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"Momma!" As soon as Max got near Gracia,who leeps up from the chair and into the ceiling with an improbably large jump, Balsa grabs his collar and jerks him towards a table. "GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM HER"

{Max wasn't near her. He is at his seat. He gave it to her when Balsa came up threatening him.}

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Unbeknown to Balsa, Max had given the girl a rare flower found in Platoon, and had given her a map, marked with the safest alleyways in the district for the next two weeks.

 

 

(This implies you moved up to the charecter in question.)

"Kage, he is trying to fucking Drug MY LITTLE GIRL" Balsa Shakes Max with all her might. "I'm going to kick his teeth in if it gets both of us kicked outta here!"

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"Hold up, geez!" He said, surely there was a diplomatic solution, "What's going on?  Someone explain it to me."

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Max: "I don't have any drugs." Lifts his pockets out to show that they are empty. "See?"

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He nodded, grabbing a bottle of sake and putting it down on the table, "Your funeral" he said, "Just don't break the bottle"

"Come on, you should know me well enough by now Kage",The Vulpine said giving a half smile.

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"This fucking knob comes up to me and starts creeping on Gracia." She indicated the lion in her hands. "I tell him to piss off and he tells me imma die unless i follow his psychic psycotic instructions. Then he tried touching Gracia and now im going to count his organs by hands!"

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"I dunno, it's been a while" The barkeep said, shrugging, "Figured I'd say something to cover my ass" He finished, folding his arms in front of him and leaning against the back wall.  "What brings you back here?" He asked

 

 


 

"This fucking knob comes up to me and starts creeping on Gracia." She indicated the lion in her hands. "I tell him to piss off and he tells me imma die unless i follow his psychic psycotic instructions. Then he tried touching Gracia and now im going to count his organs by hands!"
 

"What?" He asked, "Everyone knows that nobody can predict the future" he said, shrugging.  "I mean, that just doesn't add up."

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Max: "Do you mind if I explain my side of the story Balsa? And btw, you did see the ambulance trucks zooming by, right?"

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"That's right it's been two years, I Just thought I'd come down memory lane", He replied and then poured a glass out of the bottle and drained it.

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"Yea i would fuckin mind, because goddamned if i see you anywhere near my daughter again im going to shove you face first into a grease fryer!" She continues to shake him in her anger.

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"Hey hey HEY!" He shouted, looking at Balsa.  "Leave my grease fryers out of this!" He said, shaking his head.  He looked at the tiger, "What do you have to say?"

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"Yea i would fuckin mind, because goddamned if i see you anywhere near my daughter again im going to shove you face first into a grease fryer!" She continues to shake him in her anger.

Max: "Did you find it weird that they were going past the right alleyway?" He got up, removing Balsa's grip, and looked at her with a serious face on.

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"I find it weird that i havent ripped your eyes out, you ugly walking ANIMAL" She pushes past him and walks to the hole created by Gracia. "You okay, sweetie? Did he hurt you?"

 

There is no response, only the slight sounds of a sobbing little girl.

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[HOLEE SHEET guys, you're fast as heck! At this rate I won't be able to do anything, at all! :-P ]
 

Kyle hears a nearby discussion in means of catching on fire. A feline and a human woman in a heated argument -or at least, the latter did show such behaviour- over what seemed to have been lost in the discussion. He gives a stare that practically screams 'What the hell, man!?' at the situation that got weirder and weirder each word.

 

Oh, this is gonna suck...

 

A snarky grin grows in his face.

 

...for him.

 

Well, I should probably keep my distance. This sure isn't gonna end up pretty, he thought.

 

By that time Kyle remembered he hasn't eaten anything. "Uh, Kage?" the white vulpine asks, referring to the one behind the counter. "I'd like something to eat. Could I order some--"

 

He suddenly cuts himself.

 

"You know what; surprise me.", he says.

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"I find it weird that i havent ripped your eyes out, you ugly walking ANIMAL" She pushes past him and walks to the hole created by Gracia. "You okay, sweetie? Did he hurt you?"

 

There is no response, only the slight sounds of a sobbing little girl.

Max: "I wasn't going after you or your daughter, Balsa. Don't be blind by your hate. I was trying to save you. The emotion of hate is a powerful emotion. If you can't control it, it could hurt you back." Max walks away and sits next to the raccoon.

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The bartender looked at the white fox, "Huh?" He was about to ask how he knew his name but Balsa practically shouted it, so he figured he'd pay it no mind.  "Sure" He said, putting another order up and sending it down to the cook, who promptly placed the first order down in front of the veteran.  

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Max: "I wasn't going after you or your daughter, Balsa. Don't be blind by your hate. I was trying to save you. The emotion of hate is a powerful emotion. If you can't control it, it could hurt you back." Max walks away and sits next to the raccoon.

"Blah Blah Blah, kill yourself." Balsa eloquently retorts. "Ive had philosophical discussions with Aristotle and Plato. You're a pedophile alcoholic in a bar. YOu forced my hand by attempting to please yourself by including my little girl in your dementia"

 

Balsa continues to coax Gracia out of the ceiling, making sure to lob one last loogie in Max's direction.

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Max didn't care. He knew he was not a pedo, or an alcoholic. He hopes someday Balsa would realize her own flaws and become happier in life.

He decides to sit next to Neil, but seeing how he was busy, he talked to the bartender:

" I analogize for the argument. I'm not anything Balsa just said. I honestly am quite sorry for her. She must have had a rough past" (He already knew her past just by looking at her, but he was trying to keep a low profile).

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Max: "I wasn't going after you or your daughter, Balsa. Don't be blind by your hate. I was trying to save you. The emotion of hate is a powerful emotion. If you can't control it, it could hurt you back." Max walks away and sits next to the raccoon.

"Give it up will you, there's no reasoning with her just leave her alone and she'll be fine", The vulpine said to Max. [Ahh you ninja'd me lol]

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A husky of some sort walks into the bar. He looks kind of like a Greenland Husky or Akita Inu. Dog identifiers and snooty Show Judges alike have been confused. Anyway, he walks in and recognizes a few people in said bar. He's about to say hi to Balsa only to realize that she'd sooner tear off his head and feed it to her daisies (and the thought of Balsa gardening scared him even further). He decided to sneak over to the bar and hold his head in his hands til he figured out what to drink.

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(please dont godmod knowledge about charecters. Its rude.)

 

With tiny sobs of fear, Gracia finally exits the ceiling, her face stricken with tears. She is shivering as she grasps Balsa like a life line, her face buried in her neck. "Im sorry momma." She gasps out, only for Balsa to shush her and carry her to their seats.

"Its alright, its okay. It isnt your fault" Balsa cooes, sitting down with Gracia in her lap, Gracia's dress covering most of her tiny form. "If he comes over here again ill make sure he doesnt so much as look at you" She whispers, rubbing Gracia's back gently.

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Max could read her mind: "What part of 'I'm not a pedo' does she not understand?  And what I do to scare her, all I did was give her a map..."

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( I stated in charecter you can not read Balsa's mind. please change your post.)

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(I agree with Waffles here, automatically knowing everything about someone just by looking at them is known as godmodding, which is against the rules.)

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(That was a rule? Wow, I can't believe how many rules I accidentally broken. I'll just try a new char...again)

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