CrypticQuery Posted November 15, 2010 Share Posted November 15, 2010 Yes, poor him. But, if I am correct, only 2. [unless you count Slippy and Fara in that mix, then you get 4. Lol]4 characters, minus 2 characters is 2. But if you multiply those two characters by the two other characters, you return to 4. From 4, if we add the 2, but then take the 2 back, we return to 4. IT'S A CONSPIRACY CONCOCTED BY NICK1349 TO TAKE OVER ALL OF ALBANIA!!!! RUN FOR THE HILLS!!But enough of the futile attempts at trying to amuse people , four is a substantial amount, especially when 2 of those characters are mains, and 1 is a widespread canon character :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted November 15, 2010 Author Share Posted November 15, 2010 4 characters, minus 2 characters is 2. But if you multiply those two characters by the two other characters, you return to 4. From 4, if we add the 2, but then take the 2 back, we return to 4. IT'S A CONSPIRACY CONCOCTED BY NICK1349 TO TAKE OVER ALL OF ALBANIA!!!! RUN FOR THE HILLS!!But enough of the futile attempts at trying to amuse people , four is a substantial amount, especially when 2 of those characters are mains, and 1 is a widespread canon character *Looks at future chapter notes. Is silent*....Might want to skip the rest of the story, and just start up again at the sequel. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 *Looks at future chapter notes. Is silent*....Might want to skip the rest of the story, and just start up again at the sequel. XDI'll ready my box of tissues and bowl of freshly-cut onions! :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 I'll ready my box of tissues and bowl of freshly-cut onions! Same here crazy!!! Don't forget the Chocolate Ice Cream!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 Same here crazy!!! Don't forget the Chocolate Ice Cream!!!With multicolored sprinkles! Can't wait for the next chapter Nick, you've got me on the edge of my seat! *falls off of couch* :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 You got me on the edge of this building *falls off*Its ok, I gotta parachute :FBut in all seriousness I can't wait for the next chapter either :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted November 16, 2010 Author Share Posted November 16, 2010 Awwwwww... Thank you, guys! It means a lot. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 Awwwwww... Thank you, guys! It means a lot. =]crazyfoo Incorporated : Making people's days since Summer, 1902 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 crazyfoo Incorporated : Making people's days since Summer, 1902 1902? :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shaper Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 1902? What seems to be the officer problem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 1902? What seems to be the officer problem?Problem LOLCATS have been around since then; just not on teh interwebz! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted November 16, 2010 Author Share Posted November 16, 2010 Problem LOLCATS have been around since then; just not on teh interwebz! XD Amazing!And dear god this topic has too many views. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 XD Amazing!And dear god this topic has too many views. XDI know I've been off the site for too long when I forget where the view counter is located :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Matrix Posted November 24, 2010 Share Posted November 24, 2010 XD Amazing!And dear god this topic has too many views. XDAnd not enough comments? Lol I know.. Its like people look at this for 1 second and then go to something. IntrestingFan Fiction I like the plot, very intresting and I like the character Gearhart, epic name lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted November 29, 2010 Author Share Posted November 29, 2010 And not enough comments? Lol I know.. Its like people look at this for 1 second and then go to something. IntrestingFan Fiction I like the plot, very intresting and I like the character Gearhart, epic name lol. Heh, thank you. This is going to be a good 2-3 long story series, but I just needed the time. It's always nice to have another reader. =]---BTW: All my readers! Two, note it, two new chapters coming this week. I now only go to school from 8am-12pm, meaning only 4 hours of it. So yes. Expect more of a pace with this now. This story will be finished within 3 weeks, and the next will start in a good month [give or take a week]. I know I have been inconsistent, but please stick with me! Thanks again. =] ~Nick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted December 5, 2010 Author Share Posted December 5, 2010 Chapter 17, On The RopesRunning farther and farther, small particles of fur falling off the two as they continued traversing, the vulpine couple panted lightly as the smell of blood filled the room. Krystal was right behind Fox, turning her head to check behind the two constantly for any pursuers. Her ears then perked as she stopped him, closing her eyes to focus on a sense."Fox!... I feel the presence of a few minds..." Krystal spoke as Fox stopped, her hand on his shoulder. He turned to her, looking