Infinity Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31933919/ About time I started to draw my own characters again. Nyala is a character from Of Love and Hax, a manga I will be making in the future, but first I need to refine my skills. I will be CGing this this and I'm posting it here so I can nab it when I'm on my parents' computer. She was one of Dr. Zephyr mercenaries hired to kill or capture Cory and Rey, but she decided to follow her own path and to stop Pyro, an anthro Typhlosion (one of Zephyr's other mercenaries) for reasons that'll be revealed near the end of volume one. Tell me what I need to improve before I finish drawing her (she'll be standing on a rooftop looking over the buildings in despair because Pyro has eluded her yet again). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeWalker Posted April 14, 2006 Share Posted April 14, 2006 Well, I'm no art critic, but... Her head's too big and her feet are too small. In short, out of proportion. Her hand is BACKWARDS. And there's nothing about her that honestly screams "Pokemon" to me. As in, how isn't she just another anthro kitsune? That might change if you color her. And, oh yeah. Just because I can't be certain... ROUGE is what women put on their faces to make their cheeks blush. A ROGUE skulks through dungeons and backstabs orcs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvolutionSFox Posted April 14, 2006 Share Posted April 14, 2006 Very nice job, dude! I like her tail! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ranzick Posted April 14, 2006 Share Posted April 14, 2006 wow that is really cool awsome work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinity Posted April 17, 2006 Author Share Posted April 17, 2006 Like finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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