOSURE: 00:04:58 WARNING! CRITICAL DAMAGE DETECTED! FRONT LANDING GEAR AND NOVA BOMB BAY UNRESPONSIVE!" The warnings continued to pop up, blocking his feild of vission. Slippy angrily shot off the auto warning system, it wasn't ganna do him anygood now, Heck, the front half of his Arwing was gone. "Well, this is going far less well then desired..." Chis had Krystal dead in his sights, he bombarded hew Arwing with plasma fire to soften her up for the guass canon. He was just about to fire when a waring poped up on his H.U.D. "WARNING! SUBSPACE ANOMILY DETECTED!" "What the Heck does that mean?" He wondered, then he saw it, ten Cornerian Zeram-class Cruisers were warping into the Area. "Kssk...Chis! Sarenta! Time to retreat, we don't stand a chance against those cruisers!" Mithos said over the comm. "Aww...Can't I atleast take this one out?" Chis asked. "No, return to the Razor and lets get out of here, that's an order Chis." Mithos replyed. "Alright, alright, I'm going." Chis grumbled and veered off towards the hidden Razor. The three of them landed and the Razor warped out of the Asteroid feild as the Corneria fleet opened fire. "Dangit, they got away...Thanks for the save General Pepper, another minute longer and we would have been toast." Fox said over the comm. "Come on team lets regroup on the Great Fox, we can fill General Peeper in from there." While Fox and the others went ahead to the meeting room, Slippy stayed behind to check out the damage to the Arwings. What he say nearly brought him to tears when he thought how much it was going to cost to get them fixed. Sorry if the ending of the chapter seems kinda rushed, its 3 am and i'm too tired to think of a better ending. As I said last chapter, feed back helps me get these done faster :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted January 4, 2006 Share Posted January 4, 2006 Gah, ok, school started back up so thats ganna interrupt my writing time, and all my various side projects dont help much, never the less I'm still working on it. I have a few plot twists instore, and I can garentee you, before this is over atleast one major character will die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 Just trying a different writing style, one where i dont have to use 'he saids' so often, tell me which style your prefer more Chapter 4: Welcome Silence Mithos murred softly, it had been so long since he, or any of them for that matter, had a chance to take a nice hot shower. He idley toyed with the small ruby hanging from his neck, a gift from Sarenta, he always wore it and she always wore a matching emrald.He finished up, stepped out of the shower and dried him self off. He threw his old navy trench coat on, the only part of the Cornerian Navy they still wore the rank insignia long since removed, and headded out to the kitchen to get some food. Nudity wasnt much of an issue for them, after all the years they've spent together, not to mention the time in prison, they were confortable being around eachother in just their fur. Plus he and Sarenta were very...familure with eachother. He yawned and poured him self some coffee and ran a furred finger over one of the many scars adorning his body, some much more recent then others. Chis came down the lift and found Mithos sitting at the table. "Hey Mith..err....I thought you didn't like coffee?" "I don't, I hate the stuff." "So...why are you drinking it?" "First drink I found." "Ah." "So what's up?" "Well, I was going over the data disk that that general gave us about Starfox..." "And?" "And, it appears their homebase is on Papetoon..." At this, Mithos quite literaly spitout his xoffee onto the wall and turned to stare at him. "Their home base....is on our home planet?!" "Looks like it." "Well crap, I'm not about to condone the bombing of my home planet..." "So what should we do? Considering the beating we gave them, they would most likley be heading there to repair and rest up..." "Papetoon IS a large trading lane junktion...I say we give Starfox a nice big welcome." Chis nodded and headed towards the bridge to change the course. Mithos smiled, today was going to be a fun day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted January 14, 2006 Share Posted January 14, 2006 New data file, I hope to add one or two more chapters over the weekend. DATA FILE #2 The Junkers HF-S The Junkers Ju-103 Heavy Fighter-Special, otherwise known as the Junkers HF-S, is a 4 of a kind craft custom built by the Junkers Company for an annonomis buyer. Designed to outperform the Arwing MK II, it would become infamous for its role in several battles. The custom 'Special' differs from the normal Junkers HF in the fact that it has four Plasma Assualt Cannons insted of two, a Gauss rifle replacing the Nova Bombs, and much more powerfull engines and armor. A coilgun (also known as Gauss gun or Gauss rifle) is a type of cannon that uses a