Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 Well its just a story I started making out of boredom and I guess im gonna star tposting it here aswell as ma forums. Chapter one. In a grassy area behind the mountains of Klanataira was a house where a unknown hero awaits to be disgovered. His name is Elyk, A Anthro-Dragon like none other. This character is where the story begins but many more people will come into it. Hearing the noise of a man on a horse Elyk got up from the table, he He checked who it was and found a man getting knocked off his steed by some lowly riders from the Tainted Wood country. The man got up and threw the pike that was on his back at one of the riders. One dead rider wasn't enough to scare them off, The Tainted Wood riders were tough men but pretty stupid at times. The man grabbed another pike off his back and threw it at another one. "Looks like this man was prepaired for something like this." said Elyk. He got trampled by the other one. Elyk grabbed his bow and shot the last rider in the heart. "You alright?" He asked the man. "Not really.... Could I come in for awhile and rest knowing im upon safety?" The man asked. "Sure." Elyk replied. So what might your name be and where do you hail from sir?" Elyk asked. "I am Borithmir Captain of Klanantairia." Borithmir replied. "I've heard great things of you Borithmir." ELyk said. "What might your name be and where do you hail from?" He asked Elyk. "I am Elyk of Klanatairia. No spesific duties or such." Elyk replied. "I must ask of you of some help getting to The Great City?" Borithmir asked. "I will help you in all your quest if you want me to. I have nothing to live for and nothing to do." Elyk replied. A few days after.... "Ready?" Borithmir asked. "Obcourse." Elyk replied. They set off to The Great City. "Uh before we go, do you have a steed Elyk?" "Yeah I got one." Well finally now they set off to The Great City. End of Chapter one.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 Chapter 2.... As Borithmir and Elyk were going down the path they encountered a small village. The only thing strange about this was it was on fire. They went toward and saw two men defending people of the village from bandits. Elyk pulled his bow off his back and started filling the bandits with arrows. Borithmir started charging toward the bandits, and the two men started charging aswell. The bandits didn't stand a chance to the four men now fighting them. The bandits that were left ran for there lives. After the battle.... "Thank you for the help. And what is your names?" Asked the smaller of the two men. "I am Borithmir Captain of Klanatairia." "I am Elyk Mercenary of Klanatairia. What might your names be?" "I am Kyle Elite Knight of Klanatar." "I am Anthony also an Elite Knight of Klanatar." "We must be going now it was great of you two to help are town out." Kyle said. "Wait where are you going to?" Asked Borithmir. "Were going to the Great City where else?" "Ah Kyle and Anthony would you might want to join us on our quest to The Great City? We could use some people of your skills." Borithmir asked. The Two Elite Knights joined Borithmir and Elyk on there quest. Alittle later.... "This is where we meet with some of my soldiers." Borithmir said. "Were meeting with soldiers? Why?" Kyle asked. "Were gonna be fighting in a battle. Were fighting in the Battle for Klanatire." He replied. As they rode up the hill they saw the men. "Captain Borithmir you have arived! Who might these people be?" One soldier asked. "They are friends of mine. There gonna help us battle these feinds." Borithmir replied. They could already see the village and the enemy approaching it. "They come near! Hurry my friends and soldiers go as fast as you can! We must beat them to the city!" Borithmir yelled. End chapter 2... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 This chapter is really long. Chapter 3... As Borithmir and company raced to the village so did the enemy. It was only a matter of time before the odds would turn to one of the sides. Whoever got to the village first. "They brought seige weapons!!! Balistas!!! There gonna seige the town! Me,Elyk,Kyle and Anthony will go after the seige weapons the rest fortify in the village and prepair for combat!" Borithmir yelled. "Follow me I see a weak point for us to get the seige weapons." Elyk said. Elyk curved off path and so did the other three. They went toward the back of the enemy. "They didn't protect the back so we can set fire to there seige weapons!" Elyk yelled. "A great observatation Elyk! This will turn the tides of the battle greatly." Kyle said. They lit fire to some torches and threw em upon the seige weapons as they rode by them. "Ha ha ah you little fags thats what ya get!" Anthony said. They went back to the village and told the men of the news. "Get ready they come near!" Borithmir yelled to the men. The men got ready to battle. "They out number us greatly." Kyle said. Elyk just looked at the enemy with a pissed off look on his face. "READY!?...... CHAAAAAARGE!" Borithmir yelled to the men. The four heros got off there steeds and charged with the men. The two small armies clashed together fighting for all of humanity. Anthony and Kyle still in the back of the army shoving and pushing there way to the front as Elyk is in the middle and borithmir is in front. "FOR KLANATAIRIA!!!" Borithmir yelled. Killing one after another of the enemy