at Krystal, then around; his hand on his assault rifle."Where, and can you perhaps tell who?" Fox suggested, now being the one to keep look out for Krystal."If I am right.... It feels like Leon and Panther... But they aren't normal, or I could be wrong. My mind's eye has been having fun trying to-""It's alright, hon'... Let's just try to avoid it." He said interrupting her, placing a hand on her shoulder and rubbing it to calm her. Krystal then shook her head, looking now at him."No, we need to go through the area... If I am right, that is the fast pass to where I last sensed Wolf.""Alright... Let's be heading off then." And yet again, the two were on the trail.Krystal wondered in her mind though as to what it was blocking her. Was it this stench of blood throwing her overall judgment off? Was it due to her frantic nerves trying to stay fully calm in the hostile environment? Or was it something else? None of these could be seen through as the couple ran through the halls.Soon after, the two came the the door that led to their overall destination. Fox sighed, looking to Krystal as his ears and tail were down. "Hon'... Are you sure about this?" He asked, getting his charge pistol and beginning to set a charge level of power. "I am positive... but, that weird feeling is still there..." She said, closing her eyes, and placing a softly, and silently, on the door to let it focus her senses. It is Panther and Leon in there... But... I am seeing the mental presence of another as well.... She thought to the vulpine next to her. Fox, although, got quite confused by this. What does that mean, Krystal?... He asked, looking at the door. Panther and Leon were in there, but how could someone be in there, but not be in there? She turned to him, the hand on the door as she looked at him now. I am not too sure, but whatever it is, we need to be on guard... Something is up.... Krystal thought, now standing up as she took her hand off the door to go stand behind Fox.And moments after, Fox released the blast he had charged on his gun at the door, thrusting the cold metallic door off of its hinges and into the dark room as he charged inward, not realizing there was no light in there to begin with due to the motion he had in plan. About five feet in though, he stopped himself, catching the mistake he just made. "Krystal! Don't come-" Fox got interrupted as all the lights instantly sparked on, as all the ammo on Fox exploded, quickly singeing his fur. Although, all the parts of the explosion, the metal mainly, was aimed to fly to either the ground, or the ceiling; approximately half to each. Fox stood there for not even a moment in his blood before the other vulpine acted."Fox!" Krystal yelled, running into the room to the fox; wanting to purely help him now. Quickly spinning around though, Fox's hands took hold of Krystal and lifted her into his arms, barely avoiding a large bolt of lightening that came from the panel she just stepped on. A clapping sound then came from the other end of the room as the Vulpine couple turned to look at the two they had expected."So I bet you find all of this a little, shocking?" The flirty feline spoke out, smiling as he looked to Krystal; he made sure to look his best as he winked at her. The chameleon next to him slapped him in the back of the head as he sighed angrily."Can't we go ONE God damned task without you spouting some stupid joke?" The chameleon said, rolling his eyes at the panther, then looked to Fox and Krystal. "If you haven't already guessed, it's our job to take care of your pitiful ass already." He said, now starting to grin as he pulled a knife our from his back pocket."Leon and Panther..." Fox said, looking to the chameleon, then to the panther. He took a quick not at everything they had on their outer layer. Neither the feline or the lizard held ammo, or any weapons on them; except for Leon that is. A simple assassin's dagger, but it was a weapon. "Where is Wolf?... I really doubt he would want you two to kill me. He would rather want me all to himself." He barked out, setting Krystal on the panel next to him. No fight had started yet, and he was already hurt badly; He needed a game plan."In this case, he had something more important to take care of himself." Panther said, taking a quick look at the floor, then looking back to Fox. "This is actually Leon's favorite room in all the base, if you wanted to know. All the risk in simply taking one wrong step just to die. And even then if you think you got it figured out, all the tiles of the room will shift from time to time to-.""Shut your muzzle before I rip it off." He said, covering Panter's mouth with his hand. At that point when the two were bickering, Fox's ears flickered up as he looked at Krystal. He then nodded, an smeared small drop of blood on the panel behind him.Krystal... Fox thought to her, knowing the link was open at all times practically. I need you be careful. Here is the plan....----So sorry that it took really long, but I thought I should put this at an ending point, and continue it all in the next chapter. 