sjrathbun812 Posted April 2, 2011 Share Posted April 2, 2011 Cool. I think the Katt concept is fine. I don't have a problem with it at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 3, 2011 Author Share Posted April 3, 2011 I got a little sketchy dialogue scene read for you. No pictures, just text. Just something to bring the way of how these characters treat each other closer to you. HURF A DURF. It doesn’t reveal much and I think it’s a good example of how the atmosphere can shift within one scene. I also added some descriptions so you can imagine it visually. The script itself is not really existent. I mean in the traditional way at least. I wrote down most of my ideas in several text documents but it’s not organized in any way. All there is in the end…is the animated storyboard. And that’s more than enough. Also, I’m a very visual-oriented person anyway. I’m not about making this movie hilarious, but the comedy should be there for lighthearted purposes. It’s really only playful, I’d say. Now anyway, to fully get it, this is what happened before: *blbala Slippy gets stuck between a ladder and his Arwing* ……. FOX HEY HEY HEY! I think YOU owe me an answer: WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? You’re SO undisciplined You’re worse than us! And we’re mercenaries! FALCO Fine, FOX. WHY DON’T YOU PULL YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR FURRY BUTT? THIS CLUMSY SALAMANDER IS GOING TO BE YOUR DOOM! *points to Slippy* PEPPY Oh don’t be ridiculous! … He’s so obviously a frog! SLIPPY I’M A TOAD! FOX ENOUGH! Yay for juvenility… Ok now the real deal: *Peppy slowly enters the main bridge of the Great Fox. Lost in thoughts* FOX Something wrong, Peppy? PEPPY You know, I've been wondering about something lately. SLIPPY Does it have anything to do with me puking into your slippers? PEPPY No, no, no. I mean... It just seems weird that General Pepper wants us to take on such superficial missions. FOX What're ye sayin' there, oldtimer? PEPPY Well, it's like he doesn't want us to be in any real danger. He holds us back from going to Venom. WAIT A MINUTE! *points to Slippy*YOU PUKED INTO MY SLIPPERS? SLIPPY NONONO! THAT WAS ROB! FALCO Haha, our little frog-boy can't even handle Katinian ale. SLIPPY GOSH DARN IT, FALCO! I'VE TOLD YOU A BILLION TIMES ALREADY! I'M A SALAMANDER! … I MEAN, I'M A TOAD! besides...you ain't perfect, either. FALCO at least, I don't crash my Arwing into my wingmates. FOX *looks annoyed* oh boy.... SLIPPY BUT...BUT....Awwwwww, this is Flight Academy ALL OVER again! FOX Guy, guys! Chill out! We're doing really well! *I leave out a bunch of shit that’s a.) not relevant right now and b.) lol TOO HEAVY SPOILERS!* I know my father is proud of us... FALCO You mean "he would be". FOX *turns head around real quick and looks confused* What? FALCO *looks also confused* Huh?...Um...nothing. Didn't you say he was dead? FOX *looks a little angered and you can clearly see he feels insulted* ...he is... They just talk past each other. Falco is not being an asshole. It would be way easier to imagine this scene if I added a bunch of pics. Problem here tho....I'm working on this scene RIGHT NOW. So just deal with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sjrathbun812 Posted April 3, 2011 Share Posted April 3, 2011 Lol. Cool stuff R3DFiVe! Can't wait 'til the scene is finished. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demonking44 Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 Very nice, I like it. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 R3d Its been awhile since I have commented, but you are one of the best artists here, I enjoy all and if any of the pictures you do, I must admit one of the most detailed, and the storyline that you are creating is the best!! ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 Thank you, people! Hey, FoxMcCloud, I gotta tell ya I was missin you already! How you been? Anyways, thanks a lot. What do you mean by the "best storyline"? Compared to other projects? Really, I do work hard on the story but maybe it's beacuse of my doubting nature, that I'm never fully convinced it's THAT good. I mean I'm very hard to please when it comes to movies, and I get the feeling it's blocking me sometimes because I'm (desctructively) self-critical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 I have been well, college takes alot out of me xD I got to admit you have put alot of thought and work into the storyline. I have seen others, but yours is very well done. And about the self critical stuff, I suffer from that alot xD, the best way is to bounce your ideas off people, or other fans. They would love to give you help or little suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 7, 2011 Author Share Posted April 7, 2011 :D Actually, I BEG people to be as hard as possible on me and my project. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 Well if you ever want someone to bounce stuff off of or just criticism, ya know how to reach me xD Though I really have to get back to signing onto my Windows Live account more lol I haven't used Xfire in YEARS lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DZComposer Posted April 8, 2011 Share Posted April 8, 2011 Alright, a rather big spoiler here: In the course of events in STARFOX: THE LYLAT WARS slippy actually dies. He ends up as a bloody mess and most of it splatters on Fox. Moreover, Fox doesn’t wipe Slippy’s blood off of his clothes because he misses him too much. This what I meant with making the story a bit more realistic. However, in the end after Fox defeats Andross, he uses a cloning machine and Slippy’s blood to create a second Slippy, or Slippytwo, whatever you wanna call him. So that’s the big twist. In Adventures, Assault and Command we actually see the clone, and not the original Slippy from 64. EDIT: Wait... So was that real or an April Fool? The following posts are ambiguous... