Sluggsnipa Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 James thought, why could'nt they have killed Androsson the spot.When he went INSANEit did'nt matter now,he was falling 50 off the ground,on some god-forsaken wasteland.PROLUGEStar Fox:RedemptionJame's chest burned,wether it was the fact that he wasfacing betrayal,or that he nearly died fromthat fall.He looked up.The CDF were widthdrawing.He had to finish the job.He grabbed his revolver.The fate of Corneria.In his hands."Pepper,this is James.I'm going in."It was a true firefight.When James reached the strongholdthere was no way ANY Venomian soldier would lastwithin a minute in a fight with him.They were undisciplened,and prone to foolish acts of bravado.James reached Andross's hangar,it was the onlyroom before his command station.It was oddly quiet.Something grabbed him.It was not Venomian.A creature appeared next to him.It was a mercenary,however he was a bear and his armor read:URSUS.They dragged him to Andross."Hello James,I'm expecting you.don't speak.You won't need to speakwhe're you're going."He stepped out of the room.All Peppy heard on his headset was someone screaming in pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxMcCloud Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 i love the suspense :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggsnipa Posted September 30, 2010 Author Share Posted September 30, 2010 I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 Pretty small, straight to the point so far, and "Fate of the world" stuff. These are just my opinions on seeing it. So far, it is not enough for me to really give a good "I like it" just yet. I have personal likes and dislikes to stories, so I'll give it till ch1 to make a better judgment on my feelings towards it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SCoatiH Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 It's quite good so far. Nice intro. But as Nick1349 said (can I call you Nick?) I'll wait to chap 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggsnipa Posted October 2, 2010 Author Share Posted October 2, 2010 It's quite good so far. Nice intro. But as Nick1349 said (can I call you Nick?) I'll wait to chap 1.Pretty small, straight to the point so far, and "Fate of the world" stuff. These are just my opinions on seeing it. So far, it is not enough for me to really give a good "I like it" just yet. I have personal likes and dislikes to stories, so I'll give it till ch1 to make a better judgment on my feelings towards it.Well I guess I should get started on Chapter Numero Uno...ah teh LULZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggsnipa Posted October 2, 2010 Author Share Posted October 2, 2010 Ok guys I don't haveChap 1 ready now but...To satisfy your Grunty Thirst(cookie 4 refrence) I GIVE YOU:Falco Works at BK!!!Falco sat down on the couch,he wasREALLY tired.One whole day of playing basketball really made his muscles run."And now to watch the final episodeof Lost!"He never had time to watch it duringthe events of SF:Assault.He filpped through his recordngsof TV shows and,wait why wasn't it there?Falco gasped...then he screamed.Needless to say the whole team rushedover to him.His face was frozen in terrorand it looked like the FUUUUUUUUUU faceon further inspection.Peppy snapped two fingers in front of his eyes and Falcoinstantly lit up."Fox,"said Falco"Yeah buddy?"Responded Fox"WHO DELETED MYRECORDING OF LOST!!?""I don't kn-""Falco,Slippy deleted your recording."Krystal said.Falco got up."WHY DID YOU DO THAT???""You were being mean to me so,I said :I either delete your recordingor I tell Katt your feelings for her!"Slipy yelled in fear.Falco blushed and Katt perked herears towards him,she knewthat he liked her and vice versa,but anyone outside that triangledidn't know.Everyone was awestruck.Falco then said to Slippy:"I'll get you after I watch Lost on Hulu in my room...I'LL GET YOU!"But then he turned on Krystal.(oh god that sounds wrong)"How do you know he deleted myrecording?!""He asked if he could delete it and I said yes,errI don't really like Lost...I mean with the time travel...and the...yeah I should juststep back now..."Fox grabbed her and they steppedbackwards.Falco's Emotion:RAGE FACEThe Star Wolf team burst in the door."We heard screaming!"Panther said"Aww come on guys we were eating at thatRoach coach!"Leon said,while holding up his soggyburrito."Falco what's wrong?"Wolf exclaimed."EVERYTHING!!!!"Falco stormed up to his room,locked the door,and lied downin the fetal position."Well we screwed that up..."ROB said in a MicrosoftSam-esque voice.The Next Day...Slippy slouched on to the floor.He then shook himself awake andalmost automatically,he grabbedthe nearest bag of Cheetos...and gobbled up 1/4 of the whole bag."I LOVE Breakfast!"Slippy said with a smile.He slid down the stairwelland yelled:"WEEEEEEE!"When he got down he noticed thatthe Star Wolf team had KO'd on the floor."HEY GUYS WAKE UP!!"Slippy yelled.Needless to say,they almost trampledeach other to death when they got up.Slippy casually walked overto the fridge and saw a note written on it.It was from Falco....To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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