Vixie Darkmatter Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 Name: Vixie DarkmatterAge: 23Gender: FemaleHeight: 5'11"Weight: lightEye Color: Aqua BlueSpecies: Silver FoxHair Description: White shoulder length hair. Vixie is often seen with it pulled up into a ponytail.Fur Color/Fur Pattern: Her fur is silver in most areas. The tip of her tail is white, and she has a small black streak of fur on her left cheek.Vocal Description: Her voice is soft, cool and soothing.Body Description: Vixie is a somewhat tall for a fox, but she's also really thin.Attire/Appearance: She wears a pink jumpsuit very similar to a Cornerian one. Her left wrist has a com device on it. There is a small white phoenix on her right shoulder. Family: None alive that she's aware of.Occupation: Bounty hunter/MercenaryGood/Bad: Undecided, but is leaning toward good.Birthplace: FichinaCurrent Location/Residence: CorneriaTraining/Specialties/Skills: Sabotage, sniping and hacking. Extremely agile.Weaknesses: Short attention span, her body is rather frail.Special Markings: Only the small streak of black fur on her left cheek.Equipment: Vixie carries with her a small but somewhat powerful blaster pistol. It's downside is it has a decreased range. She also has a small assault rifle she usually keeps around. She has added a scope to it to help increase her accuracy. She also has a sniper rifle slung around her shoulder that is mostly used at the start of any infiltration missions she may have. When she's finished with this she leaves it on the ground so she can move in and still be able to manuver during her operations.Personality: Vixie is very timid and sensative. She rarely socializes. However, once she gets to know someone, then she becomes much more outgoing and even sarcastic. She's also laid back and rather calm.Other info:Anything else you'd like to add. Vixie was born on Fichina a few years before the Lylat Wars tore through the planet. Her mother was a stay at home mom and cared for Vixie during her first few years. Unfortunately, she died of an illness shortly before Venom's arrival. Her father was a top scientist in the Cornerian base on the planet. After the Venomian invasion he was paid a visit by Andross himself. He was instructed to build a bioweapon for the Venom army to use. Andross had him impliment a unique virus he created on Venom into his daughter, or Andross would see to it that she was killed. The virus was supposed to turn Vixie into a super soldier, obediant to Andross's every command and able to outperform even machines in terms of speed, strength and agility. Under the supervision of Andross's nephew, Andrew, Vixie's father did what he was commanded to do for fear of losing his daughter for good. When Andrew wasn't paying attention, he also injected a way to supress the virus. He did so to try to give Vixie a chance at having free will and being a normal fox.As time went on it was noted that Vixie did have superior agility and reflexes, but strength and speed were like that of average foxes. She also snapped back at Andross frequently, but was put in line rather quickly each time. During Starfox's liberation of Fichina Andross sent Star Wolf in to retreive Vixie and blow up the base. Vixie's father disappeared during the operation. Star Wolf failed in their mission and Vixie was placed under the care of General Pepper, who promptly enrolled her into a junior program for the Cornerian army. Her enhanced agility helped her secure a spot amongst the top students of her class. As soon as she turned 18 however, she took her ship and left. She left to get away from the strict lifestyle that the Cornerian military had given her. She decided to use her training to pursue a career in bounty hunting and mercenary work.I'll update this as time goes on with more information. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shaper Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 Another super soldier?A lot went into this one so I'll give you some credit for the back story. Nice work Vixie, have fun with the role playing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arashikage Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 Nice character, she'd get along with Kage great! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Vixie Darkmatter Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 Another super soldier?A lot went into this one so I'll give you some credit for the back story. Nice work Vixie, have fun with the role playing.I tried to create a flawed super soldier. I must of failed. Oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shaper Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 I tried to create a flawed super soldier. I must of failed. Oh well.No she is powerful but not too powerful. If she was telepathic (like most vixens for -some- reason) and had vast strength then she'd be a major threat. But she has a good balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 The personality is that of most, and you have quite a nice little backstory. =] I tried to create a flawed super soldier. I must of failed. Oh well.I can see that you tried, but I am not seeing the flaws. I see the average strength as a normal fox for her age, but that isn't really a "flaw". A flaw would be like, She has a pendant she wears around her neck that was one of someone close; If that gets lost, or stolen, she zones out and is just unable to focus from the depression after it. Or a simple addiction, or something along those lines. Could even be medical issues.So not failed. Just a tad more work if anything. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arashikage Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 Well I think you did a bang up job, I mean, the weaknesses are there, you could call the average strength a weakness because she's not as strong as a super soldier, so I mean, it is technically a flaw, a flaw in the serum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 Well I think you did a bang up job, I mean, the weaknesses are there, you could call the average strength a weakness because she's not as strong as a super soldier, so I mean, it is technically a flaw, a flaw in the serumA flaw in the serum, but not in overall character. I was pertaining to that, because if you look at her character, it shows not many, if any negatives.Although, I should state now, that is not always a bad thing. In your case, it seems perfectly fine, But if it were to go as is, and get even more tougher somehow, as Emp suggested getting Telepathy would push it over, it would make it go into the category of over powered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vixie Darkmatter Posted December 30, 2010 Author Share Posted December 30, 2010 I'm currently working on some weaknesses before I get into any