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 8, 2011 Author Share Posted April 8, 2011 It was a joke! Have a little bit more faith in me, man... Or do you actually happen to like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DZComposer Posted April 9, 2011 Share Posted April 9, 2011 I'm glad it's a joke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 9, 2011 Author Share Posted April 9, 2011 Believe it or not. I got lots of pms, notes and whatnot from people who where wondering the same thing. I told em that I wasn't being serious and they got pretty damn dissapointed because they loved the idea. I really thought I made it obvious and could never believe people would actually fall for that AND at the same time like it! So, maybe our little conversation here cleared it up once and for all. Therefore, thanks for asking and being interesting in my project. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 9, 2011 Author Share Posted April 9, 2011 For all of you who want to see Slippy die a horrible, gruesome death: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asper Sarnoff Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 Awww. Poor Slippy. Wouldn't want the little fellow to die. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DZComposer Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 I love it. Can I use it as an avatar at some point? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 14, 2011 Author Share Posted April 14, 2011 Sure no problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 18, 2011 Author Share Posted April 18, 2011 I feel like posting a lil of the new act I'm working on. There isn't much to see, just a bunch of characters this time around but... it's the silence before the storm anyway. I think I need to work on some more minutes and then I'll be reaching the turning point and BOY is it gonna be hard for me to draw all this shit. this is fox being all pissed n shit. Well no, it's actually the scene where Falco asked a pretty imprudent question. Things are about to get difficult... fox, I am dissapoint. :I He's the most feared warrior in the Lylat System, but not without stress. Yep, that's right, it's Pigma Dengar! The first time we see him again after the prologue. That's like...12 years ago in the story.... Well things are not the way they used to be even for this guy. I vagueley wrote about Pigma's role, remember? The end is nigh. Yea, you know what? Nobody gives a damn about ROB. And I just have no role for him other than being extremly rude...especially to Fox. Fans of dry humor, I'm sure you'll like him. I'm quite pleased with his scenes until now. I mean honestly, what kind of role would you give to ROB? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Its_A_Mad_World Posted April 18, 2011 Share Posted April 18, 2011 loving it! i appreciate seeing the progression you make through this project, even just seeing the stills. If this is what you have story-board wise, then this movie is going to be awesome! but I can wait patiently for it don't tire yourself out! lol speaking of which... i think there is one still that didn't load right or something.... the "Fox I am dissapoint" one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 18, 2011 Author Share Posted April 18, 2011 loving it! i appreciate seeing the progression you make through this project, even just seeing the stills. If this is what you have story-board wise, then this movie is going to be awesome! but I can wait patiently for it don't tire yourself out! lol speaking of which... i think there is one still that didn't load right or something.... the "Fox I am dissapoint" one? Thanks man! And yeah...also thanks for the heads-up, the pic's working now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DZComposer Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 Maybe ROB should so much be rude, but rather indifferent? IE "Whatever. I'm a robot, and you're just a meatbag." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 21, 2011 Author Share Posted April 21, 2011 Maybe ROB should so much be rude, but rather indifferent? IE "Whatever. I'm a robot, and you're just a meatbag." That does sound a bit rude anyway, eh? I dunno, to my understanding any classic obidient robot should be like C3PO; always polite and nice. (Yes, he's a protocol droid, I know!) ROB is no HK-47 from KOTOR, even tho I find him quite amusing, but he still likes to give Fox a hard time, bein sarcastic and whatnot. I mean, he doesn't go insulting people or anything it's more like uh... well.....just check this out: (oh btw he still is supposed to have a robotic voice, alright? Just imagine him talking like in the traditional way. FOX Aight, you need some recharching, you old piece of junk. ROB Two different answers I can output to that: A long one and a short one. FOX Ah….. … What’s the short one? ROB No. FOX …And the long one? ROB Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 That does sound a bit rude anyway, eh? I dunno, to my understanding any classic obidient robot should be like C3PO; always polite and nice. (Yes, he's a protocol droid, I know!) ROB is no HK-47 from KOTOR, even tho I find him quite amusing, but he still likes to give Fox a hard time, bein sarcastic and whatnot. I mean, he doesn't go insulting people or anything it's more like uh... well.....just check this out: (oh btw he still is supposed to have a robotic voice, alright? Just imagine him talking like in the traditional way. Looks like I just found my favorite character! :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sjrathbun812 Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 Cool stuff R3D! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zzz Posted April 29, 2011 Author Share Posted April 29, 2011 At first I was like "oh fuck..." But then I was like " Aight. Ima fuck shit up, as well!" But THEN I was like " OH FFFFUUU-" Nah, just kiddin. That's not the dialogue, and that's not exactly what's happenin. I only prevented a possible minor spoiler with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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