series of electromagnets to accelerate a magnetic shell to very high velocities. The Gauss rifle on the Junkers HF-S fires a 17.50 cm Metal Slug at at speed of point four tenths (40%) the speed of light giving each slug massive amounts of kenetic energy, more then enough to puncher the armored plating of a small frigate . The Junkers HF-S Gauss rifle can fired about 1 slug per second. The Gauss rifle is manufactured by the Weyland-Yutani Corporation based in the Sol system. The Plasma Assault Cannon is a 5 cm Plasma Ion Cannon manufactured by the Landree Corperation of the Lylat system. The cannon fires a bolt of energy with power roughly equivalent to that of the 'hyper lazer' upgrade. The cannon can fire 240 bolts a minute (4 bolts per second) the cannon is extremly accurite and comes in hand held and vehicle mounted forms. The Junkers HF-S is equipted with 4 of these cannons. The Junkers HF-S has Two Primary and Three Secondary engines. The two Primary engines are very similar to those of the Arwing MK II but were special made by the Landree Corperation based on preformance record of the Arwing's engine (they didn't hold the pattent for the engine and had to make there own) The engine is very powerfull in space but can only exert a fraction of its power while in atmostphere. The three secondary engines greatly increase the Junker's speed , making it nearly twice as fast as the Arwing MK II, but drasticly decrease the manuverability. The engines can be used in both 'forward' and 'reverse' independantly, a skilled piolet can use this to make sharp, rapid turns and overcome the low manuverability flaws. The three secondary engines can only operate in space and are rendered useless in atmostphere. The Armor plating on the Junkers is remarkably strong. The armor literaly absorbs heat from projectiles, diverting most of the energy to add power to the engines or PAC's, while taking minimal amounts of damage. The armor is a reflective jet black, making the Junkers extremly hard to see against the backdrop of space. The armor also serves to absord radar signals rendering the Junkers almost invisable. The only exception to this is the armor on the three secondary engines, which are painted a dull red, and made of a less durable material, making them the weakest points of the ship. The Junkers HF-S was custom built for one purpose, and one purpose alone; to hunt down and kill the Arwing. Every part of the ship was designed around that goal, and adds up to be a deadly fighter. It is as of yet unknown how the Junkers would fair in a dogfight with a Wolfen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Next chapter! woo! And seriously, feedback helps me get these done, or else I get lazy and dont write them Chapter 5: Welcome Silence, Starfox Redux Fox sighed, it had been two days since the incident in the Asteroid Field, and the encounter with the Schwarzer Tod, who appear to have access to nuclear weapons. The Schwarzer Tod wern't neccisarily evil, he knew this, they just didn't like the Cornerian goverment and had a liking to piracy. Never the less, they wernt the kind of people you wanted roaming free around the galaxy, especially with nukes. And with only one operational Arwing and 3 Cornerian fighters given to them by General Pepper, they were in no condition to engage the Schwarzer Tod in combat. "But if we did defeat Schwarzer Tod." Fox said to himself. "the reward would be huge, mabey enough to buy a new ship!" A new ship was something they all wanted, their current ship was only a gunboat, very small. It only had 6 (cramped) sleeping quarters, a small hanger only wide enough for a single Arwing to launch or land at a time, and a bridge/rec room/kitchen combination on the upper level. Hell, there was only one bathroom on the entire ship! Gods how he longed for a dreadnought class ship like the old Great Fox. "Kssk...This is Peppy speaking, we will be ariving at Papetoon in less then half an hour. Fasten all seat belts, seal all entrances and exits, close all shops in the mall, cancel the 3-ring circus, secure all animals in the zoo... and get Fox up off his lazy ass. Thank you for flying Peppy Air." "Very funny!" Fox yelled angrilly, which everone on the ship heard. Fox jumped off his bed, hitting the low ceiling in the process, swore, and left his room. Everyone else, apart from slippy who was in the hanger, was on the bridge/rec room/kitchen. Krystal was eating soom ramen and Falco was staring out the window into the inky blackness beyond. "Hit your head on the ceiling agin Fox?" Falco asked. "You seem to do it all the time." "Well mabey if the ship wernt so damned CRAMPED I wouldnt hit my head so often." "Well mabey if you didn't jump out of bed like normal people you wouldn't have the problem in the first place." Krystal added. "Well mabey.....shut up." Fox said, knowing the argument was lost. "When will we get to Papetoon?" "Just about...now." ROB said as the (not so) Great Fox came out of warp. "Woah..." What is "Woah"? What did they see? find out next time! Same Starfox time, same Starfox place! Next Chapter: Fire Over Papetoon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orbital Fox Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Keep 'em comin'! They're great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
