FoxMcCloud Posted August 7, 2010 Author Share Posted August 7, 2010 Alright, you all want in-depth criticism? I'll be back in a few days then with a nice wall of text for you.Ok, i will be welcoming it with open arms. Just remember don't be a jerk about it. Make it actual criticism. That is what i am looking for Not rants, or needless comments on why I shouldn't do it because, to be frank I am going to do it whether you like it or not, because really I dont care about why you don't want me to do it. I care about feedback, to help make this better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 Name Patch:Awesome! Love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asper Sarnoff Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 That more than helped!! This was exactly what i needed this is the Criticism I'm looking for, not Negative Nancy..... I redid the name patch to have the Starfox Team Logo, I am working on the idea that you have given me Asper, and lets just say, Im gonna do it, but the render of the Arwing that I want to use, photo-shop is being a ****** and not letting me work on it that well, the magic wand tool, that aids in the making of silloutes is not working......So its gonna be a while :Name Patch:Glad to be able to be of assistance. The patchs looks really good by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted August 8, 2010 Author Share Posted August 8, 2010 How does this look, is this the idea of the golden thread you were talking about?Anything else i should put on or ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Flare Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 Wow, this is quite a thread! Great job so far on the patches and other designs, it's looking fantastic! And the gold thread effect looks amazing as well, much better than the render of the Arwing. Good job! I look forward to the finished product. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asper Sarnoff Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 Looks really good FoxMcCloud. Just what I suggested. Might consider putting in the "edge" running down the front of the G-diffusers, giving more deepth to the image, it that won't make it look to crowded that is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARWINGCOMMANDER 3987 Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 You were aiming for Constructive Criticism? I am sorry, but that was not constructive whatsoever.Yeah, it was like Roger Ebert trying to give a speech on freedom of expression. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted August 9, 2010 Author Share Posted August 9, 2010 Looks really good FoxMcCloud. Just what I suggested. Might consider putting in the "edge" running down the front of the G-diffusers, giving more deepth to the image, it that won't make it look to crowded that is.Gotcha, here is the fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 ^ Right on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asper Sarnoff Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 That looks really good FoxMcCloud. :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted August 9, 2010 Author Share Posted August 9, 2010 Also, you guys are more then welcome to use the designs if y'all end up making one too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asper Sarnoff Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 Also, you guys are more then welcome to use the designs if y'all end up making one too!Thanks for the offer, but if I'm ever going to do a Starfox cosplay, it's not going to have the SF team logo on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redeemer Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 Tell me about it...... Now, I know you said that as in "Oh yeah, it's no easy task" but I'm going to tell you about my cosplay anyway! It's Lulu's costume from Final Fantasy 10, I can dye my hair to get it the right colour but I'm stuck on one thing. FoxMcCloud, you may be able to help since you're so creative. How can I make her hair bun, you know that bit where the braids come from, and make it to stick to the top of my head? I just have no idea, and I don't want to wear a wig... Other than that, I have ordered her hair pins, and I'm ordering her actual dress when I have money. Then I'll have to add things to it, because the dress I'm ordering is very basic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted August 10, 2010 Author Share Posted August 10, 2010 Thanks for the offer, but if I'm ever going to do a Starfox cosplay, it's not going to have the SF team logo on it.Maybe I should do a Starwolf one for you Now, I know you said that as in "Oh yeah, it's no easy task" but I'm going to tell you about my cosplay anyway! It's Lulu's costume from Final Fantasy 10, I can dye my hair to get it the right colour but I'm stuck on one thing. FoxMcCloud, you may be able to help since you're so creative. How can I make her hair bun, you know that bit where the braids come from, and make it to stick to the top of my head? I just have no idea, and I don't want to wear a wig... Other than that, I have ordered her hair pins, and I'm ordering her actual dress when I have money. Then I'll have to add things to it, because the dress I'm ordering is very basic.Ok, with me being a guy, the hair thing is sortof a toughie for me..... Uhh lets see. Your best-bet is to get someone who can do your hair since you do not have eyes on the back of your head Anyways. In the middle where the braids begin and the side bang ends? Reference belowThen take the ends of the braids and swirl it all into a bun. Now the hard part is the Hair pins. These are what you need to use to keep the hair where it is. What may also help is getting black chop-sticks or something to put From the top down into the bun, giving it stability. Heck you could also try black rubber bands.What is also an easy way is to maybe uh, ask a hair-stylist how you could achieve it, rather then asking them to do it for an expensive price.To create the longer-ones in the back, you may also want to use extensions. Those were the tips i found most online...I hope it helps, and are you going to a con or something with the cosplay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asper Sarnoff Posted August 10, 2010 Share Posted August 10, 2010 Maybe I should do a Starwolf one for you Hehe. Again, the offer is appreciated. But the whole point for me would be to make as much of it as possible myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 YAYZ!!!! Today I finished the main parts of the Flight Suit. I have touching up I have to do for it, but I got the main Arms and side and chest parts and the neck parts of the Red and White Strips on the Costume.Now i have to Sew the velcro for the patches to the thing, and order the patches YAYS!!!!!!Also Tomorrow, I will post a photo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Awesome!! I can't wait for tomorrow then! :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 This was taken with my webcam so sorry for the quality :There is a lot of touching up that is needed, but its all a Work in Progress I hope to have it ready for halloween, also. My friend has a vest that he is giving me so YA!!!Anyways Side Poseand front poseAnyways, I still have a long way to go, but at least the hardpart is done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 ^ AWESOME! :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 ^ AWESOME! SECONDED! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted August 25, 2010 Author Share Posted August 25, 2010 Alrighty. I have the vest, but I need to get it painted, I am working on the Shoulder Armor now. My Idea is to do Cardboard since it is easier to shape and can be removed easily and quickly. I also have the Kneepads which just have to get painted also.And For the backpack in the back, I am using cardboard again Mostly all of the cardboard will be attached using velcro.Hope to get photos up soon, and If ya'll have any ideas let me know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted August 25, 2010 Share Posted August 25, 2010 meh, I personally wouldn't use cardboard. Get a real backpack from Big 5, and some football shoulder pads and use craft paint for the pads...that's how I'd do it, but w/e. To each his/her own. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted August 25, 2010 Author Share Posted August 25, 2010 Thats a good idea, Thanks for the Tips!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Julius Quasar Posted August 25, 2010 Share Posted August 25, 2010 Thats a good idea, Thanks for the Tips!!!!You're welcome (and thanks)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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