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What would you like to see?  

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  1. 1. How would you like the plot of Star Fox - Marauder II to proceed?

    • Escape & Evasion - Fox and Kyle get drawn into an uncharted facility on a desolate, unnamed, and uncharted world, where they meet the only enemy dragon-shifters fear.
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    • Krystal reveals to Fox she is pregnant with Kyle's child, while Fara likewise revelas to Kyle that she is pregnant with Fox's child, both fearing what it could mean should this come to light. Fara is kidnapped, and Fox risks everything to save...
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    • Same scenario as #1, but Fox has a run-in with the spirit of his father, who reveals to Fox that Kyle is his brother, and sets in motion Fox's rise to power as a dragon-shifter.
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    • Kyle, Fox, Fara and Krystal are drawn to Titania, to an isolated town in the mountains. A Xenomorph outbreak occurs, and the team must team up with a Dishonored Yaut'ja Hunter to escape with their lives.
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    • Razuul is murdered, and Kyle goes on a rampage to find who murdered his age-old friend. Meanwhile, Fox and Krystal have to ascertain a motive for this, and act before Kyle is forever lost in his own anger and rage.
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Before I go on, first, read what you can of Star Fox: Marauder. Then, read the spoiler:

Prologue

With the initial preparations out of the way, Star Fox celebrated it’s latest victory. During the celebration, Kyle wandered away from the group to stare into the Saurian moonlit sky. Krystal noticed, and walked over to him.

“Baby, is everything alright?†she asked.

“I’m fine, sweetheart,†Kyle responded. “Just thinking past all this.â€

“What do you mean?†Krystal inquired.

Kyle sighed. “This isn’t the end, you know – our adventures don’t end here,†Kyle explained. “There will be other threats like Tondam – others who will want to destroy us.â€

“Then we will face them as we always have,†Krystal said softly. “I’d rather face them with you than without you.â€

“I know,†Kyle murmured. “As long as I have you, I will never--â€

Krystal grabbed Kyle’s muzzle and silenced him. With a smile, she asked, “Anyone ever tell you you talk too much?â€

Kyle chuckled, leaning over and meeting Krystal’s lips with his own. They kissed, the Dragon-shifter husband and the Cerinian wife, as the Star Fox Team rejoiced...

… That was three years ago. Kyle’s powers, after marrying Krystal, calming his rage and coming to terms with his troubled past, have expanded. The bond between them was strong – when one of them grew in power, so did the other. Like Fox and Fara, they loved each other with a passion few could understand.

The dark lord known as Makron was executed months ago, much to the relief of Kyle. With no new threat presenting itself, Star Fox went on shore leave to Corneria. In an odd twist of fate, Kyle received two lightsabers in the mail, sender unknown, leaving only a note that read, “These belonged to me before my life was stolen – it seems fitting that, since you are my only other, they be given to you.â€

Though confused at the message, Kyle went on with the vacation with his wife. Little did he realize, dark forces gather on the horizon. Old hatreds still linger, old mysteries remain unsolved, and a new enemy will rise against the galaxy to carry on the ancient battle of good and evil...

Now, I've hit a bit of writer's block, and I was wondering what you, the SF-O community, would like to see. If you have other ideas that differ from what choices I've given, please, speak them.

And if this is the wrong area for a poll like this, forgive me.

--Star_Dragon

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Sorry for double-posting, but...

... I see two votes. Now I'd like to hear the reasoning behind them.

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I chose the third option for the simple reason that I find it a bit more interesting than the others. Option one would definitely work with no problems, but there isn't much substance there; it seems a bit standard. Option two is an absolute bombshell to drop; it is a bit to needy for controversy in my opinion. Options four and five I assume would also work, but I'd need to have more bits of the story to gauge whether it would fit (i.e. were Xenomorphs ever mentioned or are they just pulled out of the blue? Would option five be changing the focus of the story too much?).