rps. Thank you for your input. Telepathy seems to be quite common since Krystal's creation, and telepathy with such agility would be way beyond what I hoped to accomplish. I didn't intend to make her sound like she could dodge bullets, she is able to outmanuver most opponents on foot was the feeling I was trying to create. I suppose I should also say that I do have some additional flaws/weaknesses in mind, but I'm struggling to put them into words. As soon as I figure out how to say what I'm trying to say I can update that part of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shaper Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 I'm currently working on some weaknesses before I get into any rps. Thank you for your input. Telepathy seems to be quite common since Krystal's creation, and telepathy with such agility would be way beyond what I hoped to accomplish. I didn't intend to make her sound like she could dodge bullets, she is able to outmanuver most opponents on foot was the feeling I was trying to create. I suppose I should also say that I do have some additional flaws/weaknesses in mind, but I'm struggling to put them into words. As soon as I figure out how to say what I'm trying to say I can update that part of it.Here's a weakness. Getting shot in the head, another one being lit on fire. One more? Falling from a very high height. Basically anything that can kill someone instantly is a weakness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 Here's a weakness. Getting shot in the head, another one being lit on fire. One more? Falling from a very high height. Basically anything that can kill someone instantly is a weakness.She is speaking of weaknesses that most normal people don't face. Those are common amongst all characters, and if one were to not kill a character, it would be instantly counted as a strong suit. Things like those are weaknesses, but since they are shared amongst all, they are consider normal.I suppose I should also say that I do have some additional flaws/weaknesses in mind, but I'm struggling to put them into words. As soon as I figure out how to say what I'm trying to say I can update that part of it.If you can give the general idea, I know for myself knowing many psychology terms, and terms used for gaming in D&D and such could help with that. If you wanna post something, or PM me, I bet it wouldn't be too hard to put out, you know? =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arashikage Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 Or you could keep the godmodders at bay(Although I haven't seen too too much of it recently here) and not post your weaknesses, just keep them in your head and remember them so as not to let people know too much, y'know? Nick can attest to that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kursed Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 Here's a weakness. Getting shot in the head, another one being lit on fire. One more? Falling from a very high height. Basically anything that can kill someone instantly is a weakness.those are more like obvious things than weaknesses and telepathy comes with a weakness that only usually other telepaths or mad scientist can exploit ,but theres also others which i won't metion because the last time I mentioned a weakness everyone was all over it.Weaknesses are like how Fire pokemon are weak to water attacks and such basicly something that will weaken your character/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 Or you could keep the godmodders at bay(Although I haven't seen too too much of it recently here) and not post your weaknesses, just keep them in your head and remember them so as not to let people know too much, y'know? Nick can attest to that.*Long long sigh* Yeah.... You know, that is a good idea in its self, and I agree with it in most cases. I am going to suggest putting them though. I myself put weaknesses down, and deal quite often, if not on forums, with people messing with my weaknesses. It supports the idea of being better role players, and not needing to drop yourself so low as to that.So I will keep that suggestion there, but it is not necessary. Whatever you are comfortable with. [Plus, if people are abusing them, that is when you tell them to back off, or deal with them appropriately. We don't want God Modders in the RP section.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shaper Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 Are weaknesses terribly necessary in a character? It's not like anyone ever dies in role playing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arashikage Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 Beg to differ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 Are weaknesses terribly necessary in a character? It's not like anyone ever dies in role playing.Well, no. It is not needed. But it makes for a much more colorful character, giving them more background and more realistic-ness; The ideals that Role Playing follow usually.And I never meant to give that impression, if I did, that it is necessary. I started commenting because she said she meant to make a flawed character, so I just chimed in to simply help. No weaknesses are needed.You can have OP characters, and that is fine and dandy. You just need to find someone who will allow it in an RP, and you are good. Give it more character and thought, sometimes add a small weakness, and they instantly are a lot more acceptable than they were before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vulvokunvrii Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 cool character Vixie! :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ballisticwaffles Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 weaknesses give you more to work with in a charecter. say you are weak against, oh i dunno, monkeys. then you can go on to describe several factors that lead to the weakness whcih leaves your charecter not only more believable, but more defined in the world. my example is a bad one, but you ,hopefully, can see what i mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vixie Darkmatter Posted January 4, 2011 Author Share Posted January 4, 2011 I updated a few things, I put in some equipment that Vixie commonly uses, as well as adding in a couple of cons about her. I've also deleted a couple of skills in an attempt to balance her out more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fluxy Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Short attention spanHeh, she and Ryn should get along together juuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuust fine. Lol Either way, looks like a character with more, well, character. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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