evilwaffles Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 A little more into the chapter would be nice. Anyway, from what you have written, nice job. :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kursed Posted July 7, 2010 Author Share Posted July 7, 2010 A little more into the chapter would be nice. Anyway, from what you have written, nice job. I'm sorry i've jsut lost intrest and i just decied to post that for Now I'll add more later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilwaffles Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 Ah, so it is only part of it, that's good, I was afraid that it was only a paragraph long. Well, if you ever need a hand let me know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kursed Posted July 7, 2010 Author Share Posted July 7, 2010 Ah, so it is only part of it, that's good, I was afraid that it was only a paragraph long. Well, if you ever need a hand let me know.what I need you to do is get back on yours so you inspire me to get my buttox into gear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilwaffles Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 Yes Mam'! *Salutes and opens Microsoft Word* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kursed Posted July 7, 2010 Author Share Posted July 7, 2010 Chapter2continued (Fine you mademe do it2 Hours later a HotRodder patrol finds the Galatae Krystal onboard can sense them she had been relaxing in the captian's chair embracing Marcus who was on her lap. “Tigress prepare the Galatae for an all out attack we shouldn’t be expecting many capitol ships.”Krystal informed the large Tiger at the controls waiting for Marcus to get off her lap to get up. Tigress simply nodded in reply pressing the alarm for the fighters to Scramble. Fara was in her room mourning over Fox looking at old pictures of her and him by the time the yellow alert lights and siren had gone off. Miyu and Fay where playing a game of cards in the game room when the Alarms went off. Krystal jumped into her Veritech fighter deciding to leave Fox’s Arwing in the Galatae for the battle. Soon Fara, Fay and Miyu Were in their own Veritech’s. “Alright Girls this one is clean and simple we Protect the Galatae and if needed provide a diversion is everyone with me?”Krystal asked over the comm. “Ready!” The other three replied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilwaffles Posted July 7, 2010 Share Posted July 7, 2010 Argh! Cliffhanger! Need more!Good job, look forward to the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 Lol, same as Evil. I hate cliffhangers. Even in my stories. but can't wait to see more, Kursed! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainfyre66 Posted July 16, 2010 Share Posted July 16, 2010 Glad to see you're continuing, but I hopte the next chapter is longer :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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