kkstarfox Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 (edited) I just picked up a novel i started writing a year, or half a year ago, again. I wrote another chapter for it and noticed how much better my skill at writing has gotten. Anyways, i may enjoy writing it and think it is a beautifully written story but i need a second opinion. So i will attach the 3 chapters i wrote a total of 26 pages. If you enjoy it let me know if you did not let me know. Critiques are more then welcome, they are encouraged. The only way to grow is to right what you have done wrong and learn from it. All characters, plotlines, and the general story are copyright and created by me. Any connection or likeness to real people is purely coincidental and created from the deranged conscious of me, the writer. Enjoy!Chapter Zero.rtf Edited July 22, 2015 by kkstarfox Reasons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vulvokunvrii Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 I'll give it a read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkstarfox Posted July 1, 2011 Author Share Posted July 1, 2011 Sweet! hope you arent disappointed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vulvokunvrii Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Wow. Just ow...that was the most amazing thing i have read in a long time! Very awesome novel so far, keep it up buddy! :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkstarfox Posted July 1, 2011 Author Share Posted July 1, 2011 Yes well it is a bit vague in places so far, but as the story progresses questions will be answered, and secrets uncovered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vulvokunvrii Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Sweet :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkstarfox Posted July 2, 2011 Author Share Posted July 2, 2011 Vlads accent didn't bother you eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vulvokunvrii Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 lol nope, you have no idea how obsessed i used to be with Russia. I actually read the story outload and did a voice for him. Its was great ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tailsz Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Russians: W = Vs. XD I read the story and it was amazing. Simply amazing. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkstarfox Posted July 2, 2011 Author Share Posted July 2, 2011 Chapter 3 should be done later today possibley tomorrow. We will see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kkstarfox Posted August 5, 2011 Author Share Posted August 5, 2011 (edited) I must apologize for the lack of updates, and a double post, but I imagine ill have the next chapter posted soon Fix'd: Here are another additional 10 pages. I may or may not add more to this chapter, or I may take my train of thought further into another chapter... Any ways enjoy! Edited July 22, 2015 by kkstarfox I no longer want my story out in the open Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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