salmon45 Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 I like this fan fic. I like how you put in new ships and wepons and things. The data files give cool information and help flesh out the universe more. The new characters are neat. One thing though, your story could use some proof reading for spelling. Other than that very nice. Keep it up :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted February 1, 2006 Share Posted February 1, 2006 Ok, the next chapter (Fire over Papetoon) is almost done, ive been writing at on the bus to and from school and should be finished by tomarrow (its already at 5 pages) and will be the first to feature spell checked words! woo! also, ive gone back and cleaned up and changed a few things (like the name of the general's ship) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvolutionSFox Posted February 1, 2006 Share Posted February 1, 2006 ^ Yay corrections. How many chapters do you think there will be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted February 2, 2006 Share Posted February 2, 2006 about four more for part one (ganna be either 2 or 3 parts total) and I have the first few chapters (along with the last two) of the second part planned out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted February 5, 2006 Share Posted February 5, 2006 Ok, the next chapter is all written up in my note book (and totaly NOT 3 weeks late >_>) and it's ganna take a bit to get everything typed up and spell checked so I'm ganna edit this post with each section of the chapter as I get it typed in and spell checked. You also might like to know I've gone back and edited the posts of the earlyer chapters with propar spelling, and a few slight changes, nothing important. 3 sections of 16 up Chapter 6: Fire Over Papetoon The Greatfox warped in-system to a scene of utter chaos. All around them, ships varying from small, one man fighters, to huge cruisers, bristling with weapons, engaged each other in a huge spectacle of fire. A small squadron of Cornerian Bulldog fighters flew up along side them. "Star Fox? Is that you?" Came Bill's voice over the comm. "Damn, and here I thought we were getting reinforcements." "Bill whats going on? Fox asked, looking out at the massive battle. "A Cornerian Destroyer, the CP Razor, warped in-system about half an hour ago. She opened fire on a few frigates, who in turn fired upon other ships in the area. It started a chain reaction, leading to what you see now. We only have two battleships in system, we can't handle a situation like this!" "The Razor...I don't think I've heard of a Destroyer by that name before...arn't they named after Famous battles?" Peppy asked, his eyes closed in thought. "We checked the registry, it's a Valkyrie class Destroyer, a stealth ship, Valkyrie's have a different naming scheme. Aparently, the Razor belongs to General Versailles, unfortunately we haven't been able to make contact with either him or the Razor." "How do you know the Razor hasn't been destroyed or left system?" Krystal asked. "Simple, the Razor's tracking chip is still active. We are currently waiting for reinforcments, the only thing we can do right now is head in and try to make contact with the Razor, maybe find out what the Hell is going on..." "Alright, we're coming with you." Fox said, shutting off the view screen. "Krystal and Falco with me, Slippy, I want you to sit this one out, and put some ice on that wound." "Fox I'm fine to fly! It's only a bruise!" Slippy protested. "You slammed your head into your windshield in the last battle, you are NOT flying this mission." And with that, fox left the bridge towards the hanger, bringing an argument to an end. A few minutes later, Star Fox was in formation with elements of the Bulldog Squadron, Falco and Krystal in Cornerian fighters. "The Razor should be somewhere near the center of this mess..." Bill said. "We've got our work cut out for us..." "Remember." Bill's wing mate, Cpt Lance, said. "Do not engage, they are still civilians..." The squadron flew through a large hole in the still burning super structure of a dead cargo cruiser, the battle raged all around them as they exited the other side. Three Venosian fighters, now used as escort ships of the Weyland-Yutani Corporation, flew in formation and delivered the killing shots to a frigates weakened hull, destroying it as the Bulldogs flew past, they weaved around the wreckage and were ambushed and destroyed by a squadron of Junkers Heavy Fighters