Star Fox Return of Andross Chaper 1 Part 1

[Fluxy]

Soooooooooooooooooo off topic of a thread. Everyone's tits need to be calmed, Good ladies and gentlemens.

[Drasiana]

I honestly probably wouldn't care if you weren't constantly bringing it up. The only reason I brought it up again was when you started playing the victim because of an actually rather civil conversation (I hesitate to even call anything prior to your responses here an "argument") when I've actually been the furthest from cruel than almost everyone else in this topic thus far, and to an extent was also trying to help. My disagreement with you was only around the fact that it seemed like you were trying to discourage Sherbert from writing scripts because "they have no audience", which is interesting looking at that now because you definitely seem to put audience on the highest of all importances to a writer rather than the act of writing itself.

This is where I disagreed with you the most. In fact, I agreed that lots of people are not interested in reading scripts. I agreed that many scripts can be boring or technical. You're acting as if I did to you what Xort did to Sherbert's fanfiction, which I did not do in any way shape or form. You can not possibly accuse me of jumping to conclusions here without calling the kettle black in the most on-the-nose manner imaginable.

The majority of my comments were mostly responses to Xort. And I think Xort is pretty cool guy; he admitted to not knowing much about scripts so I told him a bit about it because, who would think, I know a thing or two about it.

fake edit: uno write a fanfic about it but in script form

real edit: flux my tits are pretty calm being that i'm basically just chilling in bed all "wat" at this catastrophic reaction to me talking about something i like and like encouraging others to do

[unoservix]

fake edit: uno write a fanfic about it but in script form

okay

tehr was 1ce a guy was called chaos_leader. he rote starfac fanfic an bugged every1 abot it. but 1 day King of Starfac Fafnic Seckshun died and chaos_leader became king and monkey man held him up in teh sky an circule of life playd and it was happy.

chaos: AZ KING OF STARFAC FANFCI EVERYPONYEVERYONE MUST REED MAI FANFIC!!!1!1!11!!1!1!!

ppl: but we dun wanna

chaos: BUT ITZ TEH BEST!1!11!!21!

ppl: well um okay sure whatever *pretends to read*

so tihs went on 4eva and chaos was king of starfac fanfic but he was sad and angry bcuz no one read his fanfic. but littl did he no it would all chaeng!

oen day ther wuz a gurl naemd Drasina Sapphire Gemstone Dark'ness Cullen who was a gurl an a riter n stuf an she lievd in magical kingdom of EquestriaVancoovur

Darsina went on teh interbutts 1 day 2 throw onions abut starfac at ppl bc she was ful of mad an angree.

Draz: OMG U PPL R ALL STOOPD N STUFF I HAET U ALL RAWR *bites*

Dranisa was meen to starfac ppl bcuz she was mean an gurl but then she saw chaos leader who wuz kingo f starfac faficn

Dars: RAWR I AM RITER N I NO STUF N U DONT

chaos: RAWRWARA NO I DO LITEZ I NO STUF 2 READ MAI FANFIC

Dras: NO U STOOPD N BUTHUTR

chaos: BAWWWW DRAS CALLED ME BUTTHUT

Dras: U GAIZ R ALL STOOPD

dras flips table

chaos: OMG Y U B SO MEEN REALITY IS SUBJECTIVE

Dras: NO U DUM LOLOLOLOL

tihs went on for another 10 min! but somethin wuz happnin 2 darz n chaos tee hee ^_~

chaos: omg drasuna u argu so gud

Drasu: tee hee i am gurl

dras n chaos blink eyes at each otha liek romantik

chaos: do u wanna read mai fanfic

Dras: but ur fanfic sux dude

chaos: dats not wut i mean >

Dras: o tee hee <3

n tehy maed 5 millon babys n lievd happy evr after

~~~~~TEH END~~~~~~~

[CrypticQuery]

[Drasiana]

this is how you do it, people

alternate ending: LIKE DIS IF U CRYED EVERY TIME

[chaos_Leader]

Ha! I lol'd.

This forum drama, winner of the trollface seal of approval , has been brought to you by chaos_Leader and Drasiana, with script by unoservix. Thank you for coming, we hope to see all attend another performance soon... yeah...

But really, I think we can all agree this was just a big ol' foul-up. Water under the bridge huh?

[TCPeppyTc]

Hmmmm.... This was most entertaining. Yet I would like to know, was sherbertfizz just trolling us or is her fanfic just a roughdraft/ work in progress?

[CrypticQuery]

Hmmmm.... This was most entertaining. Yet I would like to know, was sherbertfizz just trolling us or is her fanfic just a roughdraft/ work in progress?

Based on other posts I am inclined to believe that this is considered a rough draft of an...interesting fanfiction, though I'm fairly certain the 'story' has wrapped itself up within a single post. O_o

[Drasiana]

I think she's just a hyperactive thirteen year old goofing around, most of us have had that phase

[sjrathbun812]

Wow... just... wow...

Ahem. Well, the one thing I can say is that peoples replies to the fanfiction were hilarious. The fanfiction itself was terrible beyond all words you can imagine. I almost feel sorry for him, (or her,) that wrote it and posted it here. When people look for fanfictions, they already know it's most likely not going to be great. But they want to see something that's at least legit.

That being said, think and actually write the story, before you post it. The more effort you put into it, the better it will be. In fact, it seems like all you did was think of things off the top of your head, mush it all together, and then tack it next to the other peoples threads. It looks more like something that you'd see in a text message from your friend for the hee hee haw haws.

On a side note, the main thing that made me even look at this was the title. It was the same I used when I was 11/12 when I was "making" a fan Starfox game. There is actually a post in my fan art topic that described a bit of it. Whether this was a coincidence or not, I do not know. I could honestly care less if you did take the name, for that matter. My question is: why?