forces. The others still making there way up. The enemy were way too weak for the Borihtmirs forces but they kept fighting. "They must be stalling us for something." Kyle said to Anthony. Then a horn sounded off. "Thats an enemy horn! They are trying to flank us!" Borithmir called out to the men. They enemy had planned this battle out. They were trying to get rid of Borithmir and his elite army and conquer this village. Borithmir ran to the back of the army. As he passed by the other he told them to come wiht him. They all were running back to the end of the army now. "Why are we running we should be killing them?" Anthony asked. "Ha ha I also have an ace up my sleeve. You see I have this horn with me for a reason. Theres an army of knights waiting out in the distance waiting for me to blow this horn. We have them where we want them now." He smurked and pulled the horn off from his belt and blew into it. Hearing a rumbling of horses coming nearer and nearer. "Ah what the hell we didn't even get to kill anything." Anthony said. "Ah don't worry my friends. There will be more fighting on this journy. But be warned the soldiers and knights wont be with us next time we fight something. We'll be on our own after this." Borithmir said. The Soldiers ran as fast as they could to clear the way for the kngihts, The knights ramming into the enemy mowing them down like grass. The soldiers started coming behind the kngihts to pick off any servivors and such. "Well we leave the rest to the army we must go. Forward to the Mountains of The Greadt City!" Borithmir said to the others. They left there steeds for the men to take back to the fortress and walked toward the mountains. Later at entrance to a cavern into the mountains... "Ah there will be plenty of enemy forces in here to kill." Borithmir said to the group. "I've been wanting some action for a while." Anthony replied. They came up to a very big room with a big fire and about 30 enemy orcs. "Wait. Let me do something to lower there numbers." Elyk said. He pulled out his bow and shot a powerful shot to the ceiling. I caved in and killed about 10 of em. "KILL 'EM ALL!" Kyle yelled and the four charged the enemy. Anthony in front ramming into two of em smashing them with his beastly war hammer. As Kyle second into the fight Berserker charged some of em with his Claymore. Borithmir charging through the middle and Elyk coming in after him. Getting hit in the back by one of the orcs cheap weapons Anthony's reaction was to turn around and blow the little assholes head off, which he did. Kyle slicing one after another trying to defend off 5 of em. Elyk pulled out his armblade and sword charging in to help Kyle. (Armblade is a thing you basically put on you hand and clamp to your arm and its a blade wala!) Borithmir ran toward the giant fire and knocking the giant bin thingy it was in over into about 4 of em. Anthony taking out there leader with one powerful blow. After that the rest ran but elyk shot them down with his bow. "Well that was fun." Kyle said. End Chapter 3... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 Chapter 4... The party stopped at the spot to rest for alittle, as Elyk scouted ahead. Elyk came back alittle while after. "They got a group of Orc Soldiers up ahead. They're in bigger numbers but they don'e look very powerful compaired to the ones we just faught." He said. "We attack soon." Borithmir said. "I saw a way we could go up and suprise attack them and get an advantage from above." Elyk said back. They followed Elyk to this hidden spot and at there delight found a giant pile of rocks ready to be pushed off and smash those orcs. "ready?" Kyle asked. Kyle pushed the rocks off without any answers. Anthony slid down the side of the hill and Borithmir following. The orcs in shock and suprise scattered and made it even easier for the heros. Kyle pulling off his sheild prepairing for the few coming up to attack the two hidden heros. Elyk jump off and started sliding off the hill and vollied arrows to the orcs trying to run. But at the bottum of his slide he found a nasty suprise of orcs, Pulling off his pike he took from the dead Tainted Wood horsemen for a weapon seeing he forgot his sword at home. Seeing a few veteran orc soldiers coming to help there doomed allies, Anthony quickly went for them. As Kyle slained the last of the attackers at his point he jumped down quickly to help Anthony. Elyk still fighting off the ones that waited for him at the bottum of the cliff. Borithmir slaying the few retreaters. There small army stood no chance against the few heros. They didn't even have close to a chance of making it out alive, knowing so they faught them. "Well I thought that was pretty easy." Kyle saying to the group. "Yeah pretty easy when your prepaired." Elyk replied. "What do you mean?" Kyle asked him. "I kinda forgot most of my stuff at home." "Actually so did we." Anthony said to him. Borithmir looking at the three heros thinking of how the worlds future is being help by these three who can't even remember to bring the stuff they need. "We should continue hastily, there most likely gonna send a more powerful force our way." Borithmir said to the group. "listen. You hear that?" Kyle said. "What is it?" Anthony asked. "Giant spiders." Borithmir replied. "I've encountered these before. Nasty creatures." "Ah another thing to kill in our path." Kyle said. "I think I know a short way out of here