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FoxMcCloud Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 Excellent Job Nick!!! Hopefully you will get your Laptop back soon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 *Stumbles in, tail between legs*It will be finished, I swear! Just a good week, and I will be able to start the next one. I have just had such a huge writer's block for this, and am flowing with ideas for the next. So please, stay patient with this. I will finish Chapter 17 tomorrow, and get the rest finished by Sunday. It is the least I can do. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 Yeah, yeah, Double post I know, but this is a fanfic, and it is my story. Lol. So there. =P---Chapter 17, On The Ropes [Part 2] Swiping his blood covered thumb across another tile, Fox rolled out of the way from a blast of fire erupting from below him. They had been at this now for a good five minutes, and very little progress had been made. Panther and Leon still remained flawless, even after all their moving around. Krystal got sliced on her legs from Leon once or twice, but that was all that was on her. The male vulpine however had gotten much more serious injuries. Fox had been blasted with lightning a few times now, the current thankfully not strong enough to kill him, and with all the wounds he already had, he didn't have too much more time. A small purr came from Panther as he took this moment to pull out his hand mirror and look at himself. "See now, Leon? We are doing wonderful." He said, chuckling, and then looking to Krystal. "After Fox is gone, and it is just us, where woul-" "Shut it, pussy cat!" Leon interrupted, and snapped back at Panther. "Look, we are here to kill both of them, and if I hear another word that sounds perverted in anyway, I will skin you!" The chameleon assassin added, aiming his knife at Panther now. At this time, Fox looked over to his girlfriend, a concerned look was over his panting, blood covered body. You alright, babe...? he took a moment to think. Yes, Fox. Just a few cuts, but nothing I am not used to handling. How much longer do I keep acting weak?.... Krystal could move around, and be much more of a help, but this was part of Fox's plan. The part he was willing to tell her at least. Just a bit longer... He replied, but in reality, Fox had no idea what his next move would be. All of his moves were to help keep Krystal safe. He needed to make a move. Then with a sudden sprint, Fox started dashing at Panther, going for a charging punch. Panther smiled and chuckled as he looked to Leon to his right. "Not today, mut!" Leon hissed, throwing his dagger at Fox, an attachment string that was not normal was on it. The vulpine moved his head in time, only a small amount of fur being cut off as he rolled to the side. Leon pulled the knife back, and caught it skillfully as he chuckled. "Just give up now, Fox. Well make it painless." But there was no giving up now; Fox now had his plan set. He only needed one more thing. It would be hard to do, but if it worked, this would all be done and over soon. It was worth a shot. Taking a quick scan at the room, he looked around, a smile forming now. He hated this technique he had to use now, but this was all he had left. Looking to Krystal, Fox thought to her. Krystal... You know I love you, right?... Krystal received this, and looked to him a bit worried. And I love you, but, what's the matter?... And at that, Fox blushed a little, a sweat drop going down his muzzle as he rubbed the back oh his head. Well... Fox had been staring down Panther and Leon as he mentally told Krystal the plan now. And it was quite clear when he was done, as Krystal performed a facepalm and shook her head, then sighed. Alright, Fox.... She replied a bit reluctantly. Good, just know, it is for the mission at hand... "Ahhh!" Krystal exclaimed, grabbing at her wounds on her legs now, Fox not turning as he kept his eyes on Leon; it was all up to her now. "It hurts!" She continued to exclaim, and the bait was soon to be accepted. Panther came rushing to her, a claw out. "I am sorry, lovely, but I will knock you out, to help you with your pain." he said, not wanting to hurt her, but knowing he did have to follow some orders; the life of his genitalia was on the line. Well, plan B now... Krystal thought, seeing as Panther was going to take the assault approach. Moving her hands quickly to her shirt, she quickly tossed off her torso clothing and leaped onto Panther. "G-Gh-Wha-?!" He exclaimed, the shirtless vixen tackling the panther with an amubush of sorts. Panther was helpless, his natural desires forcing him to not be able to move unless it was to touch Krystal. "P-Panther!" Leon shouted, his attention fully on Krystal and the panther. "Stop getting lucky and help me!" He shouted, throwing his dagger toward the two on the ground. And almost like perfect clockwork, Krystal rolled the two forward, the knife sliding over Krystal's fur and barely avoiding it. The knife however kept going, and slicing through and getting stuck into the panel Krystal was right next to. The panel, feeling the pressure, let out a strong electric force, shooting through the knife, through the metallic binding on the cord, and through Leon's body, a large scream of pain coming from it, as all the coils in the cord magnified the