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Ah. And you have no probs with Fox being the brother of a dragon-shifter, and (eventually) becoming a dragon-shifter himself?

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I invite you to share ina colaberation beetween Arashikage and myself. Note that while your ideas can have the potential to be used, that does not guarentee that you will have control over where the story goes.

Aslo note that i voted for number 4 simply because it isnt the run of the mill Dragon-whatever they are called and of coarse the Alien.

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Um... I'm shocked. I really am. After the incident between Arashikage and I, I would think he wanted nothing to do with me.

But that's for another topic, and so is this... "Collaboration." No offense, but it's off-topic here. I am somewhat interested in this collaboration, but I must be cautious. Please, snd me the details via PM.

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i just did.

The other stories seem really far fetched, to get back on topic. Turning Fox into an Anthro/Dragon/biggerdragon Tribrid the most egregrious.

The first one is dependant on the audiance Seeing the "Only thing they fear" As a viable threat, rather a Stock mysterious shadow in the fore ground.

The second one assumes that When females get Teh Preggorz that they immediatly try and hide it due to Shame/Fear/Hormones.

The fifth one takes a basic emotion and turns it into some sort of Green eyed monster.

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Um... I'm shocked. I really am. After the incident between Arashikage and I, I would think he wanted nothing to do with me.

I never said that, actually in that PM I told you we all could help you. I don't want nothing to do with you.

Before I get too off topic, I chose the last one, it seems the most feasible option.

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Hnh. Four votes on separate plots. Damn.

Care to explain your reasons for choosing the last option? It seems feasible to you, in what way?

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That's what I was hoping to find out.

Okay, two votes for scenario #3 - I have crazyfooinc's reasons, what are yours, Zack?

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really the same thing, #2 is interesting but a major bombshell and most probably wouldn't like that, #4 and #5 would be ok but would (like CrazyFooinc said) would need more explanation and would stray a bit from the main story line, #1 it would be the seconded one I would go with it's typical but good to go with, #3 this one is the best in my opinion it is standard but with a surprise in it it's a small bombshell but in a good way.

any who that's my response :P

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Hnh... okay. Any other thoughts? Arashikage, you still haven't explained your reasons. Any thoughts?

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I chose the second because, that sounds like ... Woah.

:troll:

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... What?! You chose that? I'm f**king shocked. I never thought you, of all people, would...

... well, never mind. Care to explain why?

EDIT: Dammit, the votes are tied between scenario 2 and 3. Back to square one.

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Because I'm, at the moment, a Troll. Plus I would love to hear a story like THIS.

... What?! You chose that? I'm f**king shocked. I never thought you, of all people, would...

... Really?

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@HE19: Yeah.

@"User": ...

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... Now I'm completely taken aback. I have 3 votes for option 2. User, what are your reasons?

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My reasoning is that it gives Krystal and co. the most "interesting" scenario which they have to deal with. It also has a high probability of drama.

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Ah. The votes for scenario 2 I didn't expect - I was honestly expecting out-and-out rebellion along the lines of "WTF? Why the hell would you do that?!" to such a choice. But no matter.

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Ah. The votes for scenario 2 I didn't expect - I was honestly expecting out-and-out rebellion along the lines of "WTF? Why the hell would you do that?!" to such a choice. But no matter.

You need to remember who's voting in these polls. Anything like this that involves Krystal in some bizarre situations is likely to receive the most votes I'd think.

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... and you don't have probs with Krystal being PREGNANT? With the child of a DRAGON-SHIFTER, no less?

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... and you don't have probs with Krystal being PREGNANT? With the child of a DRAGON-SHIFTER, no less?

I reiterate what I said earlier. :-)

(and yes I have yet to read the entire story but that most likely wouldn't change my mind)

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Uh... okay.

I'm gonna have a tough time with this one...

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I'm getting the feeling you don't want anyone to chose option #2.

Anyway I picked #3. Kind of generic, but it's got good fan potential without being overly dramatic.

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