Guest Victor Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 Chapter 1: The Start The Animalia Region, a beautiful region in the galaxy where anthropomorphic animals live. Divided into systems, each civilization has reached various eras where science,technology, philosphy has reached into their highest levels. The systems are Lylat, Lyka, Vulpica, and Birdka. But our story takes place in Birdka and Lylat where a new threat has risen from the Birdka System, the Jay Empire: a race of advanced blue jays and their allies are planning to conquer the entire galaxy since they control half the Birdka System, while the Robin Goverment: A race of robins and other birds with more advanced technolgy have kept the peace of the System for a long time and control the other half of the System. The Jay Empire's hunger for power started. Reported attacks have been registered through the System, as the Jays have sent their fleets of plasma powered Leviathan-Class Battleships to search for systems to take over. Their search ended when the ships found the Lylat System, a peaceful System . The Jay's have planned an invasion for the conquest of Lylat on their hands. Who will win? Time will tell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeWalker Posted July 15, 2006 Share Posted July 15, 2006 Can I just say your naming system is atrociously unimaginative? Not that it's that big a deal, I suppose. It would be nice if this introduction were given through the eyes of a character, instead of some nebulous narrator telling us about entire systems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black-Cat Posted July 15, 2006 Share Posted July 15, 2006 That didn't give us anything, and the robin and Jay thing was really obvious, what I don't get is why did you tell us this and why didn't you tell it from a characters view or from anything else, this sound slike a usical play or soemthing along those lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zicka Posted July 15, 2006 Share Posted July 15, 2006 I almost thought it was an introduction to a Role-play. ... Almost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Victor Posted July 15, 2006 Share Posted July 15, 2006 Chapter 2: Invasion The Battleships open their hangars and the pilots boarded which were Blue Jays dressed in pilot cloting, board their fighters, a ship with a triangular fuselage, in the Jay Language: Delta. The fighters had wings with cresent moons, from the tip of the wing were deadly Plasma Machine Guns. On the bridge the captain was ready to lauch his attack force to conquer the main capital Corneria City. " All ships, LAUNCH ALL FIGHTERS.NOW!" The Jay captain yelled as the lift locks were released and the fighters launched, the back of the wings was glowing red, it was a powerful Gravity Disfusser. The name of the fighters of the Jay Empire were called Jaysters. Powerful ships that were a match to the Arwing and the Wolfen in both speed and weaponry. From a base in Katoti Island, radar detected a fleet of 600 UF ( Unknown Fighters) Cornerian Bases launched their fighters to intercept them. It was a 9:00 A.M and the attack against the Jaysters started. " Beta Fleet: Intercept enemy fighter squads. Omega Fleet: Provide backup fire." A squad leader said. 200 fighters left the group and headed toward the east, the direction of the Cornerian Fighters. The 400 Jaysters headed toward Corneria City. The Cornerian Pilots were losing many men a Jayster was behind a Corneria Fighter, the Jayster pilot was waiting to fire, his target was on his sight and a strange language appeared on the targeting computer which read Yudiuaj Om " Locked On" The Jayster pilot presses the trigger on his control stick and fires the plasma machine guns, destroying the Cornerian Fighter. " These guys are pathetic if you ask me, their technology must be a cheap one. " A Blue Jay pilot said as he shot down more Cornerian Fighters. Corneria City was now in chaos and flames, as the 400 Jaysters attack the ground. 40 Jaysters land and sprout three legs from their belly and fire at the Cornerian Citizens. The Cornerians were running away, trying not to get hit by the plasma, three got hit and died, while hundreds were badly hurt. Cornerian Troops were doing their best, firing their Gatling Guns. " How do you like this?" A Dog Trooper yelled as he fires his Gatling Gun at the walking ship. The shots seem not to damage the Jayster. " Its not working, were is the heavy infantry?" Another Dog Soldier yelled, the Jayster was ready to fire until a mysterious person, a Antropomorphic Robin wearing a militay jumpsuit and red boots, green eyes and a tough looks, he wielded a Robin Goverment Armor Piercing Armor, came from the sky, thousands of feet of free fall, he lands on the walking Jayster and aims for the pit. BANG! The robin then jumps off as the Jayster started to become inactive, the streets were now full of Jaysters as they started to activate their legs. In space, the Beltino Orbital Gate opens its gate and the new Great Fox comes out, entering Cornerian Space. " What the heck is happening down there?" Peppy asked. They did not know what was happening on the planet. " Enemy fighter fleet attacking Cornerian City. Design is that of the Jay Empire of the Birdka System." ROB informed. " THE WHAT?" Falco yelled. "Warning! Warning! Fleet of 200 enemy fighters heading this way. Jaysters that were recently launched had a new objective: Destroy the Oribital Gate and the Great Fox together. " TO BATTLE!" a Jay pilot yelled as he fired his Plasma Machine Guns at the Great Fox. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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