pain felt. He instantly dropped to his knees, looking to the ground as he was left speechless. Although, Fox was now behind him and looked down on the chameleon. "Not this time." Fox spoke, and gave a nice chop at Leon's neck, fainting the lizard right then and there. Now looking down to the cat, Krystal had a serious expression as she looked to him. "Your player side will always get the best of you." She stated, and Panther smiled. "Ah, yes. But they also got the bests of you." He said, moving his hand, and squeezing her rump as Krystal looked yelped. Not even a second later, Fox came up with a small rush, as it was all the energy he could bear to muster, and kicked Panther's head harshly from the side, making a cracking sound from his head, but not from the neck. Krystal blushed as she got up from the now unconscious Panther, and looked to Fox, putting her shirt on. "You so owe me...." She said, a dead serious look upon her. "I-I know. But I swear, I thought he was going to pass out instantly. I didn't realize he was going to go and grab at you." He said, hugging Krystal, his body still bloody. "...Fine." She said, hugging back, and sighing. "How did you know that would work?" She asked, and then Fox went to explaining. "The tiles I had been marking out of self protection were dangerous, and mainly ones with high amounts of electricity. That is why I started marking them with the only thing I could produce; my blood." He started, and then released the hold and sighed, looking at Leon who was face down on the ground. "His knife was made out of something than normal steel, and I assumed it could at least cut through a tile like this. And then from there, it was just kinda luck that it worked out so well." The vulpine stated, threw out a smile for her. With a sigh, and a playful grin, Krystal sat Fox down on the ground, and took out her advanced first aid kit on her side, and started treating Fox's massive injuries with ease. She tried sensing another presence, but it was impossible. The mind she felt in here with Panther and Leon from before was gone. "Let me fix you up quickly, we should be heading out soon." Krystal said, applying many magical wonders onto Fox to speed his healing. "That third mind is gone, which can't be a good thing."-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*- The wolf's head was still hurting him, the nagging sensation that it was more than a simple headache was starting to set in. Gearhart and Nel had started their descent into the base yet again, their speed all the slower due to Gearhart's head. Not long after they continued their search, Nel stopped him, and looked at him with a look of concern. "Gearhart, are you sure you don't want to rest?" She said, now not caring for the mission so much as to take care of him instead now. Though, Gearhart was in no mood to stop; he felt a drive forcing him to continue on. "No, we need to keep at it." The wolf started, shaking his head. "I simply just don't have enough water in me, and the heat is affecting me a little, but that is no reason to stop. We need to find Dad." He told her with a look of certainty. Nel heard it this time, and never really before from him. He was adamant, and Nel knew she wasn't going to be able to stop him. "Well, alright. Just please take some of my water?" Nel offered, taking the bottle from her side, and handing to him, knowing it was either that, or nothing with him right now. A few moments passed, and Gearhart nodded as he took the heavy duty canister from her, and started drinking the still chilled water from it. The two had only taken a minute before Gearhart had handed Nel the almost empty container back. Wiping his muzzle from the liquid he had on it, Gearhart sighed as his tail lightly swished from side to side. "Alright, let's keep going." he said, not even looking to Nel as he pushed his body forward to keep going. The vixen did not like how he looked, and would rather him find someplace safe to stay as she went further, but she knew all to well that there was even less protection for the two then. She made sure to follow him, going at the slower pace for him. "Nel?... Do you happen to have some pain killers or something? This headache... It just keeps getting worse and worse." Gearhart stated, his focus on his vision and hearing, even balance, were starting to fail. He leaned on the wall next to him as he started panting heavily. Quickly going to his side, Nel went , and helped him onto her shoulder. The vixen was a bit smaller than him, sure, but she was strong herself, and could handle the weight just fine. Whimpering soon came from Gearhart now, the pain escalating at enourmous rates to the point where he even started groaning and shouting in pain at some points. "Gearhart! What's wrong?!" She question in a panic, laying him on the floor. His left are was twitching all over, as he used his right arm to hold it close to him. "N-Nel!" He shouted, his eyes shut tight as he snarled. "Don't worry, I'm going to call Fox right n-" "Now why would you want to do that?" Lure chimed in, walking from a corner and chuckling with a large smile; Gearhart instantly went silent completely as his body fell limp. She looked to Gearhart, then