belonging to the Space Dynamics Co. (Note: The Junkers Heavy Fighters are not the same as the ones piloted by the Schwarzer Tod, the Junkers is a heavy fighter/bomber and three were heavily modified for use by the Schwarzer Tod. As a result they both look and preform much differently then the normal Junkers.) A large cruiser under heavy fire flew over the Bulldog squadron and collided with a smaller dreadnought. "...How in the Hell could one destroyer cause all this?" Krystal asked, watching the spectacle of death with amazement. "They are all merchant ships from rival companies." Fox said. "With the threat of pirates and industrial warfare, its no suprise their so jumpy. This place was one big powder keg, and the Razor was the spark." They flew on in silence for a while, dodging and weaving between battle ships and squadrons of fighters. After a few minutes, two battle ships came up along either side of them and opened fire upon each other. Tow pilots were killed and half the remaining squadron got separated. And then, all that lay before them were the hulks of many destroyed vessels. "Cpt Gray, two unidentified ships behind us. Distance 47 meters and closing, fast." The two black and red Junkers HF-S pulled up along either side of the squadren. "Cornerian pigs." Came Mithos' voice over the COMM. "Turn back now or face destruction. This is your only warning." With that, the two Junkers sped off infront of them and out of site behind the wreakage. Fox groaned. The Schwarzer Tod were here. The shit had really hit the fan now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvolutionSFox Posted February 6, 2006 Share Posted February 6, 2006 Oh... suspense, eh? *would love seeing the head to the wind shield accident* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 Good God its taking forever to get this up. I swear I will never work on Arwing, Wolfen, Gunblade, Junkers, or map models at the same time I'm trying to type up a chapter again. Speaking of which, the next part of the chapter is up. And Slippy slammed his head into his windsheild (would it even be CALLED a windsheild?) when Sarenta blew off the front part of his Arwing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted February 12, 2006 Share Posted February 12, 2006 New data file while I work on chapter 6, sorry for the little info on sarenta or chis, couldnt think of anything important to say about them in short notice. But thise does explain why they hate the Cornerians, AND sets up some plot points for later chapters. DATA FILE 3: Schwarzer Tod The Schwarzer Tod is a gang of Space Pirates, currently made up of three members. Mithos Kionisu Age: 28 Height: 6ft 8in Sex: Male Weight: 190 Species: Fox Fur: White (belly), Light Gray (rest of body) Hair: 48in Light gray (was unable to get it cut while in prision, unlike Sarenta or Chis, he kept his hair the way it was after escaping) Eyes: Bright Green (Red streaks beneath eyes) Mithos was born on Papetoon in the year 2302, six-teen years before the Lylat Wars (2318). He had one younger brother, Azrael. His best friends were Chis and Sarenta. At the age of five, Mithos, along with his brother and several others (including Chis and Sarenta) were abducted by the Cornerian Goverment for a military exparament, code named; Project: Trinity. The Cornerian Goverment was working on a next generation Space Superiority Fighter, named the Arwing. they were interested in seeing if soldiers raised from childhood would make better pilots then normal recruts. Thus Project: Trinity was born. In all, about 150 children were taken to be trained. Their Squadren was to be the 501st (the members gave them selves the nikname-Schwarzer Tod). Mithos, a born leader, quickly asserted him self to the become the commander of the squadren. The 501st became an incredably tight nit group, members refered to each other as brothers and sisters, extremly loyal to each other, they would not think twice about puting their life on the line to save one of their own. By age twenty-two (six years after the Lylat Wars) Mithos, like most of the 501st, had grown incredably angry at the Cornerian Goverment. When he heard of the new Arwing Prototype (Arwing MK 1.5 pt, not the Arwing MK I's used in 64) He and several of his brothers and sisters attempted to escape and steal the prototype. Only he, Sarenta (whom by this time he had fallen in love with), Chis, and Azrael managed to escape. Mithos had vowed to return for his brothers and sisters one day. For the next four years Mithos made several attempts to free his brethren, all ending in failure. He then decided to start Pirating Cornerian goods and weapons to make future attempts to free the 501st easyer. In 2327, he learned that his own blood brother, Azrael, had been sending information to the Cornerians inorder to get back on their good side. Mithos, Sarenta (by this time his mate) and Chis, executed