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Clips from Tron Legacy to Legacy by The Gone Jackals. Critiques are welcome.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vOzMIHJBnmU

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Meh. It didn't look like you used much. Overall, you used 2 scenes. Plus, the music, I feel, didn't really fit with the whole cybernetic atmosphere.

So it's a meh at best for me.

Protips

--Use a lot of short clips rather than a big scene.

--Use some better fitting music

--Put some more effort into it.

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Tron made probabily no sence to the young viewers since they never saw Tron: the original. I would look around and the Guys over 40 would be in "Aww" and the kids younger than 10 would be like "WTF"

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Meh. It didn't look like you used much. Overall, you used 2 scenes. Plus, the music, I feel, didn't really fit with the whole cybernetic atmosphere.

So it's a meh at best for me.

Protips

--Use a lot of short clips rather than a big scene.

--Use some better fitting music

--Put some more effort into it.

^ That.

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Those were the scenes I felt best went with the music. The music fits perfectly with the scenes I used, because it gives the idea of TRON's dystopian setting.

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Those were the scenes I felt best went with the music. The music fits perfectly with the scenes I used, because it gives the idea of TRON's dystopian setting.

Wait? The scenes went with the music? The music went with the scenes?

But it still doesn't look like much effort is put into it. You used just 2 scenes. People want to see a music video, not just parts of a movie put together. This is what I mean when I say use short clips rather than whole scenes. When I see a cybernetic atmosphere with lightcycles, glowing suits and data discs, I don't think electric guitars with reverb and distortion and drums with a lot of decay. This is what I mean when I say, "Use better fitting music."

I hope you can learn something from this advice.

If you want, I can link you to one of my AMV's to help ya

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No thanks. I don't accept advice from members with Anonymous in their names. :P

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No thanks. I don't accept advice from members with Anonymous in their names. :P

I'm not sure if you're trying to be funny or just being a dick? I'm at a crossroads :?

:P

Didn't Xort and User already get on to you for this sort of thing? I would hate to see you get banned for something as trivial as this.

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I'm just trying to be funny.

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