to Nel and smiled. "The hottie is coming with me." She said, slowly starting to walk towards Nel. "Unless I'm unable to fight, you are not getting him!" She barked out, whipping out her two daggers and getting into battle pose. This made Lure simply chuckle as she hummed, looking to the ceiling with her hand to her chin in a sarcastic thinking way. "Huh... Heh..." She started chuckling, with a very light nod. "You know, that's the funny thing. You won't be." Lure added. This baffled Nel, focusing more and more on Lure as she was just about ready to pounce. "And why do you say that?" The dark red furred vixen asked. "It doesn't matter. Night night!" the blue furred vixen told her. "Night ni-?" Nel was going to say and then instantly was smacked in the back of her head by the butt of a gun, knocking her out instantly as she fell to the floor. The only standing vixen walked to her now, giggling. "You know, she is pretty cute to." Lure said, and then looked up to her mentally corrupted partner. "It's too bad Wolf wants to keep both of you. I wouldn't mind having either of you around. You both are strong and cute, wouldn't you say, Gearhart?"---And yes, I am back in business. =] I really hope you all enjoy this wrap up of the previous chapter. Only 1-2 more left till the shocking conclusion. Thanks for reading, it means a lot you all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 :shock: BWAAAAAAH?!?!?! I can safely say that I wasn't expecting that chapter end! . And Panther, no matter what, will always be a ladies man :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted January 18, 2011 Author Share Posted January 18, 2011 Chapter 18, Judgment Day, Part 2 Â Â Â Where... Where am I...?... Why am I alone?.... Is anyone there...? Gearhart thought out, the mental plane of existence he existed on at this moment being pitch black, and no light visible for miles. The wolf sat there in space as he looked all around, until the voice of the older wolf he once had in his mind came to him. 'What is your purpose?' or how about, 'What do I do now?' are much better questions, seeing as your last one just got answered. The Wolf came and spoke to him with a smile, the outline of his body giving off a radiance now as Gearhart looked with a confused but hopeful gaze. Wh-.... The younger wolf was at a loss for words as the older one chuckled, a chair animating below him. Sitting down as the sound of violins and a piano came in with a nursing sound and lullaby that made most of Gearhart's worries vanish into the darkness. Â Â Â Now, Gearhart... You need to see this, and be prepared to mature, move on, and accept your role.. The Wolf spoke to him, the dark scenery changing instantaneously to a white, almost purgatory-like, fashion. The figure of The Wolf, along with the chair, vanished as the scenery yet again changed to a dull, gray room, the only thing filling it were the marks of streaked blood and a yellow lynx, crying as he pounded the ground. Â Â Â He... He looks so familiar... Gearhart thought, looking closer and closer, only to notice all the scratches and bruises on the lynx as he continually beat his hands on the ground. He should... Cliff is your friend. The Wolf's voice trailed through Gearhart's thoughts, making the younger wolf's eyes widen a bit as he looked closer at the scene. But... But then, where is... Where is... Gearhart continually tried thinking, the name escaping him like all others. Fayt? The Wolf questioned as an audible sigh was given off. Cliff there... He is crying because Fayt seems to no longer be amongst the living. This made Gearhart freeze. Was this really true? It couldn't. The one, the only one for that matter, on the team that really made it his job to put a smile on someone's face... Actually died? ...No, you lie.... Gearhart said, the picture and sound of the scene muting and turning back to it's normal white background. Sorry, but I must continue... I haven't much time. The Wolf's voice spoke out again, this time, the area turned to another gray room with two figures lying bloody in a pile. Both vixen's, one red, one brown. Â Â Â She never got her wish, you know.... The Wolf said, materializing in the plane Gearhart existed in. He had a tear going down him as he walked over to the two, bending down and taking the hand of the brown furred vixen. Your mother just wanted one last chance to see you... But she was too early, and you were to late... he said, standing up, looking to Gearhart now. M-...Mom is.... Gearhart thought, looking to them, not knowing of who this red vixen was, but still crying now, no sound coming from his obvious whimpers. Nel, is... Well.... She is a different case. I don't know how she will end up. The Wolf said, the image darkening back to black as Gearhart barked out. Â Â Â No! Let me see her again! The troubled teen looked at the older wolf, tears filling his sorrowing eyes. She only wanted to see me one last time! Why can't she?! He continued to bark out, some type of chains holding him back from releasing an assault on the older wolf. Although, The Wolf had tears of his own as he looked to Gearhart. ....That is what you truly want, so be it.... I am not sure when I can give it to you, but