that will take us to The Great City." Borithmir said to them. "Follow me." The group moved quickly through the dreaded paths of the caverns. They finally made it out 1 hour later. "Finally!" Kyle said. "The Great City isn't to far now." Borithmir told the group. They walked and walked moving as fast as they could. "I see it now! The Great City." Anthony said. A few moments later at The Great City entrance... "Halt!" A guard said. "No worries my friends it is I Borithmir captain of Klanatairia." "Oh come right in sir!" The guard said quickly. "Ah finally some peace!" Kyle said. "Follow me we have one more thing before getting settled." Borithmir said. They walked to a great building on the 3 floor. "What is this?" Kyle asked. "Ah it is the kings palace!" Borithmir replied. "Why are we here?" Anthony asked. "To get sworned in to duty by the king! You must do this. It won't take too long." Borithmir said. "Ah Borithmir your back! I see you have brought some people to help us." The King said. "They are here to help us in this war." Borthimir said. "What might your names be?" The King asked. "I am Kyle! Elite Knight of Klanatar! At your service I will do as commanded." "I am Anthony! Also an Elite Knight from Klanatar! At your service king." I am Elyk. Elite Mercanary from the plains of Klanatarisma. Your wish is my command sir." "Ah let us get you sworn in now." The king said. End Chapter 4... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Gamecuber459 Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 This is pretty good. Nice work :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Fox Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 me likes! didn't 20 minutes to read it, eathier...... (Mine has that problem.....probibly no ones posted.....) Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted January 12, 2006 Share Posted January 12, 2006 Thanks! Since people actually read this I'll continue to post em here and at ma forums. o_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted January 12, 2006 Share Posted January 12, 2006 Here is chapter 5! Chapter 5... "Will you three put your lives on the very thin line for our country?" The King said to them. "I shall." The three said in unisen. "You most likely will not come out of this nearly alive. I'll make this short and just get this over with now." The King sworned the three into duty. "Well where shall we stay for the night Borithmir?" Kyle asked. "Im sorry friends but we must depart here here is a paper with the locations of where you will be staying." Borithmir handed the paper to Kyle. "So were on the fourth floor somewhere on the right side." Kyle said to the others. "So what do you think will happen first?" Kyle asked the group. "What do you mean?" Anthony asked. "I mean what do you think will happen first were gonna go out and get the first attack or are we gonna wait for them?" "I don't know" Anthony said. "Ah here it is!" Kyle said. Elyk opened the door, and walked in. "Looks nice." he said. The group found where they would sleep adn did so. The Next Morning... "Wake up I made food." Elyk said to the other two sleeping ones. "wha... Ah food nothing wakes a man up better than that!" Kyle said getting up instantly. He walked over and poked Anthony in the side. "Get up." He said. Anthony didn't even move. "I said get up." Kyle said , then kicking him in the side. "Ah whats going on!" Anthony yelled. "Had to get ya up some how." Kyle said back. "I made food" Elyk said to Anthony. "So what do we do around here? Wait for Borithmir to pick us up or something?" Kyle asked. "We could look around the city I guess." Elyk replied. Instantly the door opened. Borithmir walked in. "Ah I see your almost ready? Im gonna take you to the armory to get equipped." Borithmir said to them. "Yeah were ready." Kyle said. The three followed Borithmit to the armory. "Man this place is huge, and quite beautiful." Kyle said. "Yeah great place." Elyk said back. "Its to big to remember where everything is." Anthony said to them. Few moments later... "Here we are. The Armory, let me show you where your equipment is." Borithmir said. They followed him into a fancy room with grand armor and weapons everywhere. Anthony grabbing a sword and warhammer and getting the heavy armor, Kyle grabbing a Claymore sword,sheild and a bow with arrows obcourse and the medium armor, Elyk grabbing the Bow, a sword, and a pike with medium armor aswell. "All ready?" Borithmir asked them. "yes sir." Kyle said. "Alright you guys go back to your rooms and heres the key." Borithmir said. The three went back to there rooms. Then hearing a very loud bell ringing they ran outside. Borithmir came to there rooms. "There coming! We are prepairing for war at the wall of Klanatairia, If we lose the wall they'll have more axcess to the country! Follow me!" Borithmir yelled. The four ran hastily to where the soldiers grouped. "This should be a good enough force! Let us move to the Great Walls!" A man yelled to the army. "Ah this should be fun." Kyle said. End Chapter 5... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AbSoLuTeZeRO919 Posted January 13, 2006 Share Posted January 13, 2006 A character picture of Elyk Im working on Kyle's and Anthony's (There both on the same pic since there from the same place and are ranked the same) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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