Galactic Jaguar Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 Finally, I got the hang of Paintshop Pro 9 (what a pain...). And guess what my first successful (non-sketch pic). I thought it turned out pretty well for what I suspected. Check out my pic. Oh, and heres my DA page. If you like my work, I'm now taking requests for any stuff you want me to do. If you wanna talk to me about how I can improve and if you have any requests, why dont you give me an Instant Message on AIM of MSNM 'cause I dont really come on that often to SF-O any more. And, my last ocmment: Tailsrulz, If you ever read this, thanks for all the help you've given me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeWalker Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 HOW CAN SHE BREATHE? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galactic Jaguar Posted July 27, 2006 Author Share Posted July 27, 2006 Who knows...its just a pic...or it might be flexible armor (it wouldnt make a difference cause the armors already pretty unprotective, XD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeWalker Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 Well, one of the rules of something states that, the more revealing an outfit, the more protective it is. It's more about how her tits are smashed up into her neck. That could just be perspective, now that I look at it again, however. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galactic Jaguar Posted July 28, 2006 Author Share Posted July 28, 2006 I was trying to get it so its like someones looking up at her... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeWalker Posted July 28, 2006 Share Posted July 28, 2006 Yeah, that's what I thought. I'd say you didn't succeed completely; the perspective is only suggested. At least, that's how I took it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest redbirdfoxie Posted July 28, 2006 Share Posted July 28, 2006 nice pic =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galactic Jaguar Posted July 29, 2006 Author Share Posted July 29, 2006 Yeah' date=' that's what I thought. I'd say you didn't succeed completely; the perspective is only suggested. At least, that's how I took it.[/quote'] Why dont you tell me how I can change to make my other pics better (that was done 7 months ago. I just colored it a week ago)... Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeWalker Posted July 29, 2006 Share Posted July 29, 2006 Why dont you tell me how I can change to make my other pics better (that was done 7 months ago. I just colored it a week ago)... I'm sorry, but I really don't know anything about art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinity Posted July 29, 2006 Share Posted July 29, 2006 Hi I'm the resident critic. That's a nice pic there. I want to point out a few things though. If you're going to post stuff never, ever save as .JPEG or .GIF. it'll butcher the quality. .PNG for the win. First of all the perspecitve. Tailsrulz is very good at this and I see you've taking a liking to his style. If you want something to be looking up at your character the head should be smaller since we're talking perspective here. The legs should be a bit bigger too. The lines are indeed smooth, but they seem to be without order. They kinda look that they were all pushed on there. Always be picky about your lines. You blurred some of the lines too... you don't want to do that. Always set the lineart to multiply and make a new layer below it to fiddle with the colors. It looks like you just selected soem areas, so not every pixel is colored that should be. If you are coloring by the selection method try increasing the size of the selection by a pixel or two, it'll turn out better. The background looks all blurred and without order, try making it a little less blurry, but enough to consetrate on the character and to have the background add to them. Overblurring takes away from the character. I also think that sword (I forgot what it's called) should be a bit brighter too and reflect off of her suit more (since it's overall a bit shinier), as well. I know my way around GIMP, a little with Photoshop, but PSP I've never tried, so me being able to assist you will be a bit limited. I apologize if I come about a bit harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galactic Jaguar Posted July 30, 2006 Author Share Posted July 30, 2006 I apologize if I come about a bit harsh. It wasn't to harsh. Your a good critic. Thats what I wanted. Thanks. If you have anymore tips for me why don't you Instant Messege me? (If you have AIM or MSN) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zicka Posted July 30, 2006 Share Posted July 30, 2006 http://www.artcluster.com/whiteboard/tips/index.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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