Guest Erokuso Posted May 18, 2006 Share Posted May 18, 2006 Hello. Im Erokuso and I host my webbsite known as Trodidox. Im also making sprite comics which consist of my own characters in a world of Video games. (inspired from Captain N) comic is here. http://www.sveps.org/~sveps1/Comics/FoxMcCloud/index.htm this is the webbsite (that previous page lacks home button) http://www.sveps.org/~sveps1/ I have 2 series going which one of is the main story and the second one is a spinnoff story which usually features of a known character. The 2nd part features Fox as a Special guest together with Wolf and the rest of the StarWolf ships (Only Wolf's face is shown) and a crashed down Arwing. First I must note that I made this a year ago and SF: Assault wasnt released yet so StarWolf still has Pigma and Andrew with them. There also wasnt any suitable sprites of Fox and I always felth unconfoble taking edited sprites made by somebody, so I made my own look of Fox (please dont flame me for that) of a combined Megaman and Rush. I made him wear his StarFox Adventures attire. There may be typhos too but I can assure you my english has gone alot more better. I just felt to show my work to real StarFox Fans Dont take me wrong, I like Fox McCloud and the whole StarFox series. And I like to play as Fox in SSB Melee and SF: Assault is really good game. But Mario and Zelda comes first in my fav list (sorry) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeWalker Posted May 18, 2006 Share Posted May 18, 2006 It's not terribly interesting. I really suggest you get a spellchecker or beta reader who can proofread your work before you post it online. Making a comic, it's just a really good idea to have your writing be top-notch, or else it brings the whole thing apart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Erokuso Posted May 18, 2006 Share Posted May 18, 2006 Yeah, I know what you mean. To be honest I think so too that this part has flaws. I was tired to the thought that I had a 5 month long brake from comics so I made it too hastly. My friend suggested Fox, So I made him being featured this one. I just wanted to put a new comic asap. Then I had a new brake for 10 months. Well... what done is done and this is now a part of the lore Im creating. If you read my other comics you would probly see that my latest comics are far better and have less typhos. Im keeping those stupid mistakes at bay better now days. This for example. http://www.sveps.org/~sveps1/Comics/Innocence/index.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Fox Posted May 19, 2006 Share Posted May 19, 2006 bad spelling champ, right here... I know what you mean. type what you whant in word/ correl and it will fix said spelling errors for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DZComposer Posted May 19, 2006 Share Posted May 19, 2006 bad spelling champ, right here... I know what you mean. type what you whant in word/ correl and it will fix said spelling errors for you. I find it funny when someone points out others' spelling errors and then misspells simple words like "want" and "Corel" in the process of telling someone else that they can't spell. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Erokuso Posted May 21, 2006 Share Posted May 21, 2006 Okay I got little confused now, I know what you mean. Whats wrong with this? I don't see anything wrong with that (be easy on me, I am a gringo after all) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Fox Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 I find it funny when someone points out others' spelling errors and then misspells simple words like "want" and "Corel" in the process of telling someone else that they can't spell. OMG............I want to melt into the floor now....... man just tryin to be supportive, and dig out my freakin dictionary( i KNOW IT IS SPELLED WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Erokuso Posted May 23, 2006 Share Posted May 23, 2006 And I do appreciate your notice but I just could'nt see the wrong in it. Anyway. Could we get back to the topic about my comics. I admit that I screw it up with Fox's comic and trying to avoid doing the same mistake again. Who knows maybe in the future I have Wolf or Falco featured. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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