him for 'treason to the cause'. The Schwarzer Tod were defeated later that year (only months before the events in Assault) by StarFox. They fled to Katina where they eventually surendered to the Cornerian Fleet. They would spend the next few years in the secret political prision Deadly Scilence, untill their escape in 2330. Mithos' prefered weapons include his Katana and his Gunblade (more on the gunblade in a later data file) Due to a war injury in sectory Y, Mithos has contracted a leathal lung disease currently with out a cure. Mithos knows he is dieing, it is not known how much time he has left, but is determined to bring as much pain to the Corenerian Goverment as he can and free his brethren in the 501st. The disease will sometimes act up, sending him into a fit of coughing. ------------ Sarenta Kionisu Age: 27 Height: 6ft 5in Sex: Female Weight: 170 Species: Fox Fur: White (belly), Light blue/gray (rest of body) Hair: 40in Light brue/gray Eyes: Blue Sarenta was born on the planet Papetoon in the year 2303 and her life is almost exactly the same as Mithos'. She is an excelent pilot, like the rest of the 501st, an even match against the StarFox team (provided they all piloted the same vehicle) She, like Mithos and Chis, belive they are working for the greater good. They see the Cornerian Goverment as evil and corrput and wish to free their brethren. Sarenta also carries a gunblade. ---------- Chis Spadafuoco Age: 27 Height: 7ft 3in Sex: Male Weight: 220 Species: Fox Fur: White (belly), Red (rest of body) Hair: 2in Red Eyes: Brown. Chis was born on the planet Papetoon in the year 2303 and his life is almost exactly the same as Mithos'. Hee is an excelent pilot, like the rest of the 501st, an even match against the StarFox team (provided they all piloted the same vehicle) He, like Mithos and Sarenta, belive they are working for the greater good. They see the Cornerian Goverment as evil and corrput and wish to free their brethren. Chis also carries a gunblade. ------------ Azrael Kionisu Age: N/A Height: 6ft 4in Sex: Male Weight: 140 Species: Fox Fur: White (belly), Dark Gray (rest of body) Hair: 1in Light gray Eyes: Dull Green Azrael was born on the planet Papetoon in the year 2304 and his life is almost exactly like the rest of the Schwarzer Tod, except for the fact that he is dead. In 2326 he began to fear the fact that sooner or later they would be captured. He struck a deal with General Pepper and began sending the Cornerians infor mation about his brothers and sister. Unfortunetly for him, they found out about it. Azrael was on Macbeth, meeting with General Pepper and StarFox about to hand over more data when the rest of the Schwarzer Tod raided the base and executed him. They left the data behind. ---------- 501st Currently, there are only 63 surviving members of the original 501st, there are a few new members but they joined willingly, not abducted as children (the Trinity project was abandoned due to public outrage) and as such they recived and incredably hard time from the 'pure bloods'. Here is a small list of 'Pure Bloods' from the 501st Name Species Callsign Mithos Kionisu Fox Arctic-Fox Azrael Kionisu Fox Grim-Fox Sarenta Kionisu Fox Winged-Fox Chis Spadafuoco Fox Rehin-Fox Fara Phoenix Fox Fire-Fox Sarah Rommel Fox Desert-Fox Panther Caroso* Cat Desert-Rose Cukraaz Man Slayer** Dragon Fatman Corey Skull Crusher** Dragon Littleboy * Escaped sometime after Mithos ** Dragons have a different nameing scheme, Corey and Cukraaz are blood brothers This is far from a complete list. EDIT Removed someone from the list cuz they would be too young compaired to their game counterpart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 BLARG! This isnt dead, not by a long shot! The large delay has been due to creative issues, I'm at a point in the story (right at the end of the current chapter) where are whole lot of crap happens and I need to organize my ideas, axe ones I dont need, etc. Infact, I've added many new 'scenes' which should be comming up shortly, and yet there is still a large gap between the beggining and end of the second act that I dont know how I'm ganne fill yet Also, I'm ganna rewrite the current chpater (in a different stye) because I really rushed it. In the upcomming chapters I plan to intoduce several new vehicles (Police Hover Bike, Arwing MK III, and Hunter Gunship to name a few) new locations (Sol, Watoro, etc) new enemys (the Free Systems Commonwealth, the Atrum Nex) Answer some questions from the games (origin of the Apparoids) and get in a few more fights between Starfox and the Schwarzer Tod :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mithos Kionisu Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 I have a very important announcement to make: Comming soon That is all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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