ARWINGCOMMANDER 3987 Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 This is a preview for it. Please be constructively critical about it only. The preview is as far as I've gotten on it. Yes, I recorded the theme song myself. (I can't sing very good) Right now I need to get voices for the characters.Anyway, I hope you guys like how the show looks so far, because I've been working very hard on it. Thanks in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARWINGCOMMANDER 3987 Posted December 1, 2010 Author Share Posted December 1, 2010 How come nobody's noticed? Please comment, I need feedback so that I know what to do with the rest of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eman96 Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 Is it just me or is there some kind of high-pitched screeching sound playing throughout the whole video?Anyways, the animations look alright and the story is quite interesting .EDIT: The screeching sound is gone now . Must be something wrong with my flash player or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARWINGCOMMANDER 3987 Posted December 7, 2010 Author Share Posted December 7, 2010 Is it just me or is there some kind of high-pitched screeching sound playing throughout the whole video?Anyways, the animations look alright and the story is quite interesting .EDIT: The screeching sound is gone now . Must be something wrong with my flash player or something like that.Do you have any critiqueing for me? Constructive criticism would help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eman96 Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 Do you have any critiqueing for me? Constructive criticism would help.Hmm... I thought the voices were a bit too loud (I can even hear it distorting). Try turning down the voices a bit so that it's around the same volume as the music in the background. I don't think you should repeat yourself saying the phrase "G-Byking" over and over because it gets a bit annoying.Btw, did you record those guitar riffs yourself? Because to me, it sounds like it's sampled from somewhere and it was pitch shifted and edited.Also, what software did you use to make the music?Sorry, I'm not that good at critiquing so yeah... :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARWINGCOMMANDER 3987 Posted December 17, 2010 Author Share Posted December 17, 2010 Hmm... I thought the voices were a bit too loud (I can even hear it distorting). Try turning down the voices a bit so that it's around the same volume as the music in the background. I don't think you should repeat yourself saying the phrase "G-Byking" over and over because it gets a bit annoying.Btw, did you record those guitar riffs yourself? Because to me, it sounds like it's sampled from somewhere and it was pitch shifted and edited.Also, what software did you use to make the music?Sorry, I'm not that good at critiquing so yeah... I pitch shifted and edited a free guitar sample I downloaded using Audacity. I'm keeping the "G-Byking" repetition because I like it that way.Anyway, anybody here good with female voice acting? If so, can any of you help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARWINGCOMMANDER 3987 Posted January 13, 2011 Author Share Posted January 13, 2011 A preview of what action on the show is gonna be like.Here's a preview of the main protagonist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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