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The Lylat Luxury Hotel: Part 4


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"less than twelve hours" Balsa said, sitting down on a chair

"she was brought in last night after zeke's attempt at suicide"

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"She's been here about 10 hours" Arashikage said from his seat

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"Sheesh...I didn't realize I'd slept that long..." he muttered, rather ashamed of himself.  After all, he'd missed a moment where his friend needed him.

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Zeke's thoughts were crowded by Rynian.  The monitor showing his brainwaves was going off the charts, rapidly moving.  "I can't forgive myself with this.......would it be better if I just alienated myself from her?", he thought, regretting that he considered that an option.

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"Come back to us, Zeke." The Doctor said in his ear. "There's still much to live for. You still have to live for your friends... and for Rynian."

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(hey guys, do you know who else wants a peice of zeke for doing that?)

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(hey guys, do you know who else wants a peice of zeke for doing that?)

)

(Oh man, Zeke is as good as dead! XD)

At the mention of Rynian's name, he slipped farther away once again.  He couldn't see her again, he wouldn't let himself......but there was that irreversible force that drew him to her.  Either way, he'd be in this state for some time.

(HI BILLY MAYS HERE FOR COMA AWAY!)

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"But from our appearance, Anne, can we really be much of a threat to a business?...And yes, I stress the words -from our appearance-."

Anne sighed, only this Time it was about her own regrets...

"So were the last few who tried to help me..." Anne had said before turning around to face all 3 of them with a worried expression and tear's begining to shed from her eye's again...

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(Nick's missing out on all this talk of his character XD)

(I know, right :D)

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Anne sighed, only this Time it was about her own regrets...

"So were the last few who tried to help me..." Anne had said before turning around to face all 3 of them with a worried expression and tear's begining to shed from her eye's again...

Seeing as Airi couldn't see Anne's worried expression and tears of sadness, the vixen said, "Well, they're not us, right?  I think we might have a good chance at it."

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Zeke's mind kept replaying the past events.  How could he be so stupidly insensitive?!?  A certain tune was replaying over and over again in his mind.

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Zeke's mind kept replaying the past events.  How could he be so stupidly insensitive?!?  A certain tune was replaying over and over again in his mind.

(Love that song lol)

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The Doc kept talking to Zeke, kept trying to coax him to consciousness. "Zeke, no matter who much you regret what happened in the past, it won't change. You must fix what you've done and repent. You aren't alone in this!"

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Zeke could faintly hear what the doctor was saying.  He decided that it was the truth, and he did have to try to get out of purgatory eventually.  He noticed a door appearing in the whiteness.  "I.....guess that's my cue...", he thought as he played a happier tune in his mind.  The EKG began to return to a normal pace, and brain patters were becoming more uniform and regulated. 

(Yeah, that song is awesome Ris :D)

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"We may have a breakthrough!" The Doctor said excitedly. But he kept under his breath just in case of any new developments.

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Seeing as Airi couldn't see Anne's worried expression and tears of sadness, the vixen said, "Well, they're not us, right?  I think we might have a good chance at it."

Anne felt hurt after hearing that last remark...

"Don't say that!" Anne replied as she started to become more upset... "They were some of the closest friends I had in my life, Its already bothering me as it is that Its my fault that they were killed."

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Zeke still appeared to be in a dream-like state, but his body was responding.  His tail began thumping on the table, and he began to growl, then yelp in pain.

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"We may have a breakthrough!" The Doctor said excitedly. But he kept under his breath just in case of any new developments.

" Is he going to wake up soon?" Balsa said to the doctor, a certain song about whipping playing in her head.

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Anne felt hurt after hearing that last remark...

"Don't say that!" Anne replied as she started to become more upset... "They were some of the closest friends I had in my life, Its already bothering me as it is that Its my fault that they were killed."

'And you call -me- inconsiderate...'

'Well, how was I supposed to know they were close?'

'Who else would try doing something like that for her?  Seriously, think before you talk.'

Airi wanted to be upset with her brother, but she knew he had a good point.  "Sorry Anne...Just trying to help."

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"He better, I'm not done with him yet" Arashikage said bitterly

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"If you two would please wait. I don't want any of you doing anything to him while he is my patient!" The Doctor says. "He may be on the verge of awakening but I don't need you killing him!"

(And also, Doc's character sheet is up. http://forums.starfox-online.net/index.php?topic=7607.new#new )

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"I just hope he didn't do anything that'll emotionally scar Ryn..." Cel muttered.  "Though considering he tried to -kill- himself, I'm guessing my hopes are set too high..."

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Zeke's mind was still in purgatory.  He began running toward the open door, it began to slowly shut.  A bad joke and gigantic fist blocked his way.  The door shut, and he figured he'd have to get past the hand to make it out.  A different, more fast-paced song started playing as the hand attacked.  His EKG began to steadily increase in frequency.

(Heh, who would've thought it's pretty fun to play a character fighting for their life in purgatory! :D, and YAY FOR DOC's character sheet Fedora :D)

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"If you two would please wait. I don't want any of you doing anything to him while he is my patient!" The Doctor says. "He may be on the verge of awakening but I don't need you killing him!"

"Fine doc. We wont harm him n here. Just let us have a  gurney and half an hour and I will be set" Balsa said, cracking her joints.

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