please... Just stay alive a little longer, and I will do my best. The Wolf said, moving over, and placing a hand on Gearhart's shoulder, a charming smile appearing. You have two choices when you wake up, Gearhart... One will leave you to an easier paved path, one leading to your Family. The Wolf said, an image of Gearhart standing next to Wolf, a proud gleaming in his eyes, appeared. Or you have the other... The one that changes everything you just saw.... The one that breaks what has been written in stone... He said, an image of Gearhart now, standing with Nel at his side, Cliff, Fayt, Slippy, Falco, Fox, and Krystal there with him too. The one of your Friends. Â Â Â The softly corded music slowly came to a stop as everything around Gearhart started fading into nothing. The Wolf gave a smile as he too started fading. This is it... For real... I can't help you anymore... The Wolf spoke, his body slowly de-materializing in front of the younger teen. Gearhart tried grabbing out at him as tears flew down him, wanting to cry out. W-Who are you?!.... He yelled out. I need to know! The Wolf smiled at this, looking into Gearhart's eyes. It shot through his, making Gearhart feel on a higher level of understanding for a split moment; not long, but long enough. Â Â Â My name.... Is Gearhart O'Donnell.... Now... Which path do you choose?.... -*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*- Â Â Â "Pup!" Wolf angrily growled, smacking Gearhart's head on the side with his pistol as a whimper and whine came from him. Sparing little time, Gearhart woke up, finding himself in a room, tied to a chair, and bound in all means except for his head. In front of him was Wolf, holding a plasma pistol, and behind him lay Nel, her head bloddy, but he couldn't tell if her heart was breathing. In fact, he couldn't hear the sounds of even Wolf's, who was standing in front of him, heart beat. "What... Dad..." Gearhart moaned, looking up to Wolf, only to see a face of pure seriousness and cynical all at the same time upon him. "The chip in your head and left arm have been fully removed." He started, making Gearhart's eyes widen. It all became fully clear now for a single moment. "Some of your brain, and arm are no longer functional to a normal and standard degree. It shouldn't happen to anyone, but, it did..." Wolf continued, now five feet away, and holding the gun up, aimed at Gearhart's head. "Why... Why are you-..." the young wolf tried rationalizing as his father cut him off. "I placed a tracker and biochemical device in your hair, as well as your arm. But from your crash you received in the battling flight mode, they were unconsciously jammed into you." Wolf kept going, explaining to his son why he was no longer going to be fully operational. Â Â Â "D-Dad..." Gearhart started, looking to his father as tears enveloped his eyes once more. Wolf pulled back the top of the pistol, making it ready to fire. "I am sorry, but you have a choice now..." He said, The Wolf's words also speaking in Gearhart's mind as Wolf did. "You stick with me, and finish off Star Fox, or you die along with them." Is what he said, but Gearhart could only help but hear what was just told to him from The Wolf as his father spoke. "I...." He stuttered, looking at the gun, then sighing, shutting his eyes as he did. This.... This is the end of the line... "My Friends... I pick my Friends...." Â Â Â Wolf's eyes widened up a bit, looking to Gearhart's as he sighed. "I am sorry then, Pup... But this is how it has to be..." The father spoke to his son, looking partially away as his hand quivered. "Any last words?" Â Â Â Gearhart whimpered as tears flew like streams from his eyes. This was it. "I.... I...." Then, a certain scent came into his muzzle as it confused him. "I... Smell, peppermint...." He spoke, and then clenched his eyes as the trigger was drawn, a loud crackling like thunder came from the shot, blood and a bit of fur dispersing as it landed into the teen. --- Next chapter coming out later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted January 18, 2011 Share Posted January 18, 2011 I nearly dropped my computer at the surprise that there was a new chapter, and it certainly didn't disappoint! Now this may be extremely cliched, but...I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted January 18, 2011 Author Share Posted January 18, 2011 I nearly dropped my computer at the surprise that there was a new chapter, and it certainly didn't disappoint! Now this may be extremely cliched, but...I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT Heh, thanks, Crazy. =] It means a lot you are still reading this. And that goes for all those who read, but simply don't post. You make it worth while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted January 19, 2011 Share Posted January 19, 2011 OMG, NEW CHAPTER YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted March 1, 2011 Author Share Posted March 1, 2011 New chapter is coming tomorrow! It's been a long time, I know, but the first story is soon to be finished with the last chapter. Please read when it is posted! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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